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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Please keep it going and 😊

Can you make the fonts little bit big..

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Hey Nice story..

Read alll parts in one go..

Plzz if u don't mind write in lil bit big fonts..

PM me when u update...

Mariam..

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princee

@princeegoyal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

thts nice...really a good start...pls continue..& ya...do Pm me too..wanna read more...& ya welcome to forum...

pari

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Scarlett kevin

@Mrs.JamesBarne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

WOW THIS IS SO NICE .PLEASE CONTINUE SOON

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Neets

@Neets

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

continue soon and pm also

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5shanaya

@5shanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Thanks guyz i am overwhelmed by the support...appreciation and suggestions...pls continue to support and feel free to suggest anything...and i will surely try to update soon... :)

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5shanaya

@5shanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

asad was shocked the way zoya talked to her...she was never so rude to him...even the time when he hurt her so much then what happened today...what wrong he did he was not able to understand ...he then left her room...without uttering a word and moved straight into his room...followed by tanveer...(inside the room)...asad was very confused and worried because of what happened in zoya's room ... just then tanveer said "JAMMY ye kesi badtameez aur besharm ladki he ye mehaman hoker bhi apni hade bhul gayi ap to unhe farz ke mate unki tabyat puchne gaye the aur wo he ki..."...asad was going restless at every word said by tanu against zoya...He tried to talk to tanu in an calm and composed manner...but ended yelling at her..."Zoya ek bhaut hi achi ladki he aur tumhe koi haq nahi he uske bare me aisa kuch bhi khene ka"...tanu was shocked at asads reaction...and left the room abruptly...asad again drowned in his own thoughts without paying any attention that tanveer may be hurt by his yelling...he began to thought who said to tanu that she is just a mehamaan(mere a guest)...wait wait its me only...but its not true she is much more than guest...suddenly he heard a knock on his door...it was his ammi...she came inside and said "Asad i dont know what is wrong with zoya...she is not eating properly...continusoly sheding tears...and she just got a phone call and she told that tommorow she is going somewhere out of Bhopal...but how can i let her go out alone in such a comdition"sighed dilshad...on this asad said dont worry ammi i will talk to miss faruquii...(end of chapter...sorry i wont be able to send pms and nor increase the font size...but i will surely do it nxt time)...nxt chap precap...zoya asad and tanveer(kabab ne haddi)..in the car...

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5shanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

chapter 5{part a}Asad moved towards zoya's room...he knocked the door...twice..thrice...no response.he became tensed and opened the door...He froze on her sight ...she was praying...her head covered with a black duppata...her eyes closed but tears continuesly rolling down her cheeks...seeing her in this state made him remember when he had seen her first time...that day also pain was evident on her face...but still she is the most beautiful girl in the world'...suddenly a voice made him snap out of his thoughtsZoya: Mr. khan what are you doing here???Asad: Ms. faruquii me aapko ye batane aaya tha ki kal aap kahi bahar nahi jaa rahi hai..?Zoya: and who gave you the right to take my decisions??Asad: (after a few minutes of silence he said)...you are staying at my place ...and so its my duty to see that you are in good health ...ans so you are not going miss faruquii...is it clear??...sayimg this he moved towards the door...when he heard her voice...her powerfull yet stammering voice Zoya: mr khan I am going out tommrow ...its very important for me...I cant miss it ...(sobbing heavily)...I have waited for this day since years...asad moved towards her...wiped her tears...and tried to look in her eyes...Just then she hugged him...he was shocked at her reaction...but his hands automatically went forward one hand patting her head and another resting on her waist...they remained like this for the next 15-20 minutes ...when asad heard her sobbing stop he slowly parted away from her...and said...ok but we are going out tommrow not you alone...in which she nooded her face to avoid the awakrdness ...he moved out of her room saying "allah hafiz" ...whole of the time someone was watching them(tanveer)