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Ranee Bhattacharya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Beautiful story... Beautifully written. Thank you

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adiya1714

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

That was amazing but I didn't want Zoya to leave. Finally Dilshad made Asad realize his true feelings for Zoya 😃 Loved it! Thanks for the pm!

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Gudduluvs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Wow..nicce update..luvd it...thnks 4 pm...continue..

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

When do i get the part next? :O

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
When do i get the part next? :O

When you tell me what you thought about this one =P

This came out effortlessly.. and I know what I'm doing for the next one.. but I won't have time to write it for a couple days.. so not before the weekend :( Midterms love sorry

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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lakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

jus read al de prts.. simply superb luvd de wau describd de feelng
waitng for de cliff to gt ovea

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Geetha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Really loved it 😊 Please update soon 😊

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Aww god its so awsome man !!!

Tell uwhat?. I was crying so much when asad was in his mothers lap,,

Aww that so touching

I love ur story..

I hope u will continue soon :)

I cant wait to read part 13 :)

I hope that zoya will return fast

Happy that asad realize he is in love woth zoya :)))))

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

finally inki dimag ka bulb jala

loved it

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: Sirit-of-Dead
Aww god its so awsome man !!!
Tell uwhat?. I was crying so much when asad was in his mothers lap,,
Aww that so touching
I love ur story..
I hope u will continue soon :)
I cant wait to read part 13 :)
I hope that zoya will return fast
Happy that asad realize he is in love woth zoya :)))))

Good lord you'll make me blush 😳 This weekend part 13. Promise 😃 Thanks for the sweet comment