|Mat Aazma Re|- AsYa One Shot. - Page 6

Originally posted by: Rushitaa

you.
yes you.
you are a true writer. holy shit, It's been a while since I've read something this flawless.
😆 and I apologize, I'm sorta short of words so I can't tell you how much I loved this.
I'd read it over and over again. That's how brilliant this is! 😊

WOW!
I think this is one of the best compliments I got for my writing 😊 It really made me happy.
Thank u sooo much! 🤗

Im really very gald you liked it!

Originally posted by: mochhug

This was so beautiful. I could actually imagine it as if I was there watching them :) You have a gift hun :) Please PM me if you do anymore OS's or continue this one :)

Thank u 🤗
Ill surely PM u if I do write more OS's, hopefully ill get inspired again soon 😃
This however will remain just an OS. I suck at updating FF's 😆 so il only stick to OS's.

It was mindblowing !!
You are an amazing writer..YOu are writing exactly as i had pictured it..
YOu brought the sizzling chemistry bw them in such a beautiful way.. I LOVED it.
Pls continue sooon and PM me when you update.. Thanks.

Originally posted by: meow23

amazngg.. luvd de way u descibed it with the songg

Thank u dear 🤗
I felt it suited the scene!

Originally posted by: --Kriti--

amazinggg work... loved it

Thank u 😃

Originally posted by: soumyasingh

seriously awesoommee!!!!

i have a warm tingly feeling all over... *sigh*

I wish the real asad were like this...

anyway you write really well...

Please turn this into a multiple shot SS or something...

Please please please please!!!

for the sake of the people who love this story...

Pretty please..😕

Thanks!

oh and haan...PM me if you do decide to do...

after all I'll need a place to gloat that I convinced you the update more...hehe...😆

Hahahahaha! Your seriously adorable!😃
But sach kahun tum log mujhe jhoote aur eggs maroge agar maine isko SS ya FF banaya toh 😆
because I NEVER update on time or regularly. Which why I stick to only OS's now.

But since you and everyone else have given me such wonderful feedback I will surely write more OS's 😊

Thank u very much dear! 🤗

Originally posted by: delena90

Ms. Farrouqi romance isse kehte hai!

Loved the OS Rinnie. Fantastic description of nervousness, attraction, insecurity and love. Just brilliant. You really need to write more.

I wish the scene had played out the way you have written it today. You have got Asad and Zoya's characterization down to the T. Literally those were exactly the feelings they were felling with all their flip-flopping around.

'I can't wait for you to write more! Kudos!

Pri dear 🤗

@The first sentence: WOW! 😳 Asad ke muh se compliment diya mujhe 😉

Thank u so much dear! Coming from such a good writer like you, it has truly made me very happy!

Actually I need to thank you, its due to our discussion regarding Asad that I was able to write their characters so well here! So thanks a lot for your insight into AAK's head!


I will surely try and write more when I get time or Asad REALLY inspires me 😉

Originally posted by: Starshina

It was mindblowing !!
You are an amazing writer..YOu are writing exactly as i had pictured it..
YOu brought the sizzling chemistry bw them in such a beautiful way.. I LOVED it.
Pls continue sooon and PM me when you update.. Thanks.

Thank u very much! 🤗

That was my aim to have you guys connect and be able visualise the scene and im glad I could do that!
This is my first OS on Asya so im really happy with the response and will surely write more OS's on them!

Thank u again!

Originally posted by: Geet_Ha

Awesome😊

Thank u! 😃

Originally posted by: viya.mallik4eva

This is too good.

Thank u very much 🤗