AsYa OS: Lost pt 2/pg 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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and you shall continue the story ...plzzz👍🏼
luv it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! The angst and their emotions really shine through with your writing! Loved the OS but really hope it doesn't happen in the show!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE and PLEASE PM ME ONCE YOU UPDATE :):):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ufff could feel the pain in both...do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wat i luv abt wikends is Far's OS. yup jst in by my retard phn 2 chk if i gt treatd by 1 or nt n wolla i m!! Far prt 2 i wnt dn i wil commt a bigy1 coz worth my repetd crashd acess2 if lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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came across this randomly but after reading it believe me im glad.. though it was sorrowful n sad but it echoed their feelings so well.. luv u for portraying it so well.. plz do write some more.. u have a knack for it.. god bless..:) :*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
I just love it...
Please continue it asap!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You write very well. 😊 You should really consider writing a second part to this. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG girl you choked me up...
a superb display of their emotions, angst and torturous turmoil.
an excellent piece of work.


p.s- i will killl you if this happens in the show. and i mean it. 😳😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its very nice 😊 If possible please continue 😊

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