SS:Ajmer mein Mangalpur!-LAST PART UPDATED pg-34!! - Page 14

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Gal, tabeez inspired you for the cliffys right? 🤣

Better update. or else i will erupt

Kya ankie di, aap toh poore SS ka inspiration ho! Credits nahi padhi thi kya?! Cliffy toh ek chotu sa hissa hai! (hope u didnt mind!). Update dkhte hain kab kiya jaye... 😉

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

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sch a tchy updt man!!!!!

asad realising oool his mistake tht tooo in order nt leaving a single 1!!! awiieee thtss sooo sweeet!!!

awwwsmmm!! awwwsmmm!!awwwsmmm!!!

man!!! u r amaaazn dea !!!

u rite amaaazingly well n deep lines!! hattts off!!!

luvllly updt!!!

I wanted it to b actllly ths way in d show!! alas!! v r nt gonna gt anyyythn lik ths!!!!

can u plzzz gv a part of ur brain 2 d CVs!!!😉

awww u stopped it hr!!😲😭

u dint stppd d part bt my heartbeat!!!!

man!! wts gonna b d news?????😲

plzzz plzzz continueee sooon!!

plzzz PM me!!!

tnkooo chooo vly much 4 D PM!!! tnkooo!!🤗

Inna bada review! O ji thank u ji thank u! Dil garden garden hui gawa!!!

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

I just saw your story and after reading the title itself, I ran to read it. Haahaa... I know I'm a crazy mangalpur fan🤪

And to tell the least, I'm already HOOKED to your BEAUTIFUL piece of work. AMAZING SWEETHEART❤️

Sorry I am not being able to leave a long comment. I'm on vacation to my dream city London and I don't know why but the network is very poor here

P.S. Have sent you a buddy request. Please accept it.

Love,

Diya

Diya you took out d time 2 read my painfuly long ss while on vacation to London and u leave a coment as well!!! 😃 What else cud have i asked for?! Thank you so so much!! 😃 and must i say u have to be a huge mangalpuri aatma as well! 😉

It was fantabulous 👏 you write so good.

Please continue soon.

lovely update dear…love z way each expression was described n ya thanks for z slap I remember I had told u for so :)

Cannot Believe it was an os! thot or was imagining d whole scenario!!! ur too good

😭you are really evil😡 why did you stop?😭 the perfect portrayal of emotions, perfect dialogues... and you ended it in a cliffy !!!😡😭😭😭 when are you gonna update next? pleas eupdate fast please please

I LOVED THIS UPDATE!!