Together FOREVER: An AsYa FF - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finaly asad n zoya talk with each other. Hope asad find her soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I hv always loved this guilt wala asad
It was awesome
Thanx for the pm😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great FF! Do continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Interesting 😊 Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hope Asad Find Zoya Soon.. Nice Update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing.. You need to continue this. I m hooked to this..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
hope asad finds zoya soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow !! finally he understood that she is some trouble !! idiot if he answered her call nothing of this would have happened !! plzzz continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 5

Asad ran towards the right, just as the driver said Zoya had run. The street was a narrow one, with fruit vendors, stolen hardware dealers, chana-vendors and fake metal jewelers sitting on footpaths. The place was heavily crowded; it was difficult for Asad to even move about. It was THE place in entire Bhopal, Zoya would have wanted to go, he wondered .And the only place he would not want to go.

It was dusk time and the criss-cross of lights from every stall and shop gave the place a mystic ambience.

Asad took out a photo from his pocket. It had the face of the person he was dying to see at the moment. It was an old picture of Najma, Zoya, Dilshad and him, probably taken a few days after Zoya had moved in. It was probably their only photo together.

There she was, her thousand watt smile that lit up his world, her deep and expressive eyes that could enchant anyone. She trailed hands over her face. And there was him, with an outlook of a particular disinterest for life. His cold eyes that had shot so may invisible arrows towards her, hurting her.

He was the sole reason Zoya was in so much danger and he was not in any mood to justify himself. It was his entire fault, it had always been. He went to the nearest vendor and placing a finger near Zoya's face in the photo, he inquired the man. The man shook his head, indifferently. Soon, Asad had asked every person on the footpath about Zoya's whereabouts but had received a negative reply each time. Each shake of a head, built up his frustration even more.

He felt absolutely sore at heart and broken. His body failed him and he fell to the ground. A tear fell on the photo he was holding. Although he did not have much hope of finding her, in the middle of this fanfare, he just wished and prayed that he would find something that would guide him further. There was a storm in his head. He thought of the time when he wished Zoya had never come into his life but now she constituted the very essence of his existence. How would he find her?

"Zoya", he whispered

"ZOYA!",he screamed.

Every onlooker looked at him with contempt, as if he was a retard. But the truth was, that was what he had become precisely, since she had gone. He needed her. When he looked into a pool of water nearby, his reflection haunted him.

He wiped his tears and stood up. He had reached the point of desperation. He held the photo and started asking every passerby if they had seen Zoya. He was frantic to know something, anything which would lead him to Zoya. The indifference and apathy of the passersby made him angry. The crowds scurried away into oblivion, while he stood there; hopeless and miserable.

Life had come to a standstill. The people moved past him, uncaring and ignorant of the mental devastation that had hit him. Maybe that's why it was called falling in love, because everything that falls, gets broken. Asad's life was wrecked because of love. Love that he had given to one girl in his entire life and now the pain of losing her was killing him on the inside.

His eyses suddenly flickered to the corner of the road and he saw something he was very familiar to It was Zoya's Ipad. The pink gadget was what she carried everywhere.

He went closer and took it into his hands. It made him feel closer to her.

The Ipad meant that Zoya had been there, but the fact that it was lying on the ground, missing the tender hands of its owner over it, gave him jitters. He was a cent percent sure now that Zoya had been kidnapped. But why? She was as much of a trouble to anyone as a squirrel and she had practically no enemies.

The Ipad beeped. He opened the last saved file. It was a video recording.

As he pressed the play button and watched the atrocious truth unfold before his eyes. He now knew the exact reason why Zoya was kidnapped. He felt like the lady was Raziya bi but he was not sure. But what he was sure of, was that Zoya was in terribly danger. Danger that could not only destroy her life but end it too.

He could not let anything happen to her. He was relieved that he had found something but to save her he had to act. Before it was too late. And before Zoya Farooqui was history.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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you forgot to pm me😭

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"whew" that was some update . loved it
it was really nice😊
next time don't forget to pm me pls.😒
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