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@-ElmoFuj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: aishwarya_rox
This is the best! The best work I've read on asya!!! Amazing! Reading this makes me want to hv a guy like Asad in my life too! I really really really hope that we cud watch something like this onscreen too!!! Ksg and surbhi r amazing actors!! It's my sincere request to please send this os to 4 lions and ask them to include it! This made my day! Please pm me ur future work too! :)

Oh wow, im so overwhelmed! Im so glad you like it this much! Really! I so want this to happen in the show! Thats exactly why i wrote it. I'l see if forum32 take in OS's, though im sure they don't 😆

I'l surely pm you, dear😃

Thankyou so much😃

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: asyaforlife
I'm left spellbound with the amount of emotions this story of yours portrayed.
I could feel tears of happiness breaming by the corner of my eyes till I reach the end of it. I wish this hadn't ended, ever.
Do you even know what your story does to me evertime I read any?? It never seizes to amaze me with it's excellency and flawlessness. And the credit always goes to the person sitting behind the screen trying hard to make it the best. 😳
This is beyond BEAUTIFUL!!
A truly heart touching one shot.
Thank you for writing this.
And all the very best for your exams. I know you'll rock them.
P.S. Sorry for late reply My hands pained due to typing my two shot and due to post illness effects.
Loads of love,
Diya😳

Awww, Diyaaa! 🤗 🤗

Your comment made my day! Seriously! Im so overwhelmed! 😳 thankyouuu sooo very much ! And u know when a writer as amazing as you says smething like this, it really means alot 😳

Oh no problem! I totally understand! Been there, done that 😆

Lots of love,

Faiza 🤗

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Beautiful! They are sooo perfect for each other!!! OMG! ❤️ *Swoon*

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

loved the os...wish there was also abt the morning after too

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Priya

@MysteryLove

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Faiza !!! You are so brilliant 👏 Absolutely loved the os ❤️ It brought a big smile on my face 😃

PS: Good luck with your CIE AS-Levels! May the AsYa force be with you 😛

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

errmm.. late again as usual

well .. what can I say.. as soon as I saw your pm i had a smile on my face because your writing never disappoints me 😛

The OS was beautiful!! 👏

at first i thought.. okay.. this is gonna make me laugh just after I read that Zoya went to wake up Asad because she was bored 😆 then again I was curious when you mentioned about how there no footsteps or anything then I though.. maybe Zoya being the crazy girl she is.. she was gonna climb through the window 🤣 but again I was wrong.. the way you made Zoya seem so vulnerable in this was amazing 👍🏼 could create a vivid picture in my mind of an emotional Zoya and a hurt Asad who can't see his Zoya crying 😳 and again.. Mr. Khan to the rescue 😳 he was there for Zoya and assured her that nothing could ever go wrong as long as they are together Asad as usual not very good with words but the dialogues who chose for him here were just beautiful brought a huge smile to my face .. and again.. i loved how you made Asad realize that only Zoya can read through him.. in and out and she understands him fully oohh and when Zoya placed her head on Asads shoulder and he put his arms around her .. i remembered the dream sequence of AsYa when Zoya was crying and Asad went to wipe her tears away 😳 in this OS you made Asad the gentleman and much more.. he was so caring the way he let Zoya sleep on his bed and didnt let go of her hand because he promised her not to then our Dilshaad also in the story she saw the love between them

i loved the OS.. it was beautifully written and conceptualized.. 👏

sorry for late reply 😳

P.S - Good luck with your exams 🤗

Edited by x_Mishti_x - 12 years ago

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

I cud hav sworn my mouth fell out open wen I saw ur PM. I was lyke an OS!? Now? Again? (Not that I dont like it .. in fact I love seeing an 'OS' PM in my inbox ..but thats another story)
LoL! Lovely OS! Uh-ma-zing! Every little bit... I simply loved EVERYTHING! The little things, the worry, the hug, the way Zoya asked to stay 'that' way for a while because it makes her feel better, the way Asad slept near her holding her hands. It gives me a happy and sort of mushy feeling.
And the fact that Dilshad SAW! I really love it when she notices anything romantic between the two!
We just love AsYa dont we? I had a teeny tiny AsYA day dreaming session right in the middle of my practical paper! Gawd! I had to mentally smack myself back to the paper at hand.
Now of course I'd love to see a morning after and I wud've requested u to write one too but I guess u need some sleep right now.
AND Besta luck for ur exams! Accounts is totally out of my league.

Edited by nikki.171 - 12 years ago

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: irock321
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Beautiful! They are sooo perfect for each other!!! OMG! ❤️ *Swoon*

Yesss, AsYa all the way!

Thankyou so much, dear!!! 😃

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: rennie
loved the os...wish there was also abt the morning after too

Hehe but thats left to our imagination! 😉

Thankyou so muuucchhh😃

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: priyarao27
Faiza !!! You are so brilliant 👏 Absolutely loved the os ❤️ It brought a big smile on my face 😃

PS: Good luck with your CIE AS-Levels! May the AsYa force be with you 😛

Awww, thankyou hun!! Thanks alot😃 im glad it made you smile. That makes me happy😃

thankyouu! 🤗 i need all the luck i can get! 😆 And yes, the AsYa force 😆