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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!11 READ ALL parts just now.. these were just wonderful... roaming round in the circles, confession, love an dagain,,,,,,, usual shoutings... just loved it. od write moreor continue it, it ill be beautiful...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats. Brilliant ending. It's totally true that some things never change. It was super cute when zoya used her super woman gadget to enter Asad's room. My god, Asad knew that she will sneak into his room at night so he closed every access to enter his room. Hehehe... But Zoya being Zoya. He totally under estimated her skills. I was so astonished. Perfect chapter to bring a smile on my face. 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jassieg

Congrats. Brilliant ending. It's totally true that some things never change. It was super cute when zoya used her super woman gadget to enter Asad's room. My god, Asad knew that she will sneak into his room at night so he closed every access to enter his room. Hehehe... But Zoya being Zoya. He totally under estimated her skills. I was so astonished. Perfect chapter to bring a smile on my face. 👏


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aww thank you so much for reading!!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPERB!!!!! Totally Awesome-wala-ending!!! This was tooo goood!!!!👏
Thanks for the pm!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome!!!!!!!
Loved each n every bit of it :)
bful :-)
i knw d story has ended...but i request u to keep writing more stories...i love ur writing :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
K first of all sorry for commenting late I reserved the post but couldn't come back. I shopped whole day after half day work and it killed my legs
Lol


your shooo sweet for saying our name for last two updates
Peppy I loved the update it was superbbb se bhi upper lol loved zoya's new adventure

Honestly I was waiting for dilshaad and najma's teasing lol but loved it

M so going to read all the parts together. Its so amazing to read it all together as a novel even though it will a short novel lol


Seriously u should have con it I will neva get enough of ur writing
Love ya
Muahhh

Ps did u read my andolan post on pepper spray lol
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jazmeen

K first of all sorry for commenting late I reserved the post but couldn't come back. I shopped whole day after half day work and it killed my legs
Lol


your shooo sweet for saying our name for last two updates
Peppy I loved the update it was superbbb se bhi upper lol loved zoya's new adventure

Honestly I was waiting for dilshaad and najma's teasing lol but loved it

M so going to read all the parts together. Its so amazing to read it all together as a novel even though it will a short novel lol


Seriously u should have con it I will neva get enough of ur writing
Love ya
Muahhh

Ps did u read my andolan post on pepper spray lol


hanji padh liya... and i replied, as well... 😊 and i LOVE YOU TOO!!!!! tu nahi hoti... toh iss story ka kya hota???? you're the BEST!!!! 🤗 and i'll start writing again, as soon as im done with my exams! uske baad tu firse mujhe dhakka maarna... to write more n more! 😆😆😆 luv u lots, babes! muuaahhh!!!!!! 🤗
Edited by darkangel93 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update😊😊..beautiful ending❤️❤️..zoya confession was amazing..loved it❤️..please do write more os or ss or ff...loved ur writings👏..waiting for ur next work..and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lalalalalala

I cant believe its the last part of your OS

first thing I wanna comment on is definitely Ayaan you go boy!! .. great questions he asked Zoya to make her confess her love 👍🏼 he's Jahapanah six packs brother so he would have definitely broken the door if Zoya didnt open it 😎 Rabbart has done his part as being Mona's best friend and helping her realize her feelings.. he knew she loved him but he just wanted her to finally accept it herself and get out of the whole confusion.. waah Ayaan.. kya ishtyle hai 👏 I would actually love it to see Ayaan unite AsYa in the show itself 😳

Asad is so adorable 😳 awww poor him.. he'd been thinking about his confession since it slipped from his mouth.. never thought Mr.Khan would be like this after he confesses how he feels 😆 he really made me laugh when he changed his mind after he saw Zoya walk out her room 😆 he must have been shy 😆 but i felt so sorry for him after reading that he was scared about how Zoya would respond to his feelings 😔 he thought he would get rejected 😭 i felt like awww i wanted to hug him at that moment 😳

One part that also made me laugh was when Zoya tried opening the window but it was closed so Zoya being herself.. she went through the ventilator 🤣 what a crackhead! my favorite part has to be 'say my name again' ☺️ ☺️ OMG!! you do not understand how much I loved that part 😳 both of them pouring their hearts out was tooo good! ☺️ and ahhh that kiss ☺️ you got me smiling through the whole scene 😳 but then finally again in the end we get the same old Zoya 😆 I absolutely loved the ending!! 😃

Finally.. I'm glad you loved the banner 😳 wishing you all the very best for your exams 😃 thank you for a wonderful story of our AsYa 🤗

P.S - Sorry for late reply .. was knackered yesterday so I didn't read anything 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

Lalalalalala


I cant believe its the last part of your OS

first thing I wanna comment on is definitely Ayaan you go boy!! .. great questions he asked Zoya to make her confess her love 👍🏼 he's Jahapanah six packs brother so he would have definitely broken the door if Zoya didnt open it 😎 Rabbart has done his part as being Mona's best friend and helping her realize her feelings.. he knew she loved him but he just wanted her to finally accept it herself and get out of the whole confusion.. waah Ayaan.. kya ishtyle hai 👏 I would actually love it to see Ayaan unite AsYa in the show itself 😳

Asad is so adorable 😳 awww poor him.. he'd been thinking about his confession since it slipped from his mouth.. never thought Mr.Khan would be like this after he confesses how he feels 😆 he really made me laugh when he changed his mind after he saw Zoya walk out her room 😆 he must have been shy 😆 but i felt so sorry for him after reading that he was scared about how Zoya would respond to his feelings 😔 he thought he would get rejected 😭 i felt like awww i wanted to hug him at that moment 😳

One part that also made me laugh was when Zoya tried opening the window but it was closed so Zoya being herself.. she went through the ventilator 🤣 what a crackhead! my favorite part has to be 'say my name again' ☺️ ☺️ OMG!! you do not understand how much I loved that part 😳 both of them pouring their hearts out was tooo good! ☺️ and ahhh that kiss ☺️ you got me smiling through the whole scene 😳 but then finally again in the end we get the same old Zoya 😆 I absolutely loved the ending!! 😃

Finally.. I'm glad you loved the banner 😳 wishing you all the very best for your exams 😃 thank you for a wonderful story of our AsYa 🤗

P.S - Sorry for late reply .. was knackered yesterday so I didn't read anything 😳


firstly, WHY did u have to post a pic of dean, crying???? 😭 NEVER send me pics of dean OR ksg crying... i start howling away, myself!!! 😆😆😆

and secondly, i LOVE your comment, like always!! and like i told you, i know how pathetic field trips can get... and your banner was so awesome... who wouldn't love it??? it fit the story PERFECTLY!!!!! 😃 thnx for replyin, hun!!! the post felt incomplete without it!!! 🤗

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