AsYA FF:~:*!Kammbhakat Zindagi!*~PART 7! Page 18! - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update :-) love Asad-Najma part
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Kammbhakat Zindagi: UPDATED PART 4!!!

😃😳😆 HOPE YOU LIKE!! Read/comment/criticize/like/slap me!

Chapter 4:

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Asad: "Doctor please check kijiye! She is fine isn't she?"

Doctor: "Yes Sir she is absolutely ok! I cannot believe it! Its a miracle that the child survived!"

Asad looked at Zoya and smiled. She smiled back at him.

*** One Hour later, In Asad and Zoya's Bedroom***

Asad: "Zoya, I don't know how to..."

Zoya: "Apologise? Asad its the fifth time you said the statement "SORRY" and its about the fifth time i have "FORGIVEN" you!

Zoya laughed while Tanveer stood unseen spying on Zoya and Asad funny and romantic chatter.

Tannu: "Sab bigaar diya tumne Asad! Sab Kuch! Ab main tumme nahi chorugi Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan!...Ek mahine ke andar hi andar agar maine tumhe aur tumhare bache ko is duniya se katam nahi kiya na! toh mera naam bhi Tanveer Niamati nahi!"

Najma: "Tanveer?"

Najma appeared at the door behind Tannu. Tanveer nearly yelped. Had Najma heard her? Tanveer bit her lip and looked for a excuse.

Najma: "Tanveer! Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Is everything Ok?"

Tanveer sighed a sigh of relief. Najma hadn't heard her.

Tannu: "Woh main Asad aur Zoya ko dekh rahi thi! Itni der baad woh dono ek doosre se kitne pyaar se pesh aa rahe hai na?"

Najma: "Waise to sahi baat hai! Ok. Can you hold this tray for a minute, My hair is coming in my face"

Tannu gracefully took the tray with a glass of milk. She knew it was for Zoya.

Tannu: "Sure why not? Take your time!"

Najma finished tying up her hair and took the tray back.

Tannu cursed herself at letting such a good opportunity go to waste. She could have easily told Najma that she would give the milk and then add a little bit of poison to finish Zoya off! Oh well she thought. I have a better way. She smirked. And this way, Zoya will go and Asad will hate her. Then Asad can be mine! She thought evilly.

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Zoya: " Najma kitni sweet hai na?"

Asad: "Akhir behen kis ki hai?"

Zoya: "Oh c'mon Asad as if you can be that sweet! Sweet ko choro! Since i have become pregnant you think I am fat don't you! Thats why your romantic side has gone for holiday!"

Asad: "What?!"

Zoya nodded in a cute babyish way.

Zoya: "mmm hhmm!"

Zoya laughed and got up to put the glass away. Suddenly she felt that something had got her dupatta. She closed her eyes and sighed. Speak of romance and he gets romantic!

Zoya: "Asad Stop it na! Tum bhi na!"

Zoya turned to release the dupatta from her hubby's hands and opened her eyes in shock.

Asad: "Kya hua? Is everything ok?"

Asad called from the other side of the room. Then he saw Zoyas dupatta stuck in the duvet.

Asad went over what Zoya just said. "Asad stop it na! Tum bhi Na!" And he started laughing. Zoya blushed and her cheeks went pink-pink. Then she too burst out laughing.

Asad: "I'm so sorry Zoya! I just can't stop laughing! You thought it was me!"

Zoya: "Oh shut up Asad!! Get a move on!"

Zoya turned around feeling dissapointed. She hadnt said Stop it meaningfully. She was craving for a slight touch from Asad these days. The suddenly she felt two body-builder but relieving arms closing in on her. She slowly rotated, closed her eyes and gave Asad a long and passionate kiss! ! The passion was obvious as the sweetness set the kiss on fire. They finally pulled apart and stood there in each others embrace for a long time. Finally Zoya felt safe! Safe from all the dangers in the world. She felt so carefree in his Arms that she never wanted to let go! But then it happened.

They heard a very loud cry from downstairs.

Dilshaad: "Ya Alllaaah!!!!! Asad! Zoya! Come quick!!!"

TO BE CONTINUED...

A/NOTE: @MissHumptyDumpty

SOO sorry for the cliffy Ankie!!! I love pestering you don't I! Totally kidding! LOL XOXO Waiting for your update hon! 😉

Was a short part, sorry for that! I didnt have time or else i would have described the AsYalicious scene more detailed! But oh well! Theres a next time!!! Sorry for any spelling errors.

Edited by Andy_Loves_ASYA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Waah Waah Waah!!! Very good issey kehey hai! But yea i amnt concerned with
Tannu and her tricks 🤣 soo yeaa :P

Hope she hasnt done anything wrong to Najma or else i will kill her off

*runs to complete her ss* 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Love it, hope Tanveer leave their lives soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
sooo sweet..abi Tanveer kn si kramaat krne wali hai...y she mk let thm alone...wthr hre or in QH...

piche h par gyi hai...


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very nice update...plz continue soon...
Edited by shreya11mehra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Nice update :-) did you have to stop it at this point?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow amazing updte...luvd it...continue asap..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
very intresting part!
and tanveer is so evil
and loved asad zoya romance
and why was dilshaad was loudly crying
waiting for next part
plzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awesome update😊😊..loved asad and zoya moment❤️...continue soon
Edited by TANVI_SEXY - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG, i love it, read all the parts in one go, plz do pm me the next part.

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