Asya ~ ishq pe zor nahi~DISCONTINUED

hey its my first time so pls feel free to correct me

chapter 1: it had been two months since zoya had been in the khan mansion...Asad is now being habitual of her... it had been a hectic day for him in the office..clock stuck 8 when he reached home...he saw his ammi and najma on the dinning table and smiled... he too joined them after changing and seeing both of them quite tensed asked that where is miss Faroquii...najma with a pause said she would be there soon...as she has some important work...he saw the clock it was already 8:30...he was horrified and just than the bell rang ...nazma went and open the door...Zoya entered and she looked like she didn't had a good day...moreover asad stood up and shouted like hell...where were you?..u don't respect nor care about others...well that's not your mistake your Parents are to be blamed who don't told you how to behave...nor gave you any morals...before he could say any more Dilshad stopped him...and zoya ran inside her room full of tears...dilshad and najma went to zoya but she didn't open the door.

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end of 1st chapter

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pls tell me should I continue or not ??

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chapter:2(part a)

zoya in her room crying heavily

nice series... do write more

ya nd ksg nd surbhi truly rules

hey guyz i dont think that my story is able to fascinate you all...so i want to know wether i should continue or not ...waiting for the reply... :(

It was pretty good dear

thank u guyz ...and i am continuing... ...chap :3(part a)...nxt morning ...all at the breakfast except zoya...asad wanted to ask about her...but his image dint allow him to do so...just then najma asked dilshad - where is zoya??is she all right ammi??she is still not awake najma...we should ask her to get up now and atleast eat something...she dint have any thing since yestarday evening..dilshad said glaring towards Asad...he looked down...just then zoyas room's door got open ...she was still in her night sute ...looking very pale..and stressed...she was not able to walk properly so najma got up and took her hand...suddenly she realised her hands were heating like fire...so she put her hand on her forehead and then shouted...ZOYa you have high fever...asad was feeling guilty..and was looking at her without blinkig his ...just then zoya nearly fell due to weakness but asad stood up and saved her from falling...he touched her ...she was burning like coal ...he picked her up in his arms and carried her to her room...they shared a Eyelock (mitwa moment)...sorry zoya he then murmered with tears in his eyes...zoya stil staring at him...)(sorry guyz i will not be able to pm today ...pls do comment that u all liked it or not)

no response again... :( :(