AsYA FF:~:*!Kammbhakat Zindagi!*~PART 7! Page 18!

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Hi Qhians, and Fans of Surbhi, KSG and AsYA!!! 😃
This is my first FF since ages!!
I HOPE YOU LIKE IT! Please read, Like, Comment and criticize! I really hope I get lots of views as I also go and read other stories!
I personally love the work of, crazy4KASH_AR, Havokhotline and much more! I love ALL the writers!
Here are the Contents:
Contents/Index:
PART ONE: PAGE ONE (SCROLL DOWN)
PART TWO: PAGE TWO
PART THREE: PAGE THREE
PART FOUR: PAGE SIX
PART FIVE: PAGE EIGHT
PART SIX: PAGE 11
PART SEVEN: PAGE 18
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Character Sketch:
Asad Ahmed Khan: Main protagonist
A 27 year old, average heighted guy. fell in love with Zoya after a long turn of fights and arguments. A kind, handsome but stubborn man who lives with his Mother, Sister and Wife. His father lives in America temporarily for business reasons. Nickname Jerry.
Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan: Main Protagonist
A sweet but also stubborn, 24 year old girl. Fell in love with Asad after feeling insecure and jealous of Asad's friend Tanveer Niamati. Her parents were killed in a car crash when she was 6 years old. She is now wife of Asad, and five months Pregnant.
Tanveer Niamati: Main Antagonist
A friend of Asads. She has come to stay in Mumbai with Asad while she is doing some trading of designs. Her actual motive is to marry Asad and inherit his wealth. She is 24 years old. Calls Asad, Jerry.
Najma Ahmed Khan: Protagonist
Sister of Asad. 22 years old and studying to become a dentist.
Rashid Ahmed Khan: Protagonist
A very successful businessman currently residing in America for a business purpose. Married to Dilshad for 30 years.
Dilshad Ahmed Khan: Protagonist
Mother of Asad, Najma and also Zainab who is married and lives in Dehli. Dilshad is currently gone to Canada to meet relatives.
Arvind Nagpal: Antagonist
A man hired by Tanveer for her plans.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part
loved it
plz plz cont soon
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PART ONE

So here it is: 😃
Kammbhakat Zindagi
Chapter one:

Chapter One:

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Zoya sat there, shuffling her bum side to side, at the thought of criminals and their relatives sitting here on this seat before her. She blinked away the tears and put a stern look on her face and glared right at the guy opposite of her, her now about to be, EX husband. She looked at the guy who didn't give a damn of what was happening right now. Why? She thought to herself. Why was he so cold hearted. As she finally gave mercy to her droplets and let the poor tear slip down her cheek, she remembered every word said two nights ago.

*FLASHBACK*

Zoya: "You were drunk last night Asad! You forgot your religion! I give you freedom but that doesn't mean.."

Asad: "Freedom! freedom! freedom! Just stop this Shit Zoya! Ya Allah whats wrong with you! Don't think you can become all Mahaan and Sati Savitri by just letting me go out with my friends till late! I'm not a freaking Kid!"

Zoya: "Asad! I Didnt mean to be Mahaan! And don't expect me to be Asad! I just wanted you to be with me for the sake of..."

Asad: "For the sake of who? This child growing inside you! Dammit Zoya I'm not even sure if its mine or some other Stupid idiots!"

Zoya: "ASAD!" *SMACK* "How could you say that? Just How could you?!!"

Asad: "YOU smacked me? Well its not your fault its your damn parents who never taught you to respect your husband!"

Zoya: "Asad how could you? You don't even give me a chance to explain what Im going through!"

Asad: "This is enough Zoya! I've had it! We're are finishing this relationship straight away!"

Zoya: Asad! No! Please! Asad! we can... we can..we can work..." *Faints*

Najma: Zoya! Zoya! Zoya!

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Najma: Zoya! Zoya Are you Ok? Hellooo?

Zoya jumped back to reality. And there it was again. The court chairs, the Judge, and the Man opposite her brought her to her senses. Today Mrs Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan was about to divorce Mr Asad Ahmed Khan. Officially. Actually to look at it. It was the other way round. It was Asad that wanted a divorce from Zoya. She couldn't believe it. They got married 6 months ago, beautifully with all islamic rituals, and agreement from their parents. (Zoya's Stepmother just wanted to get rid of her, so she wouldnt be her responsibility) It was Pure love, thought Zoya. Then what happened all of a sudden that tore her heart into bits? She wasn't even allowed to bring Zacky (Her teddy for her unborn baby) to snuggle and sniff on into the courthouse.

The relationship between her and Asad was Love and more. Trust, Friendship and Honesty. And Zoya had no idea where the misunderstandings were created from. Zoya now sat up to hear the Judges decision after both lawyers had spoken.

Judge: "Order! Order! The court after hearing both sides has come to a final desicion. Mrs Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan and Mr Asad Ahmed Khan will not be divorced today. Mr and Mrs Khan will stay together under one roof for one month to confirm if they are willing to be separated just yet. Another court hearing will proceed one month later." *Bang*. The judge pounded his gavel really hard.

But that didnt make Zoya's hair stand on end as much as the phrase: "Under one roof for one month" did. She didnt know what to feel. Happy that she had a chance to get her Akdu back or sad that she had to deal with Asads recent stupid behaviour for another month. She felt happy for sure.

Asad also sat there speechless gawking at the judges empty seat. He was getting mixed emotions but he pressed them down and made his way out of the courthouse.

Zoya saw her Akdu leave, and as he did, She felt a slight movement inside. Just the Teeniest kick.

Zoya: "No baby, Im sorry, I can't go after your daddy. Let him go" she said softly crying and sliding her hand over her forming baby bump. Her baby was negative-five months now. And in four more months She or He would come in this world.

Allah Miyan! Thought Zoya. Is this my beautiful life with fairies and angels and a lovely soulmate like Ummi said I would have when I was 5?? I don't think so...

WILL CONTINUE!!
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Love everyone!
By Andrea
Edited by Andy_Loves_ASYA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was really gud...continue soon...nd pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continueee!! i want more of it NOW NOW NOW!!!

ohh yeah do pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey! :)

I wanna be really honest with you. When I started, I wasn't really expecting anything. So I was in for a pleasant surprise when I started reading.

This was pretty well written, yet you have enough suspense to keep us interested in the story. :D I'm quite hooked to the plot and Asad seems like a chauvinistic pig. -.-

I feel sorry for Zoya though. She has to bear the brunt of Asad's silly behaviour. -.-

Cant wait for more! Update whenever you can and if possible, please PM me. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! It ws freaking awesm. Rocking yr
cont soon nd do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update😊😊..felt bad for zoya..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME PLZZ DO CONTINUE SOON!!!!
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dis was really nice. cont soon.

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