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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kukuzgeet

nice but short and yaar ab Asad ki entry karwa bhi de

thanks dear and yah asad is entering in next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
very nicely written dear
thanx for the pm..![/QU
thanks ronnie
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5


Dinner was a quite affair . everyone as happy and smiling and they were trying to make me feel like my home but no one knew it was and is my only home where I got only love and love. But there was also some one who was quiet throughout the dinner that was najma .



She was behaving little stranger .i felt she was angry for me been here but she was not saying anything about it but she was observing me like she wanted to guard herself or her family . I felt I was seeing a part of me in her as I used to stay quite and feel the other person behaviour toward me. I will not hurt any of them this is the only promise I made to my self and I smiled at najma when I saw her starring at me and she turned her face away .


Everyone gone to sleep after saying shab-khari to each other .phupi and bhayu kissed my forehead and najma's too. I was tossing and turning on my bed . I was tired by all the tossing it was midnight and I didn't felt sleepy because I slept in the evening . I was feeling thirsty after my midnight turning session but there was no water in my room so I walked downstair to the kitchen . I was going to step into the kitchen but suddenly I heard the footstep of some one in the kitchen . fear engulfed me , all the bad thoughts came to my mind. I was thinking may be a thief came into the house and was trying to steal something .i was getting sacred but the thought of my phupi and everyone safety came into my mind . I start looking around for something with which I can hit that midnight moron and show with whom house he is messing around .




I saw a vase , it was very nice . I said sorry to this vase because it was Going to break on someone head instead of feeling perfect in its place . I said sorry to the vase and without making any sound I stept into kitchen and saw he was standing infront of the fridge and was drinking some juice . I got angry at him how coolly he was standing in someone home and drinking juice "free ka maal samajat hai gadha kahin ka " although he have a heroic body I could feel his abs and his muscles even in the darkness but aisi ki taisi is midnight owl ki .




I holded the vase tightly and moved toward him and stood behind him and look at his head for perfect aim. He felt someone presence behind him and as he turned I hitted him with the vase quiet hardly and he holded his head and said "ouch". I was going to make him unconscious by hitting him again but he caught me and pushed me to wall next to the window and before I could screamed he putted his right hand at my mouth and turned my right hand behind my back and vase fell on the floor and broke into pieces .

vase:





Light was coming from the kitchen window and felt on us . he had the perfect features , his brown eyes were so smoothing that I stood like a statue just melting by looking at his eyes , his lips were smelling like strawberry and the anger in the eyes made him more handsome and more desirable . I was loosing my self and it felt so good to be held in his arms but suddenly it all felt wrong how I can feel like this about a thief and I pushed him away . I felt so strong I wanted to pat my back for pushing such a handsome hero shit a thief yeh mera dimag na friends galat jagah hi kyun jata hia hehe…

"how dare you enter my home like this u midnight owl "shouted zoya

"what ? who r u tell me this and how come this house became yours you ghar chor"shouted the man

"u called me a ghar chor you juice chor , leave this house otherwise I will called the police and wo bohat mare gi mujse bhi ziyada samjhe tum "shouted zoya again

"u again called me by a weird name u miss speaker" shouted the man

"me a speaker u r a loud speaker and yes u r chor warna itni raat kisi key ghar mein kya karahay ho tum mister pata dhol"says zoya

"hello miss this is my home and I can do anything here samji tum "says the man irritated

"oye liar yeh ghar miss dilshad khan ka tumhara nahi "says zoya by pointing a finger at him

"and miss dilshad khan Is my mother samji tum aur hoti kaun ho tum mujse yeh sab puchne wai "says the man

"r u by any chance the second son of this house "says zoya feeling like banging her head with same vase that is one the floor "chal koi gal nahi zoya ji uska twin piece bahir hi wo tumhare kaam ayey ga " thinking about herself and the trouble she putted herself in

"finally tubelight jail madam ki yes I am the second son of this house I am ASAD AHMED KHAN "says asad

"oh ….u r asad ……hi I mean asalam o alikum asad ji "says zoya meekily

" who r u miss "says asad taking a guess by the new way of reciving a midnight hi like this

"wo I am zoya ur cousin "says zoya

" ap hain zoya khan mamu ki beti and hamari cousin "says asad with a smirk

"ji"says zoya

" I am waiting for some thing from you "says asad smirking at zoya

" waiting but I dnt have to give u something "says zoya

"oh ho dear u have it a "SORRY" how does it sound "says asad

"why should I say a sorry it should be you who should be saying it jaldi kahin I have to sleep too unlike u roaming around the house like a thief"says zoya

"what ?acting smart haan ! u hitted me first so technically u should be saying it first "says asad

"oh no no u were the one acting like a thief light nahi jala sakety thay agar mein maar dalti to "says zoya

"lo ab balahi ka zaman hi nahi raha I didn't wanted to disturb anyone in the night and here u r hitting me "says asad

"ok ok galti dono kit hi so no sorry and now leave me mr khan I have to take water and sleep "said zoya and freed herself from him and took water and walk casually outside . as asoon she left kitchen she ran into her room and asad keep looking at her and says"weird " and too leaves for his room

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
hey...it's me first 🥳🥳


Amazing update dear 😳
luved zoya and asad encounter
Edited by sai.janu350 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Loved the encounter between ASAD & ZOYA...
Loved it Loved it Loved it alot...
Continue soon...
Thnx for PM...

Mariam...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Awesome update continue soon..luv ur character sketch najma is akdu.. Asad seems quite a cool dude..if possible plz pm me nxt tym
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
I jus read ur story in one go and it was amazing!!!!
PlZZ CONTINUE AND UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
hii...thts really nice yr...khamooshiyann...zoya & asad a new world...grt start..& ya...nice pic collection i mst say...pls update it soon & PM me too i don't wanna miss this asad-zoya encounter...again...& pls accept by buddy re for PM too...

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Oh my my! Lovely and very touching story. I had tears in my eyes for the very first two chapters. I felt zoya's pain for craving love.

First encounter with asad was funny. Liked their nok jhok.

Waiting for the next update. Plz post soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: sai.janu350

hey...it's me first


Amazing update dear 😳
luved zoya and asad encounter

thanks dear asad and zoya are opposite attracts😉

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