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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

hey, its nt final one...

Ryt??

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Gunia

@|Persephone|

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Awesome fic! I love your writing style and the fact that it was all in English! lol! It was very well thought out, yet short! The pace was great! Kudos!! And hope to see more from you soon!

Gunia

PS: if you still have issues with your account, do PM me... I'll look into it more!

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zahrak2013

@zahrak2013

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

I cant reply individually due to problems with the website. But I would like to thank everyone who has commented in this post. I will hopefully get back to everyone individually soon. Thank you for your responses

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Hey ...

That was uh-mazing !!!

Ugh !! Asad's anger brings the worst of him ... >.<

But he does realize his mistake and repents ... :(

I love the way Ayan made Asad realize all his mistakes ... Unintentionally !! :|

Oye Hoye ... The proposal was mindblowing !! :D

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princess84

@princess84

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

can't wait to read the next installment continue soon

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Very well written.Dialogue,sentence structure,has been well thought with scenes etched out and excecuted well.The range of emotions of both Asad and Zoya were depicted with alot of conviction, that the Asad breakdown in the room scene really did have me in tears .The angst,remorse,pain and inner tumoil was protrayed in just the right amounts..this is actually how I would have liked to see that scene play out in the actual show,but it didn't go as deep into bringing out the emotions of Asad or Zoya for me.You managed to pen down Zoya's hurt and anxiety in just the right doses too...I seriously was literally crying buckets.The reunion at the airport was truly soul stirringly magical.The private moment in that room together away from all the hustle and bustle was much need indeed.They both had to have on on one heart to heart and most importantly Asad did have some explaining to do which Zoya was no doubt entitled to hear.
The ending was short,sweet,simple and liked the subtle,wit and humour used and most importantly the ending was not left hanging in the lurch but recieved appropriate closure.
All in all a great write up!👍🏼You really should write some more,would love to see what else you have to offer!😊

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Fimmy

@Fimmy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Wow! This is amazing! This ss is superb!
Loved it...
Please do write more... 😃

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vibha01

@vibha01

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

IT WAS SUPERB... I JST LUVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAITIN FOR D NEXT PART...

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

loved it to the core! AWESOME

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Rockerchic

@Rockerchic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Very well written. I think you've captured these emotions so perfectly. Asad and Zoya are exactly as they should be. Confused!Angsty!Asad is a treat, yep that's my sadistic side speaking out. And you've done such a faboulus job with it.

Zoya, her heartbreak, her sadness, so beautifully done.

LOVED it.

Keep writing, you're very talented.

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