Fan Fiction - Zoya is innocent - Part 3 on page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi friends this is my very first fan fiction and will be very short one. Kind of little sad but with happy ending and will be based on only on and for the current track then I will end it. I am not sure if anyone can write or not so please let me know If you want me to continue.

Asad throws Zoya out of the house and closes the door on her. Dilshad and Najma try to stop Asad but he is so angry and doesn't listen to them. Dilshad was worried that it's so late in the night and where will she go at this time? But thanks to Tanveer Mr Dhurender and Dolly were spying there and catch Zoya to deport her. They hire a taxi to Mumbai so that Zoya can catch her International Flight to New York ( they hire taxi because at this moment there is no flight or train going to Mumbai). And they all head to Mumbai. At home Dilshad goes to Zoya's room and she is missing Zoya. She sees her Laptop and the red light blinking. She press the play button and is shocked to see the recording ' The recording proves that Zoya is innocent ( I am not going into detail of the recording). She takes the Laptop to Asad and shows him the recording and Asad is shocked to see the recording and he throws the laptop and goes to the main door and opens the door and looks outside and scream Zoya. But Zoya is nowhere. He goes back to his room closes the door and break everything in his room and cries. Dilshad banging his door but he doesn't open the door. Suddenly he gets up and goes out in search of Zoya. He is driving off crazily to look for Zoya but can't find her anywhere. He goes to railway station, bus station but all in vain. It's already morning time and Asad is still searching for Zoya. He decides to go to Dhurendar's office . He goes there and wait for the office to be open. It's 9;00 am and people start to come to the office but Mr. Dhurendar and Dolly don't show up he checks with the reception and she tells him that Mr. Dhurendar and Dolly left for Mumbai last night to deport Miss Zoya Farouqui. He inquires the current situation and receptionist tells that they left last night by road and its 12 hrs by road so they will be reaching Mumbai in next 2-3 hrs. Asad wants to reach there before that so he decides to catch a domestic flight to Mumbai .

Precap: Asad in Mumabi Haji Ali and see Zoya from far but she looks sad and has bandage on her head and arms.




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Part 3 on Page 4

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Neets thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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66 people read but no reply. NO one wants me to continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please continue...I am anxious to know what happens further
Superb writing 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its gud 👍🏼plz continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok will post next part soon
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nice start dear. do continue. PM me when you do please
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Nice start & you so have to continue, I don't care :P and the precap, awww, she got hurt? :/
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice one...

continue it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok here is the next part.
Sorry I couldn't write full part where Asad see hurt Zoya. It will be in the next part but here you go

Part 2

Now back to the taxi.. It's still dark and Mumbai is still 5-6 hrs away. Taxi's tyre got punctured and they had to stop. Taxi driver is changing the tyre and all three of them waiting outside. Zoya is remembering the events that just happened with her. Slap from Razia and then when came back home slap from Mr Khan and then throwing her out of the house. Tears are flowing from her eyes. Dolly and Dhurendar also feeling bad for her. Zoya is thinking how can Mr. Khan do this to me. Few hours ago he did the engagement with me infornt of everyone. Scence goes in the background - where Asad is doing the fake engagement with Zoya because Mr. Dhurendar and Dolly are present there and later Zoya leaving for Ayan's engagement and Asad angry. (Tanveer was witnessing all this and created MU and called Dhurender to be be present in the night to see the end of the fake engagement). Zoya doesn't want to leave and have no option she is crying and suddenly a van comes and stops on the highway where all three of them waiting for taxi tyre to be fixed. Few Gunda type men come out of the van and give dirty looks to Zoya and offer to help Mr Dhurender and Mr Dhurender politely thank them and says no and all men look into each other's eyes and attack on Mr Dhurender and one man catch hold of Dolly and rest others hold Zoya and drag her to their van. Zoya is screaming but couldn't help herself as they were 4 of them holding her. They beat up Mr Dhurender , Dolly and taxi driver and they all are lying unconscious on the road. Zoya is taken by the men she is screaming and fighting for her life but all in vain. They come to an abandon road and stop the van and they all come out including Zoya. Zoya is in semi unconscious state but still trying to free herself. She tries to run and goes inside the forest and all of them run behind her and catch hold of her. Zoya is screaming for help. Suddenly a car stops near the van and the man inside the car is having a problem with his car. He comes out of his car so see what happened and hears Zoya's screaming and he thinks and runs towards the direction of the voice. There one of the men was about to tear off Zoya's shirt and Zoya scream again and suddenly he get's a kick on his face . We see man's face now its Iqbal Khan (I didn't know what to name him so using his real name only) He saves Zoya from them. Zoya is unconscious and badly injured because of the struggle and run she had to do. He picks her up and bring to his car. He makes a phone call from his cell phone and another car comes and take them away.

On the other side Mr. Dhurender and team is shown in the hospital and they have alerted the local police about the incident. And now police is searching for those Goons and Zoya.

Iqbal brings Zoya to his house and he is a doctor. He treats her wounds and give her an injection. He gets a nurse from his hospital to look after Zoya and tells her that let me know when she gets up.

It's morning now around 10:00 am and Zoya is having dreams of last night and she wakes up screaming. She looks really scared and not into her complete sense. She is still terrified of those men. Nurse comes running to her but Zoya is even scared of her screaming and saying don't come near me don't come near me. Nurse calls Iqbal and he comes running to Zoya's room and Zoya remember last nights fight and calms down after seeing Iqbal and faints.

Oh the other hand Asad reaches Mumbai international airport and checks the next flight by Air India to New York ( Mr. Dhurendar's office had told him that they will sending Zoya to New York by Air India and they had given him the flight details also). Check in new flight will open in next 2 hrs so Asad decides to stay there only so that he doesn't miss them. While he is waiting he is recollecting all the Mitwa moments with Zoya and then the slap and throwing her out of the house. Tears are flowing from his eyes and he is saying I am sorry Zoya. I never wanted to hurt you . I am so sorry. Asad is waiting and is time for check in . There is big line up at the check in counter but Mr. Dhurender and Zoya are no where to be seen. Asad's eyes are on the entry gate only. He is waiting for them to arrive. Time is passing by they are announcing for boarding and Asad is worried now where is Zoya and Dhurender. He somehow reaches the check in counter and finds out that Miss. Zoya Farouqui haven't checked in yet but she is booked for this flight only. Finally he see that flight has already departed . He is worried he calls Mr. Dhurender's office in Bhopal and finds out that Mr. Dhurender is in City Hospital Mumbai. Asad screams Zoya and runs for his life and reaches City Hospital. He checks at reception for Zoya and they can't find any patient with the name of Zoya Farouqui

He inquires about Mr. Dhurender and tell him to go to room 211 fl 2 c wing. He reaches there and finds Mr. Dhurender and dolly. Mr. Dhurender sees Asad and gets emotional and tell him the whole store. Asad crying now and can't believe what Mr.Dhurender is telling him. He hold Mr. Dhruender and threatens him that if anything happens to Zoya I won't spare you. Mr. Dhurender is quite and regretful and trying to console him and Mumbai police is looking for Zoya and they have already found the van . Asad leaves from there in huff and comes out of the hospital and reaches the parking lot

Edited by Neets - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part dear,..pls continue soon

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