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Jassieg

@Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Sch an emotional chapter..oh how I had Imagined that something like this would happen in qubool hai. I m very satisfied that I am experiencing it in this story..now there story begins...I m sure there is something good in sotre for us in the next chapter.

Wsh u all the best..and update e next part soon..cuz.i m waiting for it desperately. 👏

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: Jassieg
Sch an emotional chapter..oh how I had Imagined that something like this would happen in qubool hai. I m very satisfied that I am experiencing it in this story..now there story begins...I m sure there is something good in sotre for us in the next chapter.

Wsh u all the best..and update e next part soon..cuz.i m waiting for it desperately. 👏

Aww thanks 😊 glad you got a story you wanted out of the show 😃

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav
finally inki dimag ka bulb jala
loved it

🤣 love this.. just wish it would happen in the show haha

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#294

Amazing!!!!!!! Asad's going to new York now right.

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Vaishnavi

@vaishnavi31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

yaaar im sooo sorry i havent read and commented on your wrk recently lekin kya karoon? havent go thtt much time but today im have a day off so i have just reread your FF and fallen in love with again 👏 its just mindblowing yaar and i absolutely love how you incorporated the whole realisation of Asad being in love before he could stop her or get her back❤️ chp 12 was so amazinggg made me tear up😭😭 pleaseee update soon and pm me ill try my best to read n comment asap 😉 great job👍🏼

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

haaayyiii laaa kya jhakaaas update thi maamu!!!

ye qh ke forum waasis ne story writng mein PHD kr rakhi hai kya??? ya likhto yaaar!!! awwwsmmm!! 👏 👏 👏

vry tchy!
cmpltly flawles!!

"Rehne dije, Mr. Khan. Ab sorry kehne ka kya faida? Jis ladki ke guz re hue abbu ko un par sharam a sakta hai, unse aap maafi kyun mangra hai?"

awww thses lines wr soo heart wrenching thy clearly showd hoow deep it hurt her vn he said those words!!! 😭d way u xpresss emotions is jst mind blowing!! 👏👏👏👏 tnooo 4 d PM!! PLZZZ update asap!!!

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

She is gone.. She is really gone. are you kidding me.. Girl, get her back..

Continue soon!!!

~Dee~

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

hey so sorry for the late comment...!!

just read the last two parts...!!!!

omg zoya... she is so much pain and yet trying to show she is happy while talking with ayaan...!!

her and ayaan's convo was lovely...!!!

omg she is actually gone??😲 no... plz tell she didn't go😲

and asad well he finally realized he loves zoya...!!!! and another cliffy😆

continue soon...!!!

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roses.09

@roses.09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Amazing! dilshad is such a sweetheart.. plz update soon..
Will asad follow zoya to ny since he doesnt know tht she can come back??

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: vaishnavi31
yaaar im sooo sorry i havent read and commented on your wrk recently lekin kya karoon? havent go thtt much time but today im have a day off so i have just reread your FF and fallen in love with again 👏 its just mindblowing yaar and i absolutely love how you incorporated the whole realisation of Asad being in love before he could stop her or get her back❤️ chp 12 was so amazinggg made me tear up😭😭 pleaseee update soon and pm me ill try my best to read n comment asap 😉 great job👍🏼

Arre yaar I was wondering where you were lost! 😛 aww thank you 😃 I know some people are annoyed with me for making Zoya leave.. but trust me... the next few chapters (except the next one) will be more light hearted and maybe even... Nice try! Didn't think I was gonna give it away did you 😆

Read your OS btw, AMAZING. Loved him trying not to look at and feeling her proximity. So beautifully written 😳