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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
This SS has started off wonderfully!!
Loved little Zaara's character but I wonder who the dad is 😆 dont wanna take any guesses as you know.. you might bring in a twist 😆
love the bonding between Zoya&Deb.. can see the great friendship between them just in the first bit
So Asad is the mystery man 😎 I loved the dialogues between Imaan and Asad .. made me laugh 😆 you made Asad's character great.. a cheery man .. i like 😳
the start was amazing!! 😃 but still got me thinking about who the father is 😆

amazing update!! 👍🏼 continue soon & dont forget to pm me 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Aww...thatz sooo lovely... Do continue it dear.. Very nice.,
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
great start loved it ...pm me the next updt too plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Aishah8

Nice please continue and update regularly ps love the gifs you got them from asdf right!


Thanks :)
Haha yeah, love it 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Hey loves, wrote Part 2 of this stuff, hope you like it.

Enjoy reading :)

Part 2:

Zoya stood in front of the mirror getting ready for work, while fixing her hair, her eyes landed on her wrist, and the tattoo of the letters VE on it. She touched the tattoo, remembering the first time she saw it and freaked out.

She opened her eyes, her head feeling heavy, she couldn't remember anything. She looked at the ceiling, with the ceiling fan, spinning, she closed her eyes trying to get back to sleep, but a couple of seconds later, they shot open.

I never had a ceiling fan…. She thought.

She touched her head bursting head, and saw the tattoo on her hand.

What the f…….

See started at it for a couple of seconds and when she noticed it was a TATTOO tattoo, her eyes widened

She felt sudden movement besides her, and realized there was someone else in the bed, she felt a hand moved off of her bare waist, and suddenly they both sat up, and when her head turned to the person besides her, only one word escaped her lips

"…Shit…."

"Ma!!!!" Zaara yelled

Zoya blinked, coming out of her thoughts.

She put on her dress coat and headed out the room.

…………………...

He touched the letters LO which was tattooed onto his left wrist, touching it made him revisit his old self again.

5 years….. He thought

Even though he acted to never care about that night, the night which changed his life forever, it always crossed his mind.

How is she? Where is she? Is she still in New York….. Every time she came in his thoughts, ha had thousands of questions, all of them for her…

"Asad"

He turned to see Imaan, who had two coffee mugs in his hand, walking towards him.

He quickly pulled down the sleeve of his shirt, covering the tattoo.

"Uhh, you woke up so early…" Asad said as he took a mug from Imaan.

"Yeah, anyways, I thought I should help you unpack" He leaned on the wall.

"…But, don't you have work in a little bit?" Asad asked

"Oh you don't need to worry about that, I'll just let my assistant manager handle it, until I go, maybe I could give you a tour of the neighborhood?" Imaan answered back, taking a sip of the coffee

"And do you think he'll agree?" Asad asked, while putting shirts into the wardrobe

"Why not, and it's a she, by the way…" Imaan replied

"Anyways, I'm gonna just call her and tell her okay?"

Imaan walked out, leaving Asad

"So much for helping me unpack" Asad mumbled

…………………..

"…..Yeah And he expects me to complete all of his files, Ugh!"

Zoya rushed back from the kitchen to the dining table, where Zaara sat, coloring her coloring book, with crayons spread all over the table.

Zoya sat besides her, her phone held to her ear with her shoulder and she mixed the oatmeal she brought for Zaara.

"So you're doing all his work?" Deb said

"Yeah, until he shows up! God, what kinda' big shot is his mystery BFF anyways?" Zoya replied

She took a spoon full and put it to Zaara's mouth, who ate obediently.

"He called like 20 minutes ago, informing me about this, he's taking mystery BFF neighborhood touring, I mean is that a real thing?" Zoya made faces, which matched her voice

"Haha, Neighborhood Touring,, well that's Imaan for you…" Deb giggled away

"It's not funny-"

"Ma, it's already 7, you have take me to school!" Zaara said cutting in

Zoya looked at the digital wall clock, no wonder her daughter knew what time it was

"Shoot, Deb I'll met you at the office kay, bye?" She hung up

"Zaara, jaldi, wash your face.."

Zaara stood up and ran to wash her face, while Zoya cleaned up and placed the coloring book into Zaara's backpack and other necessary materials.

Soon both headed out

………………….

"I really didn't wanna come"

"What you don't wanna tour the neighborhood with me?" Imaan asked walking onto the sidewalk.

Asad walked down the steps of the house and walked out the gate and onto the sidewalk also.

Imaan stopped walking as he looked at something

"Hey look it's my AM" he said, smiling

"AM?" Asad asked confused

"Assistant manager yaar… duh" He exclaimed

Asad shook his head

"You and your shorter version of words"

He looked at the back of the scarlet red jeep wrangler as it drove off.

…………………..

Zoya sat in the driver seat and Zaara in the back, seat belted down.

"Ma, I just saw Imaan!

"Zaara, how many times did I tell you, don't call him by his name"

Zoya frowned

"Oh sorry… uhh, ma I just saw Mr. Imaan…"

Zoya looked at the side view mirror, where she saw Imaan and another man.

That must be his mystery BFF. She thought

"Ma, I wanna go shopping today…"

"Shopping?" Zoya said

"Hmm, I need to buy many dresses…"

Zoya smiled, this was the daughter of a fashion designer.

"Okay fine, but only if I'm not busy"

"Okay" Zaara said as she turned to look outside the window

Zaar moved the rearview mirror a bit, so it faced her daughter and Zaara's her reflection, Zoya smiled.

………………….

Precap: haha JK, no precap😆

…………………..

Do comment, Criticize, like

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Thanks

<3 Far

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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Omg Far are you sure this is your first time writing an SS?
This is super amazing! I just love Zara!
I love how you create such awesome continuity between the scenes!

Zara is my doll 🤗

Love her!

Cant wait for the first meeting *excited*

Continueee sooon, hun! 🤗


Faiza
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
great updt. I expected a encounter btw AsYa... Hope u'll show up 1st
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
This is soo nice. I love that their tattoo's are half of the word LOVE. It's soo sweet. Can't wait to see how they'll react when they meet again :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
when are we getting the rest? love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
loved it! Update soon..thanks for the pm...

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