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veenisha

@veenisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

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Alveena12

@Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

FINALLY YOU UPDATED!! Only me and god know how long I have been waiting for you to update this FF, and you didn't disappoint, the length was fantanstic, I love long updates, so thank you

And I love how you included the whole Deepak scenario in aswel as it made Asad realise to what extent his words damaged Zoya and that a simple sorry won't do this time! it also made him see just how much Zoya suffered and also how strong she is...I really hope that everything moves in a positive direction from now on and the fat that Zoya opened up to him a little is good as she is breaking her wall down a little

please update soon and definitely don't leave it so long, please please please

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#843

Finallly u updated...Loved the update❤️...U have written evry emotion very beautifully...👏👏

Asad's protectivness towards Zoya was great..AsYa moments was AWESOME...☺️

Loved Zoe's friends how they support her...They r true friends...🤗

Thnx for this lovely update...COntinue soon...Thnx for PM...

Mariam...

Edited by Mariam.2187 - 12 years ago

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Tv_wale_babu

@Tv_wale_babu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

amazing monster update!

BUT... call me greedy or what - I want moreee!

Loving the change in Asad :)

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#845

awww. long update thanks. but i want asya together soon.plzzz update soon

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#846

wheww!!!!!!
finally you updated !
loved the monster update !
i hate that deepak guy . i loved the way how asad & zoe's friends stood upto her .
it was really nice
can't wait to see how asad will win zoe's heart!
awesome update dear & continue soon

love
kiki

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#847

Finally an update after a long time

Wow

Gosh

This was fabulous

Hated Deepak

Neeru and Kareena were gr8

AsYa finally had a heart to heart tok

P.s. loved the way Asad protected Zoya

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#848

absolutely mind blowing. .

jasbaat kahan laykar jayagay...

love to have a pm

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#849

ull emotional se bhara hora part tha yar..bt i ik it..!!👏

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#850

Oh my gosh! First of all, u FINALLY updated😆. Coming to the update I simply LOVED it! That pig deepak, now I'm gonna hate anyone called deepak. U simply nailed the whole chapter! I was so damn engrossed, that i dint my grandmother had been screaming at me for atleast 5 times before I realized she was evn there. And this was a total monstrosity, u maintained all the emotions all the way through and this chapter was so long, god knows how u were able to write like that throughout. I seriously dunno what else to say, i'm awestruck. I'm also kinda jealous. Seriously, I loved it!