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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz continue and pm me too😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesme!
Plz do continue soon n pm!
It wud be a treat to hav longer updates😆
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hope all of you may like it...
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chap 3(part b): asad put zoya on her bed her hands still lingering around his neck ...she said looking at tears in his eyes ...no mr khan yo need not to feel sorry ...it was my mistake i should have reached home at time ...phuppi worry for me like a mother...and i trouble her a lot and thats why i think she left me...Asad was absorbing her words and was lookinng at her...he was not able to realise what she just said...suddenly dilshad and najma entered with the docter in the room...then suddenly zoya removed her hands from his neck...and he snnaped out of his thoughts and moved out of her room...inside the doctor examined zoya...and called out dilshad that she needs to talk to her...Asad who was standing outside heard this and followed his ammi and the doctor ...the doctor said ...physically will be fine but i think emotionally she is facing too much...something is bothering her very...she need to be taken care off...she need her family the most ...you need to take care of her...then the doctor left...asad heard all this and went straight to his ammi ...and told her to call zoyas parents as she needed her family...Dilshad looked at asad with tears in her eyes...and after a big pause said: Asad zoya annath he...aur uske aapi jiju k sath rehti hai jo sirf uski ammi ko phechante the...aur isliye use yateem -khane se apne sath ghar le aye-...on hearing this Asad was shhatered...he could not belive his ears ...he was feeling like a criminal ...for whatever he said to zoya...how much he had hurt her...and then hE realised what Zoya had said to her in the room...he was in tears ..standing like a statue...(thats all 4 part 3...and this time seriously i need response guyz and gals) ..and i would not be able to do PMs
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great, I know I'm being greedy but can you upload the next one and make it longer please?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i will try to update soon... thankss..@kundra
Edited by 5shanaya - 12 years ago
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(part :c) asad then wiped his tears and said -sorry ammi-...i didnt knew about ms faroquiis parents...then dilshad told him that he should tell sorry to zoya and not her...and left ...Asad remembered Zoyas words..and felt how can she think herself responsible for losing her parents...that must be because of me...i always made her realise that she dont care about others...i always hurt her ...and she tells nothing...he then moves to zoyas room...and watches her...she was trying to get up but due to weakness was not able to...he then says -May i help you miss faroquii-...zoya turned to him and said--arz kiya hai~-mere humsafar na baniye hume akele ki adat hai-2...juba ko mishri na banaeye hume karele ki adat hai...shukriya ...shukriya...Asad was happy seeing her normal again...here zoya tried to stand again but failed...asad saw this and said in a soft voice -ms faroquii apko kha jana hai...??...muje dining area me jana hai mr khan ...tamatar aur phupphi ke sath kuch khane...said zoya with a pouted face...then asad moved towards her...without saying anything lifted her in his arms...and carried her to the dinning area...they shared a eyelock(mitwa moment)...in the dinning area...asad made zoya sit on chair...najma and dilshad...looked at both of them shockingly...they were looking much more like lovers...looking at each others eyes without blinking...dilshad broke the silence and said-zoya beta are you ok now...zoya replied with a weak smile...yes phuppi i am ok but a bit hungry...dilshad served zoya the food and without wasting a minute she started munching it ...with her mouth open talking continiously...Asad was looking at the quite zoya...and smiling...dilshad noticed this but didnt said anything...they all finished the food...~end of 3rd chapter~
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new chap coming soon...😊
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chapter 4...2 days passed ...things were going right between him and her...one day when dilshad and najma were not in house and zoya was watching a movie in the living room...asad was sitting on the couch...pretending to do work but was constantly looking at zoya ...his zoya...ya he was developing feelings for her...suddenly the bell rang...zoya got up thinking asad was doing work...as she opened the door...a young lady was standing there in a traditional attire...before zoya could ask her anything...she called loud aloud...JAMMY...zoya was about to say that there no one of that sort live...but suddenly asad came and hugged the girl tightly...zoya stood there shattered...as if someone has taken her world...suddenly asad called -miss faroquii-...making her snap out of her blankndss and said ...she is tannu...i meant tanveer...my best friend since childhood...and tannu she is miss zoya faruqii...she is a guest in our house...zoya was hurt by his statement...am i mere a guest...is that all what he thinks of me...zoya just left from there after introducing to tanveer...and giving her a smile...she entered her room...and shut the door behind...tears started flowing from her eyes unknowingly...asad fully forget about zoya...it had been three hours and she had been not out yet...he is been buzy talking to tannu...and then najma and dilshad returned too...they meet tanveer...she told them that she has some work in bhopal...and so asad had convienced here to live with them...jurt then najma asked-: bhaijan where is zoya...then when asad realised where she had dissapered...and said abruptly...she must be in her room resting...then dilshad asked wether she took lunch...and took her medicines...as you know na that she has not taken lunch with us...in the afternoon...and its necessary for her to eat properly...as she is still weak asad..?...till the time he realised what his ammi said...and start panacking and started thinking that...how can he forget about zoya's health?...and how come she is not hungry ..?suddenly he said ...no ammi she didnt have the food and i completely forget as i was talking to tannu...(i will continue soon pls post your comments)
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chap 4 :part b-...asad got up from the couch and headed towards zoyas room...and all others following him...he knocked the door many times...but no response...all started panicking...suddenly asad said i may look throug the garden facing window of her room...najma and dilshad nodded in approval Asad went to the window and was relived seeing it open...he peeped inside...but zoya was not on her bed...he began loosing his breath...suddenly a pink sleeve on the floor caught his attention...he jump inside the room from the window ...and saw zoya on the floor and her head resting on the wall ...just then he heard ...asad ...dilshad was calling him ...he moved forward...and opened the door from inside...najma dilshad and tanu entered...dilshad saw zoya and took a sigh of relif...the asad out of anger spoke...i have not seen such a careless girl in my life...we all are worried about her and she is sleeping here...and he yelled miss faruquii get up!!...no reaction from zoya...he shouted again but this time with concern:zoya pls get up!!...no reaction again ...just then dilshad sat on the floor beside zoya and notices the impression of soaked tears on her face...and then clasped her forehead in her hands and kissed her forehead...and than said ...asad why she had been crying...and she is not sleeping...i think she exhausted from crying too much...Najma pls bring some water...asad stood there speechless...worried and wondering whats wrong with her why had she cried too much...after a while he moved forward and took her in his arms ...lifted her and placed her on the bed...najma entered with a glass of water...dilshad took the glass and sprinkled some water on her face...Zoya opened her eyes ...which were immensly red due to hours of cotinious crying...before her eyes was still asad...and behind him stood the same girl...tanveer...tears started flowing out unknowingly from her eyes seeing asad in his sight with that girl again...she was hurt something inside her broke that moment...dilshad cupped her face in her hands ...and said -Zoya my baccha what happen-dont cry beta tell nd what happened-...asad felt helpless seeing zoya in that state...suddenly zoya said with a weak voice...i am alright phupphi dont worry...and tamatar stop crying...!!...dilshad asked her again and again..whats bothering her so much but she has nothing to say ...she was heartbroken...but composing herself she said...phupphi i am all right...and if there would be anything i will let u know...Dilshad agreed ...just then asad cleared his thought and said...ms Faruquii...pls eat something...then you have to take your medicines also an...zoya cut him of in between and said...mr khan pls u dont have to waste your time thinking about me...i can take care of myself...she said even without looking at him...

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