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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

Fabulous update...loved it❤️


thank you!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Swan THAT WAS AWESOMEEE!!!!!!!!!

I love the way you drop hints as part of the story, whip them up again and bring it in at an important part!

Man this story feels like good grade fiction.

Easily the best I have read in a long time...the best FF i have seen so far.
New characters new insights into Asad and Zoya...
Love their relationship. So lovely, strong and sexy without an ounce of cheapness in it. I seriously wish the new Ayaan in the show will be like Arif.. he must look cool with a ponytail!
Hun you are fab!

👏🤗 for making my day.
Res!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sowmya18

loved it..!!

continue soon..!!1

tnx will do! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Alveena12

great update, as usual, you never seem to disappoint, i'm guessing something is going to start cooking between Arif and Najma 😉

thanks for the pm and as always please pm me again when you update, thank you


Thanks! Najma is all grown up...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Khaas

Swan THAT WAS AWESOMEEE!!!!!!!!!


I love the way you drop hints as part of the story, whip them up again and bring it in at an important part!

Man this story feels like good grade fiction.

Easily the best I have read in a long time...the best FF i have seen so far.
New characters new insights into Asad and Zoya...
Love their relationship. So lovely, strong and sexy without an ounce of cheapness in it. I seriously wish the new Ayaan in the show will be like Arif.. he must look cool with a ponytail!
Hun you are fab!

👏🤗 for making my day.
Res!!!



Thank you I do agonize a bit on the romance and threst... so that was nice to know. Abd you do sound like you really closely. Happy you liked it!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SWAN123



Thank you I do agonize a bit on the romance and the rest... so that was nice to know. And you do sound like you read it really closely. Happy you liked it!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum prt luvd irtt...awesum in prt luvd it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Asad loaned Arif a set. The showered, tidied Arif made his way to the table, and he felt like a new man. His squeaky clean fingers that worked through the dinner that day had a bunch of admirers around the table and one man's respect. Asad had a revelation that night. There was so much pain in the world that little things like a reverse in business or a weak Abbu was not to be obsessed about. Life was lot more livable and beautiful when he was more "chilled" as Zoya wanted him to be. Did becoming a father make one grow up and spare a thought for others - not out of duty but out of empathy - Asad could swear that was true! For the first time in his life he decided not to judge his Abbu. He could never like him but now he would simply let him be!



👏 speechless para
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Awesum prt luvd irtt...awesum in prt luvd it...


Thanks..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: krati5

Asad loaned Arif a set. The showered, tidied Arif made his way to the table, and he felt like a new man. His squeaky clean fingers that worked through the dinner that day had a bunch of admirers around the table and one man's respect. Asad had a revelation that night. There was so much pain in the world that little things like a reverse in business or a weak Abbu was not to be obsessed about. Life was lot more livable and beautiful when he was more "chilled" as Zoya wanted him to be. Did becoming a father make one grow up and spare a thought for others - not out of duty but out of empathy - Asad could swear that was true! For the first time in his life he decided not to judge his Abbu. He could never like him but now he would simply let him be!




👏 speechless para


Thank you Krati! I liked it too when I was writing it! All inspired by KSG as AAK.😉

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