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First of all, NEVER underestimate your work!!! By saying that it is 'crap' or 'ridiculous', 'rubbish', and all that shit, will only bring your self esteem down. And who is the reason for you feeling low? Yourself, bachcha!
Don't do that! Believe in yourself, and have faith in what you have and what you can do.
You have given us a very lovely, wonderful gift. Thanks a lot, Sadie!
Coming to their 'date' that was amazingly sweet and funny. That Gay part was which I guessed even before I read the line of Zoya smiling mischievously. 😆
There are quite some people who have experienced such stuff.
Now back to the bond these two shared. Brief, to-the-point and just the way the show is portraying. Now the show is showing the track of jealousy to which am warming up, yet. But here you did plan on showing on in reality people feel.
Asad regrets what he has done to Zoya and admits to himself that he is usually the reason behind her tears.
While Zoya forgives easily, but she doesn't forget, yet she isn't one to hold grudges. Somehow this bond between them, something that clicked so subtly between them made me smile all the while, reading it.
I loved it, and I don't care about the grammatical errors. The concept and the depth of your description is what I like.
Keep writing, Sadie, my Star!
Annie 🤗
P.S.: Congratulations again, on becoming a Goldie!
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