AsYa FF- You are the magic in Me

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hie! This FF, i had initially written on Arshi( Arnav and khushi) in the IPKKND Forum but couldn't complete it as
1. The show went off-air.
2. I lost interest.
3. I am the laziest person in the world. 😆

So M gonna write it on AsYa now.

This whole FF is dedicated to -Mrinalini- as she is the one who convinced me to complete this FF.

I have not copied anything from anywhere. Before anyone throws accusations, I would like to clarify that this FF is inspired by one of my favourite movies 'Jab We met' and will have some similar scenes.

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You are the magic in Me


"You don't mean anything to me
You mean everything to me..."

The blue part is from Asad's point of view.
The grey part is from Zoya's point of view.

Prologue

"Beginnings are usually scary
And endings are usually sad
But it's everything in between that
Makes it all worth living..."

~~~Asad~~~~
I moaned from the tapping sun-light against my face, wondering
how long I'd been sleeping.
The sunlight bathed my skin as I lay on my side. I wondered why there was no noise from the kitchen as it used to be. He didn't hear the usual chirpy "Good Morning" from her without which his morning felt incomplete. And then realisation struck me. I had myself asked her to leave. I had demeaned her. I had insulted her. I had hurt her. I shut my eyes in regret an the only thing I remember was her smile. With a guilty sigh , I looked towards the window. The bright spring sunlight cut the room in half. I could see dust dancing in the wall of light. I pushed the blanket away and got off my bed.
The house was all empty. It was me, just me.
No Ammi.
No Najma.
I was all alone.
Without her.
I hated her staying with him all these weeks.
But now that she had left, I realized that I never hated it.
I didn't love her. But I didn't hate her either. She was the only reason why I was alive...
"I am sorry Zoya",I whispered.


~~~Zoya~~~~

I opened my eyes, adjusting myself to the unusual setting around. I was back to where I had started. I was again sleeping on the same bench where she was, a month ago. And then I had met him. And I had fell in love with him.
"Asad",a shiver went down my spine as I uttered his name.
This was not what I had wanted from life.I had run away from my home, not for sleeping on a bench, not for crying for a man she barely knew.
I still was in front of the same railway station where she had seen him for the first time.
It all seemed like a dream now...which she longed to forget.


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Long comments Please! 😳 I am very selfish about that😆
Chappals and heels are also welcome!
Don't forget to criticize and put forward your views :)
Hope I didn't disappoint!
Muah!

For PMs- You will have to send a buddy request. I send PMs very late though as I am very lazy ( as mentioned earlier)😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yayyy meee!!!!

DANCING WITH JOY!!!

Thanks for the dedication Supriya! ❤️

Thank you so much for starting it on AsYa!

And you know... I don't have to tell you how much I love it!

Continue soon!

Love,
Mrina
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Suppu baby this sounds veryy interesting 😃

where are najma and ammi??
why was Zoe the only one with him??
why did Zoe leave her house??


Ohhh I have soo many questions 😆
when are you going to answer them

but seriously...a veryy gripping prologue babe
looking forward to it
👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Yayyy meee!!!!


DANCING WITH JOY!!!

Thanks for the dedication Supriya! ❤️

Thank you so much for starting it on AsYa!

And you know... I don't have to tell you how much I love it!

Continue soon!

Love,
Mrina


Thank You deariee! If not for you.. i would not have started this 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Eee !! You're completing it !! Yesss !! AND I made it to the first page *mighty proud* 😎
You know, main tennu pooochne wali thi about all those FFs you left hanging, you lazy daayan :P
Koi ni, ye khatam kar le, I'll nag you about the rest after my exams :P

SUNN !! I LOVE it ! Aur isko JALDI update karna !! DARE you leave it !
Even if some IDIOTS go on with Ayaan Zoya track, samjhi ?
Is baar tune hume latakte chhoda na, to dekh lio !

Aur sunna 😆
Zara padh ke post kara kar :P
Bichaare readers ko kaanphooj karti hai daayan ! 😲
Kabhi I kabhi he kabhi I kabhi she ? Decide kar be konse person me likh ri hai ?
1st, 2nd ke 3rd ? Vo 3rn in 1st likh - She, but her feelings...if you know what I mean 😆

Yours terrifyingly,
Chudail 😳


P.S. I STILL love it :P

Edited by Monu_Deewani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome plzz do update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice beginning!! Please do continue soon and please do pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: giee

Suppu baby this sounds veryy interesting 😃

where are najma and ammi??
why was Zoe the only one with him??
why did Zoe leave her house??


Ohhh I have soo many questions 😆
when are you going to answer them

but seriously...a veryy gripping prologue babe
looking forward to it
👍🏼


Thank you giee
😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it...update soon..its seems like they are separated...bt why?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i liked it tooo much
really intrigued to see what happens next
although i hadn't previously read it but it sounds promising
hope it maakes out gr8 please accept my buddu request and
pm when u update

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