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Aisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

amazing!😳now im waiting for part 3!!

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Laila Banu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

To keep your readers momentum, you need to update regularly - it is a suspense, fast moving and you will need to deliver quickly and keep the episodes long as he reader will get into it quickly and you need to keep them there long enough to keep them intrigued but still wanting more. Two paragraphs does not cut it for this type of FF.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Laila2009
To keep your readers momentum, you need to update regularly - it is a suspense, fast moving and you will need to deliver quickly and keep the episodes long as he reader will get into it quickly and you need to keep them there long enough to keep them intrigued but still wanting more. Two paragraphs does not cut it for this type of FF.

Oops, was this too short ? 😲

I actually thought it was long but hey, im glad you're advising me because i am quite new to this genre! Owing to exams, this is all i could manage for the day, but from Tuesday onwards, i'l be more regular and bring in longer updates😃

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Nida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Hey ...
That was fantastic !!!! :)

Ugh !!! I hate the way those men treat Zoya >_<
Ayan is tooo good but poor thing is helpless ...

Honestly, I know what Asad is doing is not at ALL right ...
But I feel bad for him as I'm sure that something have definitely transpired when he was young ... :|

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
That was fantastic !!!! :)

Ugh !!! I hate the way those men treat Zoya >_<
Ayan is tooo good but poor thing is helpless ...

Honestly, I know what Asad is doing is not at ALL right ...
But I feel bad for him as I'm sure that something have definitely transpired when he was young ... :|

Yes that part had to be like that :/

Like they say, bad becomes bad only due to their circumstances... :(

But hey im glad ure liking it😃

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youth_showsfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

hey

it was an amazing update

totally loved the way u have described their emotions

nd situations.

i am uite eager to see asya's face off

update super soon

nd thnx fr d pm

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@-ElmoFuj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: princeegoyal
That was truly beautiful! This seems to be a very dark, black and intense story so far and it capture my attention for sure! I'm really anxious to know how Asad's Ammi passed away and why Zoya is in such a position!- I also can't wait for the meeting! .hw she is gona help him to lower down his pain...& hw he approch her...

thnks 4 d PM...It was truly a great experience to read ur story... Update soon (:& do Pm me..

pari

Chapter Black, the title says it all! 😆

But dont worry, im not a sadist, it womt go on a route where you know the ff haunts u in ur dream or something like that! 😆

Thankyou so much for liking and commenting😳