AsYa SS - After the Darkest Hour - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: salmeh.

Ohhh it was wonderful.

Asad OMG OMG they way he confessed i love him!!! He is imperfectly perfect and yahh a jerk also. The part was so emotional and the turmoil in their hearts was so perfectly described. Zoya she must be feeling so left out. I loved how you didnt make Asad do hush-hush kinda confession. The ring confession is so Asad's style. Nooo i felt bad. She rejected Asad nooo:((
You are brilliant in potraying emotions and describing feelings. Amazing writer.
You better update soon^^



Oh wow thank you!!

You're the first to mention the whole ring thing! Of all the comments I received.. I kept thinking.. why hasn't anyone mentioned the ring?! The ring.. with the writing.. I personally thought it was a genius idea.. and couldn't wait to see people's reactions..how they'd take it. So I thought they probably didn't like it.

And then you came like a blessing!! 😃

Thanks once again! you really did just make my day. it's about 3am. Ok, night then. whatever..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesumm... the whole update was sooo good.. u write very well... n yeah.. i must say the ring part was ma fav part.. n i can imagine asad wen zoya gave the ring back..
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Posted: 12 years ago
The ring thingy was the best thing for me and i sware i never read it anywhere😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeshh.. i read ur LOOC on blog but not wen u used to update.. i found blog quite later.. but ur LOOC is one of my fav nut unfortunately it's still incomplete!!!! don't u hve any wish to complete the 3rd season??

nd u weren't aweful dear.. u were amazing writer from d very beginning.. now-a-days reading ur OS s.. nd my fav is undoubtedly "My Dream" ... best one to me.. plz kp writing..

t.c..
luv,
Sargam 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
This is just perfect. I m eagerly waiting what is gonna happen.. Do pm for updates.. If yes , add me to the list...

Continue soon!!!

Dee
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Chotu_Babu

yeshh.. i read ur LOOC on blog but not wen u used to update.. i found blog quite later.. but ur LOOC is one of my fav nut unfortunately it's still incomplete!!!! don't u hve any wish to complete the 3rd season??

nd u weren't aweful dear.. u were amazing writer from d very beginning.. now-a-days reading ur OS s.. nd my fav is undoubtedly "My Dream" ... best one to me.. plz kp writing..

t.c..
luv,
Sargam 😊



Awhh.. thank you.. Yeah I did continue it here. And left a note on the blog, but it caused issues so I guess the note was removed.. Well either way, it doesn't matter because I'm planning to restart the whole thing. I have actually restarted it. Just not posted it up 😊

Awhh.. 'My Dream' was one really close to my heart. I guess because it was the first one where I had to go against readers..! 😆 But the one I probably gave my all to was 'The Devil's Advocate'. I remember being emotionally drained after writing that.

And yeah.. I'll keep writing! It's a hobby I never want to let go of.. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Enchantress

This is just perfect. I m eagerly waiting what is gonna happen.. Do pm for updates.. If yes , add me to the list...


Continue soon!!!

Dee



There's only one more chapter left for this. And I do have a pm account, but it's for AR stories mainly. And I plan to write more AR than AsYa so if you're interested in AR.. you could add me there 😊

Otherwise just keep an eye out for the last update.

Thank you so much!!

Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
uff man this is soo good plz continue👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
ahhh that was wonderful!! Great job!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh My God I love, love, love your story!!!!!👏
I just stumbled across it this morning, and read all three chapters at one go. You write so well that I could feel the pain that Asad and Zoya both feel and the confusion that they were going through was heart-wrenching...but I loved the small gestures of love that were present also. Of course I love the engraving on the ring, Asad placing the jacket around Zoya and even the part where Asad doesn't want to get engaged under the special light effects done by Zoya.
Bravo, beautiful story... Looking forward to the next chapter.
Would love a PM when you update, thanks.

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