AsYa OS: Lost pt 2/pg 5 - Page 3

wow far.. this is so awesome loved it.. beautifully written 👏

really nice plzz do continue!!!!

Nice. Do continue if you can.

I have no words to describe how good this was
i have tears in my eyes right now
and plz write another part

This was very sad. Sad yet beautiful. Now of course I'd love another part but its entirely up to you.

oh my god. this was way too beautiful yaar👏👏👏

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! THERE HAS TO BE ANOTHER PART!!!!!!

Loved it!

Hey guys, here is the second part, since a lot of you requested it

Part 2:

Asad stood in front of the mirror, dressed in a blue sherwani. It was the day, but the groom himself wasn't happy

He stared at himself, who is he? What happened to him?

……………

Zoya, Tanveer, Najma and some other girls sat in a room, fixing up the bride's attire, well Zoya wasn't. She sat by the window, staring out to the sky, seeing the drops of rain falling onto the ground, as it made a "drip" noise.

Great, even the weather matched my mood. She thought.

She pulled off a smile in front of everyone, but only she knew how she felt. Only if she could just leave,

"Zoya…" Najma called her from the back.

Zoya quickly wiped the tears which escaped her eyes.

She turned, plastering a smile on her face

"Hmm?" she stood up

"Zoya, come help us na?" Najma asked

Zoya smiled and walked over, taking the necklace from Najmas's hand and adjusting it around Tanveer's neck.

She looked at Tanveer through the mirror, who smiled at the girls, who teased her on her special day.

Zoya smiled, I could've been in –

No! She wiped away those thoughts

He made his decision, he doesn't love me…

Her eyes began welling up again and she quickly picked up the bangles, trying to busy herself, trying to change her thoughts.

…………….

"Are you sure about this Asad?" A concerned Dilshaad asked

Asad turned back to face the mirror, and picked up his watch

"Ofcourse I'm sure, the wedding is today Ammi, why wouldn't-"

"Who are you trying to convince? Me? Or yourself?" Dilshaad asked cutting in

"Asad, three lives are at stake, your one decision will ruin all three, yourself included." She continued

Asad didn't say a word

He walked to his wardrobe and opened the drawer; he froze for a second as he stared down at the earring inside.

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The girls in the room were giggling, as they stood Tanveer up, who was dressed beautifully and adorned with beautiful jewelry.

They started walking out, Tanveer in the middle, smiling.

Zoya stood still; she couldn't get herself to move.

Everyone in the room exited, but Zoya just stood there.

"Sorry Phuphi, Najma, Tanveer…I just can't do it…" she said to herself

She sat on a chair, holding her head in her hands.

……………….

Asad looked up as Tanveer descended the stairs alongside with his sister, but the one person his eyes searched for wasn't there.

He looked back down.

Tanveer was seated on the opposite side on the transparent curtains and soon the Kazi started the ceremony.

"Asad Ahmed Khan, Kya aapo yeh nikaah qhubool hai?" The Kazi asked

There was silence

What should I say? Yes, no?

The crowd started mumbling things to one another, while the Kazi asked once again.

Tanveer stared growing nervous, gripping her dupatta into a fist.

"Qubool Nahi Hai" Asad said

Everyone in the crowd gasped.

…………..

Zoya looked at the entrance, it was awfully too quiet. Why weren't people dancing or clapping?

She stood up walking towards the exit, when she almost ran into Najma

"Zoya…" she exclaimed

Zoya frowned seeing the worried look on her face

Najma gripped her hand and started pulling her downstairs,

One walking down, she saw everyone quiet, serious.

What's happening? She said to herself.

Everyone turned to face her

"Phuphi? What's going on?" She asked

Dilshaad looked at Asad

"I denied this marriage" Tanveer spoke

Everyone looked at her

"Zoya, I can't marry someone who loves another girl"

Saying this she touched Zoya's shoulder and walked past.

Zoya looked at her retreating back and when she turned back to face everyone else she found Asad walking toward her.

She gulped.

He picked up her hand, leaving her startled

He looked at her and smiled slightly, putting her hand against his heart

"Mujhe Zoya Qubool Hai…" she said

Everyone in the room started smiling and jumped up in excitement.

It took Zoya a good two minutes to realize what she meant, and her eyes widened.

She her face, as if she saw a ghost, Asad smiled, that too showing his teeth.

"Uhh, Mr. Mr-"

"I love you" He said, loud enough for her to hear.

She froze. Did he just confess?

He stroked her cheek

"I love you and will you marry me?"

Zoya held her head and smiled

"Yes, I will marry you!"

He smiled and pulled her into his hard chest, holding her in his embrace

This is what I wanted, Zoya, I guess I'm not lost anymore…..

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Okie, how was it? I know it was short, sorry bout' that

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PS:

Everyone Thank you for encouraging me on, love you all, your beautiful comment make me smile...thats why I wanna see everyone comment😆

@MisHumtyDumrty: Ankie you better leave a decent comment now that I gave you part 2, or else…😈

@blueflames: Sorry yaar, don't kill me, I'm sure part one is gonna be a decoy for the big bang…please don't kill me 🤣