AsYa SS - After the Darkest Hour

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

idiot asad... he needs to get some courage... if not thn atlst borrow some 4m zoya... 😡. i think its dilshad mentioned in last para

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Read all parts now. its wonderful, and i loved the courage of zoya and the way he got the ring perfect for her size infect he is already engaged to zoya and it must be dilshad to know the truth...

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abditory.

@abditory.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Ohhh it was wonderful.

Asad OMG OMG they way he confessed i love him!!! He is imperfectly perfect and yahh a jerk also. The part was so emotional and the turmoil in their hearts was so perfectly described. Zoya she must be feeling so left out. I loved how you didnt make Asad do hush-hush kinda confession. The ring confession is so Asad's style. Nooo i felt bad. She rejected Asad nooo:((

You are brilliant in potraying emotions and describing feelings. Amazing writer.

You better update soon^^

Edited by salmeh. - 12 years ago

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Amazing Update Sana.Why is ASAD doing this with Zoya & with himself too?Waiting for next Update.Continue soon..Thnx for PM..Mariam..

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

plzzz update soon. cant wait

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mehak arora

@Mojo.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

OHGOD. Same here, what was so difficult about saying yes? :| Tanveer is a bitch, she is so annoying. Why does she have to interfere not like she'll ever get to be with Asad :P and he let's her because she is his so called 'bestfriend'. Haha emotionally challenged as Zoya says 😆

*Res. Will read it in a while :)

*edited.

It was a great part Sanaa. I loveddd ittt <3 he gave her the family ring yayyy :D But he is scared of hurting her, can't he see how much he is hurting her by marrying Tanveer? :| Ohgod, that was the best way to confess his feelings wow. So different. Shit he had almost said he didn't want to marry Tanveer but lights? Really Asad? -.- He should just kick Tanveer out of the picture and marry Zoya. :P Last part was really nice, him giving her the jacket and finally Zoya shouting at him. I want to read moreee soon. Waiting to see what happens. Continue soon :D and just one thing, maybe you haven't proof read it, there are some spelling errors :) just informing. Keep up the great work :D

Edited by Mojo. - 12 years ago

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

i guess the spectacular is Aamir

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

oh GOd this was way too beautiful Sana. though I had a lump in my throat and tears flowing while reading Zoya's heart breaking story n Asad's plan of self suicide but none da less, this piece of work is just brilliant. Asad will never change, now will he? I guess he got da lites switched off cox he didn't want to share Zoe's dream wid tanveer. n who had seen da interaction between AsYa? plz continue soonest and add me to ur pm list if possible.

love,

Nimra.

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598470

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Ehh my like button is not workingg :/

But OMG I just loved this update, asad ufff 😆 you portrayed their emotions really well! your writing is on point and I'm waiting to read the next part do continue soon :)

Nice one Sanaa :D

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Hey Sanaa..

it's alwaz a treat to read ur writing.. like truly.. i juz love each n every story of urs...
u dnt knw me but i'm a big fan of ur writing since i read LOOC in dmg blog nd alwaz waited for u to come n update... now recently i joined IF nd get the pleasure of reading ur other works..

u r truly an amazing writer.. read all 3 parts of this ff as well.. too good.. juz loved it..

nd thank u so much for the pm.. plz update soon..

t.c... 😊