~Saiyaara~ an AsYa FF THREAD 1 - Page 100

Originally posted by: _Sadaf_

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Reserved!!😉</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Unreserved!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Firstly, why was this so short?? 😲Or it was only me who felt that it was a small update? </font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Now about the update, I loved it as usual.😊</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I'm loving the way Zoya is giving Asad a tough time. He deserves that for treating her like that.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">But I feel bad for Asad too😕Kya karun? Love him a lot na!!😆</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Okay so Asad wants their relation to progress but Zoya this time is not really ready for it! Hmm great! Loving the way the story is moving ahead!!😊</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I just loved the kitchen scene!! She burnt her hand & he was so worried. I could actually imagine that scene!😃</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And the best scene in today's update was Asad getting tears in his eyes seeing Zoya hiss in pain!!😭</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">You wrote it so beautifully that I actually felt that moment!! Loved that scene a lot!!❤️</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Even the ending was depicted nicely. Asad hurt with her words!! Poor baby!!😭</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I hope things get better in their relation!! 😊</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And Aaniya, my girl, you're getting bestest (That's not a word I know but can't help😆) with every update!! Loving your writing style!👍🏼</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I must say you describe sad scenes really well, unlike me, who finds it a bit hard to describe them.😆</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">The way you describe them makes me attach more to the fiction! 😳The intensity of AsYa's pain, Asad's hurt, Zoya's sadness & everything is just described amazingly by you!! Great great great great job!!👏</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Continue Soon.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And yes, a longer one else the next update of my SS can get a little shorter😆</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Love,</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Sadaf😳</font>

Short !???? :o
Let me tell you...this was the longest part I've ever written ! You can count the words if you dont believe me ! :D

Thank you sooo much ! I felt bad for Asad too ! Dont worry... Everything will be fine soon ! :)
hopefully !!!

Thanks a lottt !! 'bestest' accepted ! 😳

lol... I find it easy to write pain and difficult to write romance !! 😆

You cant blackmail me on that account !! :@ I updated twice since your last update !! :P
so, dont you dare make your update short !!! :D

Thanks for the lovely comment once again Ms.Khan ! :)

Originally posted by: me2you

<font color="#0000ff">Amazing update! 😃Lekin we had to wait for so long, kya yaar not fair😒</font>

<font color="#0000ff">I knew it that Zoya would give him a hard time to make him feel sorry and all, you go girl Zoya! Asad still does not know about her scars? He did not noticed even when they made love?</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Joh bhi ho, can't wait to read more about how Asad is going to win Zoya's hear all over again</font>.😉

<font color="#0000ff">Oh,and thanks for the PM!👍🏼</font>

Originally posted by: cappacuino5

OMG ! It just keeps getting better ! Poor Asad is trying so hard to talk to her but then again he deserves the kind of treatment he's been getting from Zoya... I'm glad he's trying to make an effort ! I want them to open up to each other n I'm eagerly waiting for Asad to know abt Zoya's burnt scars ! N I even want to see his reaction to them ! Zoya deserves a lot of happiness n I hope Asad keeps her happy ! By the way I have a question for u that since they already made love once , hasn't Asad seen her burnt scars yet ? Coz even though he was intoxicated but still they weren't exactly invisible i guess! Just a random thought though !

I just wanna tell u that I love this story so pls update it soon. I keep waiting for ur updates !!!!!

Thanks a lot for the beautiful comment !
I'm really glad that you guys loved the update and the progress of the story ! :)

I knew some of you must be getting a doubt about Asad not seeing her scar... They surely did make love but Asad was not in his senses, so he never looked at her arms so carefully and moreover it was during night, in the dark ! So he couldn't even see properly !

I hope it is clear now ! :-)

Originally posted by: AliciaZA

Excellent chapter Aaniya 😊 . I'm really loving the new Zoya who is making Asad work for her affection. So proud of her. Poor Asad is a bit lost as his begum no longer hangs onto his every word 🤣 . I cannot believe that Asad hasnt seen or felt her burn scars! Surely he would have noticed on their suhaag raat? I have a request, since your taking them 😆 . Please, when the tym is appropriate, have an Asya special Mitwa moment when baby kicks for the 1st tym:-). Cannot wait for the next update...

They never had a suhaag raat you see ! 😆

You did not even have to ask for it !! That scene is in my mind from the beginning... Just waiting for the correct time...as you said !! 😉

Thanks a lot ! Loved your comment like always ! 😳

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_

They never had a suhaag raat you see ! 😆

You did not even have to ask for it !! That scene is in my mind from the beginning... Just waiting for the correct time...as you said !! 😉

Thanks a lot ! Loved your comment like always ! 😳

Came just to have a glimpse at the QH forum for the first time and randomly clicked on your story out of curiosity. Ended up reading all the parts in one go...twice 😃 Really enjoyed it a lot! Love the progression and detail that you put into each of your updates. Thanks for writing such a good story that I couldn't help but post my thanks for it.

really awesome read your all parts in one day

Originally posted by: mochhug

But then... how did she get pregnant? Didn't he lose control one night? LOL

Lol... That night was months after their marriage ! And suhaag raat is supposed to be the first night together after marriage...! Isn't it ?

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_

Lol... That night was months after their marriage ! And suhaag raat is supposed to be the first night together after marriage...! Isn't it ?

Originally posted by: mochhug

OH! That's what you meant LOL! Yes it is😆but wouldn't he have seen her scars that night too? I mean, I'm no expert but I assume you have be entirely unclothed☺️

Your answer is there on the previous page itself ! Just above my reply to AliciZA ! :)

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_

Your answer is there on the previous page itself ! Just above my reply to AliciZA ! :)