SS:Ajmer mein Mangalpur!-LAST PART UPDATED pg-34!!

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Awesome SS

I'm loving it so much

Plz forgive me for the short comments.

I'm having exams.

Plz continue soon

I hope Zoe may be fine

You have scared me very badly yaar.

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nknaini

@nknaini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

yar thats too evil ending the chapter like that...bt luv ur story very much...pls update soon...waiting 4 it

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Plz update the next chapter soon!!!😉

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

wow...love they way u described the feelings of asad

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sahar

@...Smile...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

it is an amazing update and thanks for the pm.

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Absolutely amazing!!!!!!!! Please don't do anything to zoya!!!!!

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Amazing way of getting rid of tanveer! Loved this update! I hope Zoya is better ...but the last sentence scares me! Did she lose her memory or something??? Ohh man!! I hope not! ...wait I don't think so cause that would have to do with the brain ...and she was stabbed in the stomach...Ohh mayynnn! What happened?? Please update soon!!! I love it!

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Illow

@Illo

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Great Update!! 👏 👏 Main bata nai sakti ki main kiti khush hui jab us manhoos billi ko woh tappad mila, 😆 😆 and to top it all of doosra tappad bhi aya aur woh bhi Dilshaad se!! 😆 😆 I love tappado ki barish, especially jab sare Tannu Rani ko milrahi hai 😃😃😆

I was smiling so much while reading this!!😃😃

I loved that fact that Dilshaad exploded, slapped Tannu and then later forgetting all her hurt toke care of her kids. 😊 Gotta say that you've captioned Dilshaad perfectly!! 👏 👍🏼

May Tannu rot in jail and with that beautiful image in my head I move on to Asad..

For a person so smart he really is thick headed, he always has to send Zoya half way to the Afterlife before realizing her true worth!! Sure he got it into his head that she's perfect for him etc. etc. but even that had to be put in there by Dilshaad!! Dude you really need to get your act together cause sooner or later she'll actually end up dead and you'll be left once again debating with your self of how bad you've treated her..😡

Reading the end all I was thinking was SHE LIVES!! and then it ended with 😈 from your side and a 😭 from mine, Where's the next part, I want it ASAP!!! 😭 😭 😭

P.S. Oops I didn't realize how long this got.. 😳 😳 😳

Edited by Illo - 12 years ago

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Illow

@Illo

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Lolz you should put in something unexpected like don't be so happy, we saved Zoya but couldn't save the baby =P 😛 😛 😛

Pretending that something did happen during the bhang wali raat.. 😆😆😆

P.S. I know I my last comment was never ending but I just had to 😛 😛 😛

P.P.S Imagine the look on Asads face 😛 😛 😛

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Zaina

@CrazyForAshish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

superb Update...
Always enjoying reading ur FF.. Beautiful n well written...
Do continue it soon...
N hope our Zoya is fine.. Asad maiya run...Zoya need U...
Do plez continue it sooon yaar...