AsYa FF: Together at last [part 12 updated+note] - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
I had read this earlier but only got time to comment now

BEAUTIFUL<3 i loved itt! very well written continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

awww she's a good mother- it's tough

great update- more please?
thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
absolutely loved this update.. 👏
the way the story flows and the parts fit in together perfectly.. 👍🏼
ahh I'm just so in love with the mother&daughter bonding..
Imaan&Asad scenes always make me smile 😆
I loved your idea of having the "LOVE" tattoo separately on their wrists 😳.. really creative & now the suspense is finally out of my mind as I can sense that Asad is little Zaara's dad .. 🥳
feeling sorry for Zoya because she has to go through so much.. 😔
great part.. continue soon 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
very nice update... Loving zaara.. Do continue it soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Superb. Loved the part of tattoo. It's a mystery to be solved of how the tattoo ended up or they ended up together without their knowledge or vice versa. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Please post the next chapter soon.

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Request. Please kindly accept and sent me the pm when this ff is updated. 😊

Thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Wrote Part 3

Enjoy, happy reading :)

Part 3:

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Zoya's car stopped in front of Zaara's school, there were other children too, either being dropped off the the yellow cheese bus or their parents. Teachers lined up kids, bringing them inside.

Both Zaara and Zoya stepped out and Zoya crouched to her level.

Zoya pushed back a few a hairs which got in Zaara's face

"Good luck, and be a good girl okay?" Zoya asked, putting Zaara's backpack in her hands

"Okay mommy." Zaara chirped and kissed Zoya on the cheek, and ran off seeing a friend.

Zoya waved until she was taken inside.

Zoya got back into her car and headed to the office

………………….

Asad and Imaan stood in Starbucks, in line ready to order their coffee

"Dude, that babe is definitely checking you out." Imaan whispered

Asad slowly turned his head, to find a blond chick, dressed in a knee length summer dress, sandals and other girly stuff; purse, make up, etc. staring back at him

She sat in one of the tables, with a note book in her hand, chewing a gum and couple of times popped some bubbles.

The girl passed him a huge grin, twirling the pen in her fingers.

Afew second later, she stood up, and started making her way towards them

"Umm, excuse me…"

Imaan and Asad shared a look

"Yes.." Asad replied

"I couldn't help but notice, well this may sound weird but you are really cute.." She said shyly

Asad's raised his eyebrows, while Imaan started coughing

"Told you.." he mumbled, only so Asad could hear it

"Well, umm.." He couldn't find the words to reply

"Do you have a girlfriend… if you do I'm terribly sorry for bothering you"

"Well actually, I'm married…." Imaan stood looking at him, this time not smiling, while the girl held a sorry face.

"Oh sorry then, pretend you never heard this…" She started walking back as if nothing had happened

They watched as she gathered her stuff

"Bye then" She said smiling at them

She walked out, leaving them confused

Asad and Imaan got their coffee's and also headed for the door

"Wow, that was a too positive reaction on getting rejected" Imaan said as he opened the tab of the coffee cup cover

"Well everyone's not like you Imaan" Asad replied

Imaan's smile faded and he held a serious expression and stopped walking, seeing this Asad stopped too

"You're married?"

Asad looked around

"Imaan we soke about this before and you know who I'm married to, yet you always ask, my answer isn't gonna change on why and what happened, so please don't bring this topic up again…" He started waling again

Imaan caught up a little later

"Wait, so is Khala and Najma talking to you again?" Asad gave him a sorrowful look and shook his head

"Well Najma has been taking to me…alittle" He took a sip of his coffee

Asad smiled again, "Anyways, let's go somewhere today, something that'll bring back college memories"

Imaan smile too "Fine, let's go"

Both crossed the road.

………………….

Zoya entered the office, her fellow colleagues, whished her Good Moring and she shared hugs with a couple.

She saw Deb also there, in front of the printer

"Sup Deb…" She said

Deb turned

"Oh hey.." They shared a hug

"Good morning babes" Deb said and she picked up a couple of files

"Imaan called and told me to give you these"

She handed Zoya 3 fat files

Zoya made a face

"Really..?"

Deb nodded feeling sympathy for her

"Really.."

Zoya took the files and headed toward her cabin

"Tell Austin to send the review files in a bit"

She yelled to Deb, who nodded back."

………………………

"Wow, I cannot believe this was our handout spot…."

Asad and Imaan sat across the street on steps that led to no where.

Their handout spot was now a cigarette spot.

A thousand different people stood in different places either talking on the phone, reading a book, but each and everyone had a cigarette in their hands.

The smell of the smoke from the cigerettes could be smelt from all to where Asad and Imaan sat

Imaan coughed

"Let's go dude" He said making a face

Asad pulled down the sweater, which he used to cover his nose with.

Both stood up, dusting their pants and walked away.

The traffic was getting lighter now, and there were more people on the roads.

"Do you think I should settle down now?" Imaan suddenly asked

"What kind of question is that?" Asad asked

"It's your choice, unless your daddi and dadoo force you to, then you have to" Asad said smiling

"Na yaar, I'm being serious, look we're freakin' 28, you've become a husband, and I'm still a bachelor

Asad put his hands into his pocket

"So look for a girl and get married, magical solution…" He said as he rolled his eyes

"Whatever, I shouldn't be asking you for advice, can't even propose to someone" They took a turn at the curb of the sidewalk

"That was 5 years ago, for you info, man I should never share anything with you.."

Imaan chuckled, "but you still do"

"Whatever happened to, I'll take you neighborhood touring, we're not anything close to your place."

Imaan scratched his head

"You wanna meet my hot neighboo - oh never mind you're married" He cut short in his own sentence

"We could always go to the park, go on some slides"

"Only pedophile's go to the park and Go On Slides. What' wrong with you Imaan"

"I was just joking, gosh" Imaan replied

"We're gonna go back home, I will get ready for work and then to the office, kay?" He added in

"Fine, as long as I have something to do…"

Both headed the direction of Imaan's house

…………………..

Zoya sat in her office, for the last couple of hours, her hair tied back, pen writing non-stop

There was a knock at the door

"Come in" she said without looking up

Austin entered the room

"Hey Zoe, just found the reviews from the past years, you should compare the increase and decrease of our ratings this year" Austin said, looking through the sheets of papers.

"Mmm, okay" She said, still writing

Austin placed the file on her desk, and looked at the clock

"Hey, don't you have to pick Zaara up? She gets dismissedin 15 minutes…."

Zoya's head shot to the clock

"Shit…" She shot up to a standing position

"Oh, crap"

She placed everything down, fuxed her hair and picked up her purse, all in a rush

"Take care of this please, thanks buddy…"

She patted his shoulder and with out hearing his response she ran out

Austin shook his head at her retreating back

"This girl's a mess" he sad and he looked at her daughter's picture and smiled at it.

"Anyways guess, I'll copy these papers for her.." He picked up a couple of papers and headed for the printer.

Zoya on the other hand ran standing in front of the elevator and pushing the button, nonstop

"Calm down, you wanna annihilate the button?"

Zoya looked at Deb, who was also walking to the elevator

"I have to pick up Zaara man.." Zoya exclaimed, pushing the button again

"It's already 2:20? " Deb looked at the clock

"You know how Zaara get's when I'm late"

Deb laughed and shook her

"Like mother, like daughter.." Deb walked back to her desk, but still watched Zoya as she waited for the elevator

The elevator rung and the door opened

"bye"Zoya said as she got in

Zoya practically ran out the building and got into her car, and when it pulled out into the road, Imaan's car pulled in, both cars crossed, but neither Asad nor Zoya saw each other.

……………………………

Precap: AsYa untique meeting

...

Hi guys, so there you have part 3

I was supper bored; it's raining here with thunder :(

Bad weather, kinda reminded me of this SS😆

I hope I did a good job

Anyways, do like and comment

Thank You and love you all

<3 Far

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
I just found out this story and read all chapters in a go!! My God!! I really really loved it,... 😊 It was a weekend treat for me 😊 Please do continue soon and if possible, please do pm me.. I've added u to my buddy list 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Wow update asap m eagerly waiting for asya meet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SUPER SE UPPER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏

WAITIN 4ASYA MEETING...PM PLZZZ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please pm me and add me to buddu list

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