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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#871

Originally posted by: sasir
awww. long update thanks. but i want asya together soon.plzzz update soon

Well for them to be together togther still a few chapters (if my story goes as I'm planning) BUT there will be some fun chapters ahead with their nok jhok and awkward, funny romance.. if I can do it justice LOL.

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
wheww!!!!!!
finally you updated !
loved the monster update !
i hate that deepak guy . i loved the way how asad & zoe's friends stood upto her .
it was really nice
can't wait to see how asad will win zoe's heart!
awesome update dear & continue soon

love
kiki

Thank you! 😳

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#873

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
Finally an update after a long time

Wow

Gosh

This was fabulous

Hated Deepak

Neeru and Kareena were gr8

AsYa finally had a heart to heart tok

P.s. loved the way Asad protected Zoya

Aww thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Hope it was worth the wait 😆

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#874

Originally posted by: stereohearts200
Oh my gosh! First of all, u FINALLY updated😆. Coming to the update I simply LOVED it! That pig deepak, now I'm gonna hate anyone called deepak. U simply nailed the whole chapter! I was so damn engrossed, that i dint my grandmother had been screaming at me for atleast 5 times before I realized she was evn there. And this was a total monstrosity, u maintained all the emotions all the way through and this chapter was so long, god knows how u were able to write like that throughout. I seriously dunno what else to say, i'm awestruck. I'm also kinda jealous. Seriously, I loved it!

😆 yesses I update FINALLY. Oh no! LOL my brother's name is Deepak 🤣 I just couldn't think of any other Indian names, and I didn't want to repeat the ones in the stories written by others LOL.

AWW you're a sweetheart! Seriously feedback and compliments like this make me so happy, especially since I'm still not 1100% confident in my writing LOL why are you jealous? reading your comment I think you would write great stuff too

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: Kaya13
Fantastic...awesum...jhakas update..u describe emotions so aptly!

Aw thanks, Kaya! 😳😳

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
wow tis is really beautifull...felt all the pain tat zoya had to go through...finally asad manage to break a bit of her wall n slowly he will regain all her trust again...tis was just superb n beautifully written...such a great update after so long...it one of my favourite ff...thx fr the pm n please pm me fr the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next part...

AWW one of your favourites!? *cries* 😆 I'm SOOO glad 😳😳 yes he managed to melt her a little. Little by little he'll do that more. But will it be enough for her to believe he trusts her? We shall see 😛

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#877

Originally posted by: Kurup
This is freakingly amazing mannn...I wonder how i missed such a beautiful script all these days, but I am glad that though late I found it and could read it...and let me tell u dude every single chapter that u penned down is such beautiful that i am at loss of words...

Please PM with ur future updates...I have sent u a buddy request...do accept and plz plz plz take the pain to PM me with ur future works...

Aww if course I shall PM you! No pain at all! I just PM all my buddies 😆 So no worries! Now that you're on the buddy list, you shall defs get PMs on future updates. And thank you sooo much! I'm really flattered! And I always LOVE getting new readers! 😛 Hope I can live up to your expectations 😃

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#878

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Finally after a long time their is an update.. Very very happy. And, it was a long one.. I m more and more happy.

That Deepak.. I just wanted to strangle him to death.. Allah miyaan what is wrong with him? How can he say such things.. is he a human for real because human have some humanity.. And, he din;t had a bit of it.. Asad handled it.. But, m some way happy about this Deepak fiasco. Atleast, after this Asad has an idea of how gravely he has hurt her and he knows how much more he has to do to bring her back. And, also they discussed things. The issues are not sorted but they started taking steps. That is enough for now.

Loved it..

Do continue asap,

Dee

YES! I'm glad you caught that! That's exactly what i was going for! Not only does he have to show her he trusts her, but make understand just how much he loves and values her now. And this was a small breakthrough for him, but a significant one indeed. It is enough for now. But with Asya, when is enough enough? 😆

Thanks for the lovely comment! So glad you liked it 😳