AsYa OS: Prom Date

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another post, yeah it's an OS

My Spring break is over in a day, so I'm presenting you all with an OS

Enjoy <3

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Asad looked up at the sky; the snow was getting heavier and the sky, darker.

He pulled his hood up, covering his head from the white flakes. His breath was visible and he shoved his hands into the deepest of his pocket.

He stopped at the red hand at the sign across the road, which indicated him to stop.

Cars whooshed past a couple of seconds one after another and in a little while later the red hand disappeared and instead there was another sign telling him to walk.

He crossed the road, and smiled looking at the front yards of the housed he passed by.

Each house was set up in Christmas lights and other decorations telling everyone, Christmas is here.

There was little snowmen by the doors of some housed and others had an inflated Santa.

The cars that were parked were covered in snow.

His phone chimed, informing of his new Text message, he pulled it out and read the teaxt as he ws still walking

Text:

Hey dude prom's nxt week? Whatevr happened 2 ur date? U promised u'd ask her…

Asad smiled to himself, and shoved the phone back into his pocket

So prom's next week huh? Shit…he thought

"I'll ask her tomorrow" he said to himself

He continued walking

……………………….

She stood hopeless, while her friend tried on a thousand different dresses

"Ugh! Don't you think I look fat?" her friend Jackie complained as she checked her reflection from different angles.

"You look fine, I'm sure Bryce will appreciate anything you wear!" she explained

Jackie looked at her

"Zoe, why don't you try something out?" Jackie asked taking another dress in her hand

Zoe shrugged

"I don't know, I guess its cause I don't have a date?" she questioned her own statement?

"But you're still going right?" Jack stopped everything

"Maybe not, I mean you and Bryce go enjoy…" she put her fingers in her hair, fixing it

"What?!" Jackie put down the dress in her hand

"What?" Zoe asked confused

"You're not going? Zoe!" she whined

"It's okay really…. I don't care at all" Zoe picked up a dress, examining it

"Ugh! Look Zoe, this is last time, we'll be in high school, the last time we'll be 18, why don't you just come, and you don't need a date!" Jackie folded her arms and frowned

Zoe let out a little laugh.

"Fine, I'll go, but don't complain when I get in between you and Bryce okay?"

Jackie jumped up in glee. "Really? Aw, Zoe come lemme' help you pick out a dress!"

She pulled Zoya, and took out a dump of dresses

……………………..

Bryce stepped out of his house

"Yeah ma, okay…" he yelled as he trotted down the concrete steps.

He looked at Asad who was waiting

"You could of come in you know, it's like below zero degrees out here" Bryce said

Asad shook his head, and both started walking

"Dude, I really don't know where we're going, you didn't tell me" Asad stated

"Well you see, Jackie and Zoe are busy, with some girly things, so we…guys…are gonna catch a movie…"

Asad smiled hearing Zoe's name

Bryce smiled also seeing his reaction

"…Speaking of Zoe, did you get my text?"

Asad rolled his eyes

"Yeah, and before you even get started, let me tell you, I'll do it soon…"

"What do you say in Hindi… jaldi, okay?" Bryce added in

Asad nodded his head

They crossed the road.

………………………….

Zoya put her coat on and Jackie zipped up her Jackie. Both picked up their shopping back and yelled a thank you at the old lady in the register.

They stepped out

Jackie stopped walking, and tapped Zoya, who was too busy with her phone; she didn't know what was happening.

"What?" She asked looking up

"Isn't that Asad and Bryce?"

Zoya's head shot towards that direction, and she felt a blush on her cheeks hearing the name Asad.

"Bryce, Asad!" Jackie yelled, and both Asad's and Bryce's head turned towards them.

Zoya's eyes widened and she looked down, and on the other hand Bryce smiled and nudged Asad a bit.

Both started walking toward the direction of the girls.

"What are you guys doing her?" Jackie asked as she hugged Bryce and Asad.

"Uhh, actually we were going to the movies" Bryce replied

"..And sup Zoe…" Bryce added

Zoya smiled and managed to mumble a little "Hey"

Bryce and Jackie shared a look

"Oh shit!"

Everyone looked at him

"Ma told me to buy bread! I forgot…Asad sorry man, I gotta go"

Asad made an "Are you serious" face.

Bryce turned

"Wait!" Jackie yelled from behind, and Bryce turned back

"I also forgot, I also need bread… sorry Zoe" she exclaimed and walk to Bryce and both rushed off

"Uhhh, wow…" Asad said slowly as he turned to Zoya

"Um, you don't need bread also do you?" He asked

Zoya held in a laugh and shook her head

"Mind if I drop you home?"

Say no, say no, say no

"Yeas…sure" she replied

Shit, she thought

"Cool" He replied, while she smiled and both started walking

"So, uh, are you going with a date to the dance next Saturday?" He asked

She put her hands into her pocket and shook her head

"No, why?" she replied softly

He hesitated for a moment

"Uh, I was thinking, you see I don't have a date either…so I was thinking, would you go with me?"

She literally stopped thinking or moving.

His smile faded

"Hey what happened?"

She looked at him with wide eyes

"What did you just say?"

"I asked you to be my date, look I really like, well I have since freshman year, and I really want-"

"Yes!" she said without thinking

"Wait, what?"

"I said yes…" this time a bit lower in tone

His smile was to no bounds

She started walking, but he held her hand and pulled her back. She banged into his chest

He lowered his lips to hers and captured them in a soft kiss.

Zoya, melted like chocolate left out in the sun, while he, well he was fangirling inside….

...

DaDaDa the end

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yipeee I'm the first one to comment 😆
That was perfect :D <3
Awww Zoe n asad on prom night
If I ask u to continue will u
I actually want to see what happens wen they go for prom
I loveddd it 😳
Superb OS
Edited by Starrydee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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La La La La La La La Perfect Teenage Laoo Story! La La La La La

Such a bright smile i have on my face paste! 😳 😳 😳

Did i say i laoo you soo much my Faar wala Laaoo Far? 🤗

Perfect! 👏

Made my day 😳
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Starrydee

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Unres
Yipeee I'm the first one to comment 😆
That was perfect :D <3
Awww Zoe n asad on prom night
If I ask u to continue will u
I actually want to see what happens wen they go for prom
I loveddd it 😳
Superb OS


Thanks Starry
I don't know if I'll write a second part
But I will Think about it
<3 Thanks again
risingsea101 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

La La La La La La La Perfect Teenage Laoo Story! La La La La La


Such a bright smile i have on my face paste! 😳 😳 😳

Did i say i laoo you soo much my Faar wala Laaoo Far? 🤗

Perfect! 👏

Made my day 😳


Glad that you have smiled
Hehe, I Laoo you too 😆
Thanks Ankie <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow loved it soo much...So cute 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was such a lovely os
i have this stupid grin plastered on my face right now
people will think i have gone crazy
but this too good yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was suuuperrrbbb !!!
Loveddd it...:D
Zoya is such a cute teenager...
Plz continue it Farhana...:))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful os :-) love how Zoya was blushing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A prom night :D

This was so cute. FANTASTIC OS :)

Keep them coming. I love reading your works and sorry for being late :'(

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