AsYa FF ~ Mere Jazbaat ~ T#1 ~ Link to T#2 Page 1! - Page 54

Originally posted by: Alveena12

OMG I LOVED IT!!!! i had a massive smile on my face when Asad was at Zoya's doorstep and he was smirking at her comments...i think its so cute how Dilshaad Anwar and Zeenat are scheming to get them two together...i really really hope it works and i can't wait for the next chapter...please please please update soon and also make the next chapter a longgg one...please pm me when you update also 😃

wowww...
hmmm... dilshad & anwar are pretty clever . naughty naughty elders..😆
waiting impatiently for the next update
love you dear

wow lovely update... can't wait for next update

wow. this is getting interesting. please continue soon.

Originally posted by: Surish

hey

Aww!!! Its awesome man!!
I love the their team...
Can't wait for the next part..
Plz continue soon :))

Hey <3
Read all in one go
So here are my comments for your ff!
(Each and every single chapter individually )

Chapter 1 : Ugh I hate RAZIA she's a bi*** Poor Dilshaad 😭 She didn't even do anything!
+ Nicely written !!!
Chapter 2 : Ahhh I love ayaan for helping Zoya! And This stupid old lady - Razia! Se slapped Zoya W*F??!!! And Mr. Khan should've went there to help Zoya 😭 I hate Razia frm the bottom of meh heart !!!!
Chapter 3 : ah at leastthere was someone to comfort Zoya! <3 thanks Ayaan ! I feel sad for Zoya 😭 Zoya's hiding her face :( aw I feel sad for her
Chapter 4 : Ah Akdu Ahmad Khan!!! Stop saying such words to Zoya' and Wahh Zoya, a big round of applause for you *claps* i'm proud of you :D
Chapter 5 : Aww Zoya's so sweet unlike Asad -.- but still i love Asad hehe :3 and Oh Batawdekhar! Thank god he's in this ff ! :P miss him tho xD
Chapter 6 : Asad! Don't you understand what's going on? ( In ur dream ) Ah it means she's gonna go! Uff Allah what's wrong with you? And How sweet of Zoya thtshe wasgoing to write a letter for Mr. Khan too :* but MR. KHAN! Do you think it's neccessary to say it out loud? Ah Zoya heard everything :'(
Chapter 7 : Ahhh Asad she's giving you a chance! Apologise c'mon! You useless Akdu Ahmad Khan ( sorry KSG ) xP ah Zoya apologised for every single mistake of hers well actually it's not her fault... But Wahhh :'( ASAD!!!! What the heck are you saying? Uff Allah kill me ! ( just kidding )
Chapter 8 : Asad you idiot ! You should've checked if Zoya was leaving or not ? Who would go out for some fresh air in the middle of the night???such a sweet letter for Phoopi and Najma !
Chapter 9 : Aw Asad was secretly listening to Phoopi and Zoya's convo :3 and Mwahahahha *evil laugh* poor Asad there's not even a single letter for you! While there's one for Najma and Phoopi xD
Chapter 10 : i'm loving Batawdekhar!!! :P and Aw Zoya dreamt of Asad :'( I feel sad for her... CD! Ah thank god this CD was alive! You can't stop thinking about her becoz you pove her idiot !
Chapter 11 : ah thank god Mr. Batawdekhar is here to help Asya! Thank god Ayaan talked to ZOYA ! Or else Mr. Khan wouldn't know where or how to find ZOYA!
Chapter 12 : Yay Mr. Khan is here! That's what I thought! But in reality... Oh god Asad can you stop this woh actually and etc ASAD stop her you idiot ... Mr. Batawdekhar is so sweet how I wish he gave a bit of his sweetness to Asad ! Oh Asad's in love! Finally he realized that he's in love with her I love Phoopi!!!
Chapter 13 : ASAD AHMAD KHAN is in love! Daym im so happyyy ! Finally , his brain is working ! I love you ASAD go and get back your Zoya
Chapter 14 : ' A Man on a Misson' nice name ! I love Zoya and Jeeju's bonding! Asad blushing! The cutest thing in this world! <3 thank god Dilshaad's here to encourage Asad!
Chapter 15.1 - 15.2 : Aww how sweet of Asad to let Zoya see Phoopi and Najma first! <3 ahha Zoya stop lying :3 you can NEVER ignore the fact tht u love Asad and admit it you want to see Asad at least once :P yes Zoya your jeeju is right! You're in love woth Asad! Yes yes Ms. Farooqui hate wala love ... Ishq wala love and hate wala love bhi! Aw their eye lock moments ! Love dem!
Chpater 16 : Appi Jeeju and Phoopi I love you guys! Thank god they're here man! Now the games begin! Yesh yesh im so excited :D
Overall : Nicely written Pm me continue!!!!! Love it! One of my fav FFs!!!!

Originally posted by: Aileen134

Hey <3
Read all in one go
So here are my comments for your ff!
(Each and every sible chater individually )

Chapter 1 : Ugh I hate RAZIA she's a bi*** Poor Dilshaad 😭 She didn't even do anything!
+ Nicely written !!!
Chapter 2 : Ahhh I love ayaan for helping Zoya! And This stupid old lady - Razia! Se slapped Zoya W*F??!!! And Mr. Khan should've went there to help Zoya 😭 I hate Razia frm the bottom of meh heart !!!!
Chapter 3 : ah at leastthere was someone to comfort Zoya! <3 thanks Ayaan ! I feel sad for Zoya 😭 Zoya's hiding her face :( aw I feel sad for her
Chapter 4 : Ah Akdu Ahmad Khan!!! Stop saying such words to Zoya' and Wahh Zoya, a big round of applause for you *claps* i'm proud of you :D
Chapter 5 : Aww Zoya's so sweet unlike Asad -.- but still i love Asad hehe :3 and Oh Batawdekhar! Thank god he's in this ff ! :P miss him tho xD
Chapter 6 : Asad! Don't you understand what's going on? ( In ur dream ) Ah it means she's gonna go! Uff Allah what's wrong with you? And How sweet of Zoya thtshe wasgoing to write a letter for Mr. Khan too :* but MR. KHAN! Do you think it's neccessary to say it put loud? Ah Zoya heard everything :'(
Chapter 7 : Ahhh Asad she's giving you a chance! Apologise c'mon! You useless Akdu Ahmad Khan ( sorry KSG ) xP ah Zoya apologised for every single mistake of hers well actually it's not her fault... But Wahhh :'( ASAD!!!! What the heck are you saying? Uff Allah kill me ! ( just kidding )
Chapter 8 : Asad you idiot ! You should've checked if Zoya was leaving or not ? Who would go out for some fresh air in the middle of the night???such a sweet letter for Phoopi and Najma !
Chapter 9 : Aw Asad was secretly listening to Phoopi and Zoya's convo :3 and Mwahahahha *evil laugh* poor Asad there's not even a single letter for you! While there's one for Najma and Phoopi xD
Chapter 10 : i'm loving Batawdekhar!!! :P and Aw Zoya dreamt of Asad :'( I feel sad for her... CD! Ah thank god this CD was alive! You can't stop thinking about her becoz you pove her idiot !
Chapter 11 : ah thank god Mr. Batawdekhar is here to help Asya! Thank god Ayaan talked to ZOYA ! Or else Mr. Khan wouldn't know where or how to find ZOYA!
Chapter 12 : Yay Mr. Khan is here! That's what I thought! But in reality... Oh god Asad can you stop this woh actually and etc ASAD stop her you idiot ... Mr. Batawdekhar is so sweet how I wish he gave a bit of his sweetness to Asad ! Oh Asad's in love! Finally he realized that he's in love with her I love Phoopi!!!
Chapter 13 : ASAD AHMAD KHAN is in love! Daym im so happyyy ! Finally , his brain is working ! I love you ASAD go and get back your Zoya
Chapter 14 : ' A Man on a Misson' nice name ! I love Zoya and Jeeju's bonding! Asad blushing! The cutest thing in this world! <3 thank god Dilshaad's here to encourage Asad!
Chapter 15.1 - 15.2 : Aww how sweet of Asad to let Zoya see Phoopi and Najma first! <3 ahha Zoya stop lying :3 you can NEVER ignore the fact tht u love Asad and admit it you want to see Asad at least once :P yes Zoya your jeeju is right! You're in love woth Asad! Yes yes Ms. Farooqui hate wala love ... Ishq wala love and hate wala love bhi! Aw their eye lock moments ! Love dem!
Chpater 16 : Appi Jeeju and Phoopi I love you guys! Thank god they're here man! Now the games begin! Yesh yesh im so excited :D
Overall : Nicely written Pm me continue!!!!! Love it! One of my fav FFs!!!!