ASYA FF KHAMO0SIYAN pt5 pg 10 updated do read - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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great update 👏
continue soon...

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Originally posted by: Sajilisha

great update 👏
continue soon...

thankyou dear
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Amazing! Continue soon and please PM me!! Thank youuu!! 😃

thankyou dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wouaaa i loved it !! i wanna read more and gosh my respect for dilshad has increased even more in ur ff xD
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Originally posted by: -Laiba-

wouaaa i loved it !! i wanna read more and gosh my respect for dilshad has increased even more in ur ff xD

thanks you dear😊dilshad is a nice and sweet character 😊
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Part 3:





"House looks nice from outside but I know it's a home from inside unless like mine place from outside and stone and stone from inside having all the loneliness and dark ess." Thinking zoya

"beta andar chalo ab se yeh ghar bhi tumhara hai "says dilshad patting zoya head with love

"yehi to mera ghar tha hamesha se bas upar wala hi likna bhool gaya meru naseeb mein isey "thinking zoya about her fate unknown of the fact that god has written only this house in her fate

"arman zoya ka saman us key room mein rakho aur muskaan tum kuch drink ley ayo "says dilshad giving instruction to both

"ji ammi "says both simultaneously

"zoya baito beta thak gayi hogi tum kuch pi lo aur phir rest karna "says dilshad

"thak gayi hoon par aram hi nahi milta mujhey ya kabhi miley ga hi nahi "says zoya dejectly

"zoya aise naraz nahi hotey khud ki marzi se ghuna hota hia bachey , ab sab teek hoga mujhey pura yakeen hain khuda par"says dilshad knowing what zoya has beared

"ap par hi too yakeen hai warna yahan nahi ah pati ,acha yeh batain phupi sab kahan hain "says zoya trying to change the topic atleast

"tumharey phupa ji had gone to meeting with asad , they will be back late night actually the meeting is in different city and najma is gone to her college sham tak ajayey gi aur new generation I meant tumharey bhayu kids are gone to the madrisa gaye hain thori dair ajayin gey aur phir is ghar mein koi na koi shaitani hoti hi rahey gi "says dilshad smilingly telling about her happiness,her family

"bhayu key kids wow they must be so innocent and cute kiya naam hain unkey "says zoya smilingly whole heartly

"ur bhayu has two kids ayan is 7 years old and aliya is 5 years old , dono jaan hai sab ki ik ansoo bhi unki ankoon mein koi bardaasht nahi kar saktta "says dilshad

"ayaan and aliya bohat khooobsurat naam hain ,phupi wo kiya sab ko pata hai merey barey mein "says zoya little hesitatedly

"yeh bhi kiya baat hui zoya tum is ghar ki bhi beti ho aur tumharey barey mein janey ka haq sab ko hai "says dilshad understanding why she asked this question

" abu key salook key baad kaisey I mean……….."stopped zoya

"bhai galat nahi they unka waqt galat tha aur wo us waqt key sath baitey chaley gay , agar wo nasha unkey sar par savar na hota to sab teek hota par khuda ka likha wo hi janta hai "says dilshad

"pata nahi phupo kiya likha hia lets leave all this , I want to rest now kal se office bhi join karna hai "says zoya

"chalo ayo tumhara room dikayun "says dilshad and they walk for zoya room




"kaisa laga yeh tumhara room hai , next right side room najma ka hai aur left mein corner wala asad ka hia ,thora rest kar lo evening mein ut jana tab tak se mil bhi laina "says dilshad

"bohat pyara hai room phupi thanks "says zoya

"dubara thanks kahan to marun gi "says dilshad laughingly

"k my queen"says zoya

EVENING:

"bhai meri choco do na warna mein ammi ko apki sexy gf ka bata dungi " says a girl

"meri gf nai hai wo meri enenmy hai wo dayan samji choti"says the boy

"acha phir ab ne ussey kissi kyun kit hi kal uskey gal par "says girl

"mein nahi ki hi wo meri ball uskey ghar gir gayi thi aur givi and take karti hain to karna para warna mein bohta shareek hoon "says boys looking angry at the girl thought

"acha ap shareek ho na to mri choco do abhi mujhey "says the girl putting hand on her hips

"choco wo to us gandi larki ne cheen li "says boys looking down

"acha ab to mein ammi ko kissi ka batun gi "says the girl and starts running inside the house for complaining and the boy start running after her to stop and they both collieded with a tall and unknown figure

"ap kaun ho aunty"says girl

"aur yahan kyun ho hamarey ghar mein bina puchey nahi andar atey bad manners hotey hain "says the boys

"opps! I am sorry pehlay sawal ka jawab hai mera naam zoya rizwan khan and doosrey sawal ka jawab mein pooch kar ayi thi apki dilshad dadu se happy na"says zoya replying to kids bending on her knees to their level

"zoya phupo"says both kids together and hugs zoya tightly . zoya feels happy that kids calle her phupi and hugged her

"ap mujhy jantey ho mein to aj hi ayi hoon "says zoya innocently

"ap bhi phupi kid ho ap to family ho aur family and sab janttey hain "says the girl

"right kiddo par meri family hi mujhey nahi janti"says zoya

"kya "says the boy

"kuch nahi bacho "says zoya

"ab ao batao hum kaun hai ap humein jantey ho kiya"says the girl

"oh yeh to bohat muskil hai let me guess ap zaroor aliya ho aur ap ayaan ho ..right"says zoya thinkingly

"yes phupi " says kids

"acha ap bhag kyun rahey they lag jati to " says zoya

"wo phupi mujhey bhai ki complain karni bhai ne meri choco uss gandi larki ko dey I am angry from him now "says aliya looking away from her brother

"I am sorry kiddo phupi wo uss ne cheen li "says ayaan looking down because he made her sis sad

"oh to yeh baat hai agar mein ap ki problem hal kar doon to kaise "says zoya

"wo kaisey phupi "says ayaan

"lets go to my room and I will show u "says zoya

"ok phupi lets go "says aliya

kids hold zoya hand and walks into her room and open her suitcase and gets a box of choclate and gives it to aliya

"I love u phupi I love you so much"says aliya expanding her both hands

"I love you too honey "says zoya and hugs aliya

"and me ?" says ayaan looking at the two

zoya and aliya look at each other and smiles naughtily and says "aur tum lets us think …..ok ok we love yoy too champ"zoya and welcome ayaan into t

heir hug too.thats how muskaan found them

"tum dono yahan atey hai phupi ko pareshan kar diya na "says muskaan

"nahi bhabi we were knowing each other right bacho "says zoya defending them

"lo ab tum bhi yeh bohat shaitan hogaye hain zoya aur pamper maat karo warna baad mein tumhein hi tang karaein gey yeh shaitan"says muskan

"bhabhi dnt worry I wont let them do anything wrong and they are so cute na I love them"says zoya looking at the kids who r busy eating chocolates

"we love you too phupi "says and hugs her and some choclate fell on zoya dress

"sorry phupi wo galti se ho gaya "says kids fearing that zoya might get angry

"its k bacho hota hai ap sab chalo mein ati hoon dress change kar key k "says zoya

"tum change kar lo aur neechay ajao aur sab evening tea sath mein lain gay aur tum najma se bhi mil laina "says muskaan







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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww thd part was sooo cute yet short! i waw expecting Asad entry till the end xD and mudt say the khan family r defo do sweet! i wish i get a sasural likr tht too haha continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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all parts in one go dear . Loved them a lot .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Laiba-

aww thd part was sooo cute yet short! i waw expecting Asad entry till the end xD and mudt say the khan family r defo do sweet! i wish i get a sasural likr tht too haha continue soon :)

thanks you dear asad entry will be after one more part and nect part is zoya encouner with najma , zoya has to encounter with each person differently😊
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Part 4:

"nothing is perfecy.life is messy.relationships are complex.people are irrational."


Hugh Mackay


We r sitting in a garden at the front of the house , its beautifull and peaceful place to be .muskan bhabi and dilshad phupi is siting with us hert chatting about their normal routine andi am just listening . they r not saying something great but those words are healing my pain and wound of loneliness and been unlovedn . I was always pushed toward the darkness and wealth of fake things.

"zoya where r u lost"says dilshad shaking me

"sorry phupi I was thinking about me "says zoya

"about u ? koi rajkumat hai kya ap ki life mein"says muskaan teasing me

"rajkumar ! ha these words are not for my world di sorry mera bhabi"says zoya

"di sounds great from ur mouth and I loved it when u called me di plz bhabhi maat bhulao di kaho gi mujhe plz "says muskan with a beautiful smile

"jaisa ap kaho di "says zoyaa

"thankyou pari "says muskaan giving a shock to zoya

"ap ko yeh naam kaisey pata di"says zoya

"hum sab jaante hain bacha ………..heehe ……….sorry bad dialogue tumharey bhayu ne bataya "says muskaan

"oh …k"says zoya

"muskan arman aur najma kahan hain "says dilshad

"ammi arman bhair gaye hian dinner tak ajyin gaye aur najma andar hai kamre mein "says muskaan

"najma ko bhulao zoya se mil le aur dost ban jaye dono"says dilshad and muskan leave to call for najma

"zoya kal aram kar lo aur parson se chali jana jet lag ho gaya hoga na "says dilshad

"phupi wo………"was cutted by "asalam o alikum ammi apne bhulaya mujhe "says

a girl of 21

"walikum salam beta ……mein bhualya tha tumhein tum abhi tak zoya se nahi mili na yeh hai zoya tumharay mamu ki beti aur hamari pari"says dilshad

"asalam o alikum najma "says zoya and come forward to hug najma but she takes a step back

zoya looks sadly at najma and she knew from this one step that what she was thinking is coming true . najma doesn't like her and will not love her , her dream is shattering again but no one else is at fault . she was drifted to her pain again by the fate.najma was looking at her like a alien , like she doesn't know she existed in this world .

dilshad didn't liked the back step of najma . she didn't like been zoya treated like this , she knew this cause zoya immense pain .she wanted to scold najma but she knew zoya will blame her self for that and she didn't wanted to zoya more pain .

"najma what Is this ?u didn't replied to zoya salam and why back out she is ur sister "says dilshad gritting her teeth and showing anger in her voice but taking care of nt hurting zoya more

"Sorry ammi I cant suddenly hug a stranger and accept her as my sister . I know its rude but I cant fake relation like others "says najma looking away from zoya .zoya felt immense pain in her heart by najma words but they were true and yet untrue .

"najma behave urself and says salam to zoya and call her appi she is 2 year elder to you "says dilshad

"walikum salam zoya appi "says najma and turns toward dilshad and says " is that enough ammi now can I go ,I have to complete my assignment . I will see you at dinner " and leaves

dilshad was going to shout at najma but zoya holds her hand to stop her phupi and moves her head saying no .

"zoya I am sorry ,najma thori moody type hai par dil ki bohat achi uski baat ka bura maat mana , jaise tumhein jane gi tu khud tumharey kareeb ajay gi aur sorry bhi kahey gi "says dilshad sadly

"its k phupi life and relationship doesn't goes our way all the time , some thing needs times and as far as najam she is kid and she doesn't knows me but we will be k soon trust me I will try to bring her close to me "says zoya

"mein janti hoon zoya aisa hi hoga aur uski ki kisi bhi baat ko dil par lagana merey liyey"says dilshad patting her head with love

"muskan dinner ki tayari karo mein zara ati hoon "says dilshad to muskaan

"ji ammi mein abhi karti hoon "says muskaan

"di mein bhi ap ki help karti hoon plz na maat kehna mein bore hojayun gi "says zoya trying to change the mood and they all leave for different directions.

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