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Posted: 12 years ago

#861

Originally posted by: ButterflyKisses
YESSS!!!! AWESOME MONSTER UPDATE!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 LOVEDDD IT. ❤️ Asad's protectiveness for Zoe, the regret and guilt...everything was amazing. 👏 👏 👏 Loved how Deepak got scared of Asad. 😆 I hate that guy. 😡 🤬 And it was so sweet how Zoe's friends knew that AsYa belong together!!!! It was all so dramatic and emotional. 😭 Beautifully written. ⭐️ Loved the way u wrote this, u captured all the emotions extremely well. 👏 👏 👏 LOVEITLOVEITLOVEIT. 😳 AsYa scenes were the best. 😊 Update soon, girlie! 😉

Aww thaaank you 😃 I'm really glad you liked it I shall try! My mom's visiting me so i'll be a little MIA this weekend, but next week I'll have an update for sure

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#862

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
Finally you updated...thanku...lovely update...very very touching...i loved how asad stood up for zoya and how he took care of her...and zoya giving him a piece of her mind was mindblowing...now he knows how much he has hurt her...can't wait to see how he will win her back...please update soon this time😊

Yay! I'm glad you liked it 😃 Haha aww I will I promise 😆 I'll be a little MIA this weekend. But next week you'll have an update for sure 😉

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: fanraya
So lovely, really beautiful, please make Asad confess his love to Zoe.. eagerly waiting for the next one..

Soon, soon, soon 😃

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#864

Originally posted by: immigreat54
ye dil maangay more UPDATES 😛

😆 I see what you did there. Next week for sure 😃

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#865

Originally posted by: Jassieg
Oh my...that was a long update..loved it so much..can't believe how everything came to the same point at the end, asad really need to work hard to gain her trust back..

Hope u post the next chapter soon.

And big thanks for the long and lovely update.

Thanks! Yes I figured once she was able to get passed the words and realize he did not in fact think og her as a musibat, I realized the trust issue should also be addressed because that was the reason he was so mean to her and didn't even pause to hear her explanation.

I shall DEFINITELY update sooner than last time 😆 and you're very welcome 😳

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: Linsie

Thanks 😃😳

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#867

Originally posted by: veenisha

Aww thanks 😳

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#868

Originally posted by: Alveena12
FINALLY YOU UPDATED!! Only me and god know how long I have been waiting for you to update this FF, and you didn't disappoint, the length was fantanstic, I love long updates, so thank you

And I love how you included the whole Deepak scenario in aswel as it made Asad realise to what extent his words damaged Zoya and that a simple sorry won't do this time! it also made him see just how much Zoya suffered and also how strong she is...I really hope that everything moves in a positive direction from now on and the fat that Zoya opened up to him a little is good as she is breaking her wall down a little

please update soon and definitely don't leave it so long, please please please

Yay! I'm glad! I know people must have been getting ready to stike with pitchforks and torches 😆

I'm glad you liked it! Yes i needed something to show him EXACTLY HOW MUCH he hurt her. And how much he took her for granted. It will pretty positive, with him trying his best to show her how much he values her and trusts her. But she also won't give in that easily. Being stubborn Zoya that she is LOL. She's forgiving, but she's proud too and has an ego, just like him. Except he's put his on hold.

aw yeah I promise LOL I won't wait THAT long this time. A few days tops.. by next week for sure you'll have an update as my mom's visiting and I'll be MIA this whole weekend lol.

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#869

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187
Finallly u updated...Loved the update❤️...U have written evry emotion very beautifully...👏👏
Asad's protectivness towards Zoya was great..AsYa moments was AWESOME...☺️
Loved Zoe's friends how they support her...They r true friends...🤗
Thnx for this lovely update...COntinue soon...Thnx for PM...

Mariam...

I think is your longest comment yet 😆 I'm ssooo glad you liked it really 😳 Yay! I'm glad the friends thing was good! 😃

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#870

Originally posted by: iaddiction
amazing monster update!

BUT... call me greedy or what - I want moreee!

Loving the change in Asad :)

Haha I get it. It's been a while. So I know sab ke liye Dil Maangey More 😆

Aw thanks! I was hoping I'd done justice to it. I didn't want it to be too sudden. But I think after 20 chapters, LOL he's bound to be a little less emotionally challenged 🤣