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really nice dear. do continue your story.
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Hey dear read both parts :) I really liked it and want to read more :D update soon and plz plz pm me when u update plz :) <3
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It's just a story written by me dear.
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Part 3

Asad doesn't know what to do and where to go. He is sitting in his car and crying and remembering Zoya and mitwa movements with her. His phone is ringing and its his Ammi. He pick up the call and can't speak to her. The only word that came out of his mouth was "Ammi" Zoya……….. Dilshad is realy worried now and screaming from the other side Asad what happened where are you? Where is Zoya? And Asad again only one word Ammi….. and crying. Dilshad is trying to talk to Asad but he is not in a position to talk to his Ammi. After sometime he narrates the incident to his Ammi and says that Ammi I don't know where is Zoya? And I don't know how to find her and where to go from here. Dilshad is really worried now and can't believe what he is saying. She is worried for Asad also. She tells Asad that we are coming to Mumbai but Asad says that no Ammi you stay in Bhopal what if Zoya somehow manages to run away from the goons and might try to contact you at home so you and Najma stay there only. I will stay here and I will go to police station and try to find out more from them.

Asad reaches the police station and the inspector in-charge of the case gives full details of the case to Asad and says that Mr. Dhurender has given her belongings to them and he can take her belongings with him if he is related to Miss Farouqi and Asad says yes he is her Fiance and would take her belongings with him. They give him Zoya's suitcase, passport, mobile and hand bag etc. He takes everything and comes out of the police station. He decides to stay in Mumbai only until he finds Zoya so checks in a hotel.

On the other hand we see Zoya in deep sleep and having dream of romantic moments with Asad and suddently Asad's slap and those men and she wakes up screaming again. And Nurse give her another injection which calms her down and puts to sleep. Asad is sitting in hotel room and remembering Zoya and mitwa moments tears are rolling from his eyes. He remembers Mangalpur grave digging scene and screams Zoya and cries a lot and he remembers his last slap to Zoya and he looks at his hand and pick up the glass of water and breaks the glass in his hand. His hand is bleeding and tears are rolling from his hand. His cell phone rings and its his Ammi. He speaks to her and says that Police is still looking for her and tomorrow he will again go to police station but he doesn't know how and where to find Zoya. Dilshad tells him to go to Haji Ali tomorrow and pray there for Zoya's safey and I am sure you will definitely find a clue. Allah will be with you.

Dr Iqbal Khan is in his hospital. He gets a call from the nurse informing him about Zoya's condition. Dr Iqbal is worried and wants to run some tests on her so that he can find if there is any internal injury on her brain. He reaches home and we see that he has 1 son and his wife passed away 2 years ago. He is living with his mom and son in that house. His mom reminds him that he has to go to Haji Ali tomorrow (it is related to some ritual which his wife used to do every year but now Iqbal's mom want him to continue it – I am not going into too details because I am not focusing on Iqbal's story and I have very little knowledge about Muslim religion so don't want to write anything wrong).

He says that tomorrow it is very important that he takes that girl (they don't know her name yet) to the hospital because she is not getting any better. He has to take her with him and she is not in a condition to go to Haji Ali. Iqbal's mom says that if Allah wants her to go there then he will give her strength also. Iqbal says we will decide tomorrow morning. Iqbal goes to Zoya's room and sees that she is sleeping. He decides to check on her and sits there for a while and see Zoya is moving little bit and opening her eyes. Iqbal sits beside her and tires to speak to her. Zoya is feeling little better than before and she is calm now. She looks at Iqbal and asks where is she? Iqbal says relax you are at his house and you are safe. Iqbal asks her her name and she tells him Zoya Farouqui and Iqbal says My name is Iqbal Khan and you can call me Dr Khan and as soon as Zoya hears Dr Khan she says Mr Khan and remembers everything and screams nooo and faints again.

Iqbal thinks its very important that I take her to the hospital tomorrow for checkup.

It's next day morning. Zoya is awake and nurse is helping her doing the dressing on her wounds. There is no smile on Zoya's face and she is not interested in anything. She looks like a lifeless body. Iqbal's mom comes to Zoya's room and checks on her and tells the nurse to accompany her to the hospital and bring her back safely and do take care that she takes her medicine and food on time.

We see that Zoya, Nurse and Iqbal leave in Iqbal's car for the hospital and his mom reminds him to visit Haji Ali Dargah before going to the hospital and Iqbal says ok. Iqbal' asks his driver to drop him at Dargah first and then take Zoya and nurse to the hospital and nurse can admit Zoya in the hospital and start some tests and in the meantime driver can come back and pick him up from Haji Ali.

In the hotel room we see that Asad is also getting ready to go to Dargah. He has bandage on his right hand.

Iqbal reaches Dargah and tells the driver to go the hospital. There is lot of traffic on the road so there car is moving very slowly and all of a sudden Iqbal's driver hit someone's car and driver gets off from the car and nurse also follows the driver. Zoya is left alone in the car and she feels restless and she is looking towards the Dargah. She gets off the car and starts walking towards the Dargah. Nurse and driver fail to see that Zoya got off from the car.

Asad has also reached Dargah and Zoya is also there. Asad is praying and his eyes are closed and when he opens his eyes he sees Zoya on the other side of the room and she is wearing white salwar kameez and her head is also covered with white dupatta and he sees that she is injured. She had bandage on her head and arms. He quietly says Zoya and walks towards Zoya and Zoya is walking towards outside door. Asad is following her. Zoya is outside the room (where the pray) and Asad comes infornt of her and says Zoya and he is happy to see her. But Zoya is expressionless and she just looks at Asad and all those moments coming into her mind. The slap, throwing her out and then the goons. She runs from there and Asad is running after her and suddenly she collides with Iqbal Khan and Iqbal says Miss Zoya Farouqui and Zoya faints again. Asad reaches there too and screams Zoya and holds her and shakes her but she is not responding. Iqbal says we need to take her to the hospital immediately. Asad picks her up and walks towards the car. Mitwa moment guys.

They reach the hospital and in the background they are showing tests are going on Zoya. She is in MRI machine for the head scan and Iqbal telling everything to Asad about the goons fight and all and Asad is crying really hard upon hearing this. Zoya is shifted to the room and Asad is sitting beside her. He is holding her hand and crying and his eyes falls on the ring. Zoya is still wearing that engagement ring. Iqbal comes in the room and tells Asad that there is no internal injury but she is under shock and will recover from the trauma soon. And we need to make sure that she doesn't go thru any stress anymore.

Asad hugs Iqbal and thanks him for all that he has done for Zoya. Iqbal says that tomorrow morning Asad can take Zoya home. Asad informs his Ammi that he has found Zoya and will explain everything to her when he gets back to Bhopal and for now Zoya is fine. His Ammi says that that Asad don't come back home without Zoya. I saw love in your eyes for Zoya and you have to realize that and bring my daughter in law home not Zoya Farouqi and Asad says Ji Ammi.

Asad thinking about what his mom said and all the mitwa moments and how he was sad when he lost Zoya and realizes that he can't live without Zoya. He has determined look on his face and says to himself that he will not let Zoya go away from him. He also falls sleep.

Next day morning Asad wakes up hearing Zoya. She was crying with pain. Asad wakes up he is still holding Zoya's hand. Zoya realizes this and pulls her hand back. Asad asks her how is she feeling but Zoya doesn't answer back. Nurse comes and says that Miss Zoya Farouqi can be discharged now and you can go home but you have to take bed rest as your wounds are still new and you are week so you shouldn't be walking. Asad decides to stay back in Mumabi for 2-3 days more until Zoya feels better so he decides to take her to the hotel. She is wheeled out in a wheelchair and nurse helps her to settle down in taxi for the hotel.

They reach hotel and Asad tries to help Zoya to come out of the car but she doesn't accept his help and tries to walk on her own and was about the trip but Asad catches her from her waist and pick her up in his arms. They both have a eyelock and mitwa moment.

Asad brings her to the room and settles her down on the bed and give her the medicine but she doesn't want to take it from him. So he keeps it on the side table and Zoya takes it and falls sleep.

Asad arranges everything in the room and sit besides Zoya and asks for forgiveness and crying while Zoya is sleeping. Zoya wakes up after hearing him cry. Asad holds her hand says I am sorry Zoya because of me you had to go through all this. I am so sorry Zoya. He is expecting Zoya to scream at him, taunt him but Zoya is not saying anything and just looking the other way expressionless. Zoya was in pain all night and Asad was right beside her holding her hand.

Next day Zoya is feeling better and remembering how Mr. Khan took care of her so decides to forgive him and wake up with her chirpy nature which brings smile back on Asad's face and he takes a sigh of relief and shake his head in a usual style. And they head back to Bhopal and their usual life starts again.

I wanted to write more and show that Zoya doesn't forgive Asad and goes back to New York and restless Asad follows her upto New York but my timings doesn't allow me. Sorry guys.


Frieds my story ends here as I just wanted to focus on current track

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