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PART TWO UPDATED

Chapter Two:

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Najma: "Zoya its OK... Bhai Jaan is completely out of hi senses right now and I'm sure that he will realize that whatever he is doing is wrong. Really wrong! Dekho Zoya, stress matt lo, tumare bache ka kya hoga?"

Zoya: "Najma whats the use? Asad thinks that this baby isn't his. I don't know where on earth he came up with that! Najma I just can't take it! I can't take Asad being mad at me for no reason!"

Najma: "I know Zoya... Just thank Allah Zoya, Luckily Ummi is in Canada visiting Mehar Kala and Yasin Mamu, other wise she wouldn't have survived till now!"

Zoya: "I know. Aaagh!"

Najma: "Zoya! Zoya are you OK?? Zoya! Driver turn back and drive straight to the hospital! Quickly!"

Zoya: "Aaagh! Najma! ouch! Ya Allah! Aaagh!"

Najma: "Zoya is ok. We are going to the hospital now! Nothing will happen to you!"

Zoya clutched her stomach and groaned in pain. Najma's face was covered with tears and sweat.

MEANWHILE AT ASADS HOUSE:

Tannu: "Jerry, You are absolutely correct! That girl deserves what she is getting! She betrayed you Jerry! Its so obvious that she just used you for all your wealth and property!"

Asad: "Tannu please, I know OK? stop rubbing it in my face even more! By the way where is she?"

Tannu: "I don't know Jerry, but Najma isn't home also. I'm sure she must be with her."

Asad: "Did you find out about that Guy Tannu? Anything?"

Tannu went all pale and started to change the topic.

Tannu: "Jerry! You know how busy I am plus the cell that he used to call Zoya was a strictly private number. And why are you so worried? I'll soon update you when i find out something. Umm... Oh! Jerry Mujhe abhi yaad aya, I have to go and get some designs sorted. If you need anything just call me, OK?"

Asad nodded and Tannu left the room in a hurry to avoid more investigating questions. Asad couldn't believe it. How could Zoya do such a thing and then do the old-school, playing dumb act, as if she knew nothing! Asad remembered the first time he heard the message.

*FLASHBACK*

Asad: "Oh Zoya, Your cute when your preggy, and forgetful too! Looks like you forgot your phone."

Asad reached and picked up Zoya's cellphone.

Asad: "One new voice message? I'm sure Zoya wouldn't mind me hearing it, After all she is me and I am her... We are one.. Anyway! lets see who we have got"

Voice Message: "Zoya why aren't you picking up my calls? Huh? A week ago you told me that i was the real father of your un-born baby and now your ignoring me? Zoya, You came to me willingly and I know our relationship was kind of serious but I'm not taking any responsibility for this Baby! You have a husband, don't you? Now dont pester me again or I'll tell the truth to your Hubby!"

Asad dropped the phone. Tears streamed down his cheek for the first time in a decade and his fists clenched with rage. No! Zoya would never do anything like this! This was definately a mistake! There was not a single night where zoya was away from home. Or was there? he thought. Then Asad recalled when Zoya had gone with friends for two days. The day she returned, Zoya had ignored Asad for a while and was acting all mysterious. Only some time after that Zoya had revealed that she was Pregnant. Oh god! How could she do this to me?

Tannu put her hand on Asads shoulder. Asad turned to her and she wiped his tears.

Tannu: "I can't believe it Asad! I never expected Zoya to be like this! I'm sorry for eavesdropping Asad but I was bringing Juice for you and I heard..."

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Asad had always trusted Ummi and told her everything but he wasn't going to this time... Not for some stupid, careless, shameless girl like Zoya! He couldn't believe he had fallen in love with her.

Tannu was rushing to her room when someone crossed her path.

Tannu: "Tum? What are you doing here? Arvind please go from here otherwise.."

Arvind: "Otherwise what? Miss Tanveer Niamati. Maine to tumhara kaam akhir kar dala par tumne apna waada pura nahi kiya! I'm here for my money Tanveer and I've waited a long time!"

Tannu: "Oh shut up Arvind! Your money will be with you shortly, when I am officially Mrs Asad Ahmed Khan Ok? Right now go from here!"

Arvind: "You don't know me Tanveer!"

Tannu: "What Huh? Tum mera kuch nahi bigaar sakte ho! You can't do anything!"

Arvind: "Say all you want Tanveer, but you need a lot more body fat than that to be bulletproof! My one statement could send you so far from Asads life that you wouldn't be able to dream about coming back!"

Tanveer glanced around and panicked.

Tannu: "I'll do something and give you your money by the end of the week I promise! Now go from here! Please just get out!"

Tanveer pushed Arvind all the way out of the house and rushed back to her room panting and relieved. She smiled slyly and thought to herself. Poor Zoya, poor Asad... My Net has caught the shark and the whale together!

AT THE HOSPITAL:

Najma: "Zoya nothing will happen to you or your baby! Don't Worry!"

Najma kept reassuring the half-conscious and half-un-conscious Zoya, while zoya was being raced through hospital corridors.

Nurse: "Maam, Please wait here, Do not worry, Dr Shweta will check her and inform you when possible"

Najma: "But Sister! Sister please! Zoya and the baby will be fine right?"

Nurse: "I'm sorry Maam, I really cannot answer that, Please have patience and faith"

Najma: "OK Thank you sister!"

Najma watched helplessly as Zoya was swiped into a room. She went and sat on a chair close to a mother who was, every ten seconds, rushing to check her tiny baby in an incubator. Najma smiled at her love and care for her baby. Predictions were killing Najma now. She didn't know what to do. She couldn't or really had no choice to call Asad. And Ummi mustn't be interrupted at this time. Ya Allah! She thought. Please let Zoya and the baby be safe.

About 5 Minutes later the doctor came up to Najma.

Najma: "What happened Doctor? Zoya is alright na? And the baby too?! Please Doctor tell me!"

Doctor: "Calm down Maam. Zoya... The Baby..."...

TO BE CONTINUED... (cheeky smile)

Edited by Andy_Loves_ASYA - 12 years ago
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Please continue soon and pm me :-) would love to read more
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Res!

Really good update! Cleared up my doubts. :D
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Cliffyy which i hate the most! UPDATE ASAP. or else mujhse buraa koi nahii hogaa!! Did i tell you how AWESOMMEEE it is !! 😳
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Cliffyy which i hate the most! UPDATE ASAP. or else mujhse buraa koi nahii hogaa!! Did i tell you how AWESOMMEEE it is !! 😳

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And to everyone else who commented! Thanks guys!! Ill try my best to impress! :)
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Chapter Three:

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Doctor: " Zoya is fine but her baby... her baby is in critical condition. We are trying our best though and will keep you updated, Now would you please excuse me so I can continue treatment on Mrs Khan. Thank you"

Najma: "Doctor! Ya Allah please let no harm to Zoya or her Baby!"

I must call Bhai jaan. He really needs to know! thought Najma.

Najma took out her phone and dialled her brothers cell. But the line was busy.

Ya Allah what do i do now? Ill try on the homephone. Thought Najma.

Najma: "Please pick up Bhai Jaan! Please koi to uta lo!"

Tanveer is passing by and hears the phone ringing. She answes the phone.

Tannu: "Assalam u alaikum, Khan residence"

Najma: "Tanveer! Tanveer please get Bhai Jaan on the phone Please! It's urgent!"

Tannu smiled to herself and sensed something evil.

Tannu: "Najma Jerry is in his room right now and he is really busy, But you can tell me. Is there something wrong? Are you OK?"

Najma: "No nothings alright! Please come to the city hospital now with Bhai Jaan! Zoya she just kind of screamed and fainted so I took her to the Hospital! She is fine but Tanveer the baby! the baby is in critical condition!"

Tannu's eyes popped out! She remembered a conversation with Asad.

*FLASHBACK*

Tannu: "Jerry, what if Zoya's baby dies? or she has a miscarriage?"

Asad: "Tannu I'd actually be relieved. Then I could probably start fresh with Zoya you know try to patch things up. Zoya will really need me to be there with her. Im not that cruel Tannu"

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Tannu: "Ok I'll come there with Jerry as soon as possible OK?"

Najma: "Please Hurry! Thank you so much Tanveer! Ok i'm hanging up now, Please hurry!"

Tannu put the phone down and bit her lip.

Tannu: "If Zoya's baby dies then Asad. Asad would definately forgive her, and they'll be back together again! No! I won't let that happen! never. Even if it requires me to alter my plans!"

She smirked and ran up the stairs to Asad's room.

**** 15 minutes Later****

Asad: "Where is She? God damn it! I'm asking you a bloody question!"

Receptionist: "Sir if you do not tell me who you are looking for then I can't really help!"

Tannu: "Jerry calm down ok? Maam We are looking for Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan "

Receptionist: "Thank You! Ok just a second huh? uuuhh.. Yes here it is. Zoya Farooqi is.. eerrm... sorry sir you can't meet her yet. She is still in an observation room. But you may see her from outside. Please go to level three and take the second left. Then the first room is her room for now"

Asad quickly stormed off to the lifts pushing and throttling people away.

Tannu: "I'm so sorry maam, He is just really worried."

Receptionist: "I know, Pyaar main aisa hota hai Maam. It's called true love."

Tannu glared at the receptionist in envy of her words.

Tannu: "Curse you"

Receptionist: "Excuse me?"

The receptionist sat there baffled, in thinking what she had said wrong.

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Asad:"Najma How is she?"

Najma: "No change Bhai Jaan, She is sleeping but they are waiting for a sign that the baby is fine."

Asad: "Oh God!"

Asad banged his head on a pillar.

Najma: "See Bhai jaan? I knew that you could never be that cold-hearted! Akhir aap aa hi gaye Zoya aur apne bache ki khabar lene!"

Asads eyebrows loosened and he turned and hugged Najma.

Asad: "Najma I don't know what is wrong with me? Its just that i heard this voice message..."

Asad told his whole story to Najma while Najma listened in shock.

Asad: "Now tell me Najma, If you were in my place would you do the same? "

Najma: "Bhai jaan, in one way you are right but Bhai Jaan, You shouldn't believe some random person like that! He Must have done it on purpose to separate you! Now Bhai Jaan stop crying and sit down."

Tannu stood a distance away watching helplessly as everything she didn't want to happen was becoming reality in fornt of her eyes.

Asad: "I can't Najma! I need to meet her! Please!"

Najma looks at Asad in sympathy and turns to her left as Doctor shweta approaches again.

Najma: "Bhai Jaan doctor is here. Doctor is Zoya OK? The baby is fine right! "

Doctor: "See we have had no response. Its all in Gods hands."

Asad turned away and clenched his jaws and prayed that the baby along with Zoya would be fine.

Doctor: "And yours."

Asads eyes opened immediately and turned towards the doctor. The doctor smiled and Tanveer looked on quietly.

Doctor: "Mr Khan, You can see her. And maybe, something can happen."

Asad nodded and raced after the doctor.

The doctor ushered Asad in the room.

**ASADS POINT OF VIEW**

As soon as I entered that room. I could sense my Zoya's weak and faint heartbeat. I could hear her soft cries for our baby. In that instant I forgot that the world existed. The world for me at that moment was Zoya and our baby. I smiled and slowly made my way to Zoya. Each iinch I neared increased my guilt and regret for what I did with Zoya. I sat carefully beside her and ran my fingers in her long and luscious black hair. Her beautiful hazel eyes were now drooping and her courage was fighting to keep them open. She kept running her fingers over her stomach. It felt as if the moment wouldn't last but stay forever.

"Look at your stupid, Idiotic husband Zoya, He doesn't even have the guts to ask forgiveness from you. Zoya. I'm so sorry! I doubted on you and I shouted at you and I really hurt you. I'm really and truly sorry. i was so upset with the message that..." I was saying to her until she cut me off.

"Our baby Asad. I'm scared." she whispered in a voice so tiny.

"No Zoya, Nothing will happen to my baby, Nothing. OK? don't worry." I assured her.

I wiped her tears and put my hand on her stomach still praying for the baby to be alright.

It was a while before I felt a movement. It was my Baby! Our Baby!

"Zoya look our baby is fine! He kicked! did you feel it? he kicked! Zoya he Kicked! he really did!" I was so happy that I was almost crazy.

"Doctor! Doctor come quick! Please come quick!" I shouted rushing to the door.

The doctor came in and started checking for the baby's heart beat...

And guess what she did?

...

She smiled. :)

PRECAP:

Tannu: "Sab bigaar diya tumne Asad! Sab kuch! ... Now i won't spare you Zoya! I will kill you and your baby within this one month! I swear Zoya i will! or else you can change my name!"

Najma: "Tanveer?"

A/NOTE: Hope you guys liked! You may think that Wow! that was a fast track! Asad realized his mistake already! Well guys theres more... There will be more turns and twists ahead. Aage aage dekho, hota hai kya!
I felt like writing more but it is getting late here.. LOL need sleep 🥱
But I will continue tomorrow!
thanks guys! Please read/like/comment and criticize! 😃
Please bear with any spelling errors as I am half sleeping so I didn't do that well...
Also you may notice that I use the name first. (ex. Najma: "Asad")
I do that to save time! hehe I want to write full sentences but i'm too lazy! LOL
Edited by Andy_Loves_ASYA - 12 years ago
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awesome part
loved it
plz cont soon
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Hopefully Asad learns the truth soon. And nothing happens to their baby
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awesome update😊😊..loved it❤️..waiting for ur next update..continue soon..and thanks for the pm
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Originally posted by: ..vidhi..

awesome update..nd thnx fr the pm!

r u gng to put the next part today?

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Yupp today hopefully!! xD
90% sure... Lol
But If I don't then you can slap me! hehe
Thanks all for reading and commenting... 😳

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