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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was excellent

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Quite good

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: enrique

It was excellent


I liked it

Quite good

Plzzz update soon

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ur welcome dear i will update it today😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

Running away from truths are like running away from urself . I wish I could ran so far from my self that I wouldn't remember anything but some wishes are ungranted .

I came out of the departure gate looking for some known but yet unknown faces ,I didn't knew who is going to come to pick me up but I knew phupi will be there for me like my childhood times and I was correct she was standing waiting for me.


She waved her hand at me and I smiled at her and started walking toward her , she reconized me may be my mother mailed her my pic.we both stood infront of each other . there were tears in eyes and smiles on our faces for been together again .



"zoya meri beti''''"I didn't let her finished her and hugged her so tightly like I holded my life in my arms.


We broke the hug and she kissed my on my forehead and asked me "kaisi ho beta "


"zinda hoon phupi "says zoya dejectly



" aisa nahi kehtey beta '''..chalo ghar chaltey hain beta "says dilshad


"par phupho mein hostel mein rehna chati hoon plz"says the embariss zoya


" zoya mere jeety huay tum kahan nahi jayo gi chalo arman zoya ka saman rakho car mein"says dilshad clearly the idea of zoya .


zoya then noticed there was a tall and handsome man with brown eyes and a lady with fair skin next to her and look at her with a smile on their face . she didn't reconized the lady but remember the man as bhayu from her childhood memories. Dilshad then remember that she forgot to introduced her children to zoya .


"zoya meet my elder son Arman and his wife muskaan "says dilshad


"salam muskaan bhabi and bhayu''''I mean arman bhai"says zoya embarssingly as she was used to call him in their younger days


"walikum salam pari and its always bhayu for you and always will be k "says armaan smiling . he was more than happy that she remembered him as her bhayu .she was only one who used to call her and used to says "he is only and only my bhayu"


"ji bhayu"says zoya


"welcome zoya to India "says muskaan smiling and welcoming her


"shukriya bhabi jaan"says zoya feeling little relaxed



"lets go home bacho"says dilshad


"ji ammi lets go"says armaan and came near zoya to take her luggage


"mein kar loon gi bhayu "says zoya


"janti hoon pari par itna haq to do na mujhe kay tumhara kuch bhoj mein uta sakun "says arman pointing not toward her luggage but toward her pain too .


"apka hi to haq banta hia bhayu " says zoya with little tears . arman wiped her tears and took her luggage and moved toward their car or new journey.

Edited by maria_awan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice part...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cute updt ...cont soon...thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing! Continue soon and please PM me!! Thank youuu!! 😃
Posted: 12 years ago
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It was nice part dear

Plz update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...nice i like your expression
esp the diary wala part i love reading diaries maybe because i have myself been keeping a personal diary since grade 6...now i have like 7 thick journals...writing the 8th one...lol
anyways nice cont soon and dont forget to pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i will update it on monday 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fimmy

Nice part...
Cont soon...
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