{|AsYa| OS: Sweet Dreams...} - Page 11

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

And res on the 625719 th page again -___-
Koi ni be, exams ne aisi le rakhi hai, mat poochh..

Originally posted by: nikki.171

I cud hav sworn my mouth fell out open wen I saw ur PM. I was lyke an OS!? Now? Again? (Not that I dont like it .. in fact I love seeing an 'OS' PM in my inbox ..but thats another story)
LoL! Lovely OS! Uh-ma-zing! Every little bit... I simply loved EVERYTHING! The little things, the worry, the hug, the way Zoya asked to stay 'that' way for a while because it makes her feel better, the way Asad slept near her holding her hands. It gives me a happy and sort of mushy feeling.
And the fact that Dilshad SAW! I really love it when she notices anything romantic between the two!
We just love AsYa dont we? I had a teeny tiny AsYA day dreaming session right in the middle of my practical paper! Gawd! I had to mentally smack myself back to the paper at hand.
Now of course I'd love to see a morning after and I wud've requested u to write one too but I guess u need some sleep right now.
AND Besta luck for ur exams! Accounts is totally out of my league.

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

errmm.. late again as usual

well .. what can I say.. as soon as I saw your pm i had a smile on my face because your writing never disappoints me 😛

The OS was beautiful!! 👏

at first i thought.. okay.. this is gonna make me laugh just after I read that Zoya went to wake up Asad because she was bored 😆 then again I was curious when you mentioned about how there no footsteps or anything then I though.. maybe Zoya being the crazy girl she is.. she was gonna climb through the window 🤣 but again I was wrong.. the way you made Zoya seem so vulnerable in this was amazing 👍🏼 could create a vivid picture in my mind of an emotional Zoya and a hurt Asad who can't see his Zoya crying 😳 and again.. Mr. Khan to the rescue 😳 he was there for Zoya and assured her that nothing could ever go wrong as long as they are together Asad as usual not very good with words but the dialogues who chose for him here were just beautiful brought a huge smile to my face .. and again.. i loved how you made Asad realize that only Zoya can read through him.. in and out and she understands him fully oohh and when Zoya placed her head on Asads shoulder and he put his arms around her .. i remembered the dream sequence of AsYa when Zoya was crying and Asad went to wipe her tears away 😳 in this OS you made Asad the gentleman and much more.. he was so caring the way he let Zoya sleep on his bed and didnt let go of her hand because he promised her not to then our Dilshaad also in the story she saw the love between them

i loved the OS.. it was beautifully written and conceptualized.. 👏

sorry for late reply 😳

P.S - Good luck with your exams 🤗