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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved asad's wandering mind when he looks at zoya 😆

Sakim and zoya's friendship is developing really nicely! It was lovely that sakim brought food for her.

Asad's jealousy is out of control 😆

Continue soon and Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cclove

Great update as usual! Loving this story! Do continue soon! 👍🏼

Thank you!!!😳
Thnx!!!😊

Originally posted by: mochhug

Res

Unres

Huh. This asad is quiet interesting. I'm mesmerized by your story. I love how jealous he is right after trying to convince himself that she means nothing. Allah miya! Whats wrong with him? He starves her and wonders why she wants food from others? Wake up, pathar dil! :P

Loved it! :D


Thanks a ton yaar..ur comments make my day!!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sislam02

AWSM...I constantly check for your updates. I know it takes a lot but please update soon...

Thank you...i am glad u liked it..wl update sson.😃

Originally posted by: Alveena12

AMAZING UPDATE, please pm mw when you have updated the next part


Thnx... wl pm you 4 sure!!😊

Originally posted by: Asyalover

omg whose keeping eye on zoya...plz count soon

Nxt update u'll gt ur answers..it is a long update.

Originally posted by: zara1ksg

hi just caught up with all the updates now .. absolutely brilliantly written .. I want more !!!

thank you wl update soon!!!

Thanks!!!

Originally posted by: susfms1

hahaha Asad is playing very nicely ..jealousy is making him crazy

poor her he even threw her food just because Sakim was the one who brought it 🤣
the end of the chapter is very scary ..who are those two men ...so eager to know 😳
update soon please 😳


I am glad you are liking it!! Wl updt soon!!!

Originally posted by: Jassieg

Loved reading it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.


Thnkxxx a ton!!!

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Loved it loved it
Loved it loved it
Loved it loved it
Loved it loved it
Loved it loved it
Loved it loved it
Loved it loved it

Loving the jealous asad


Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you!!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI

hey first thing first...you made me feel special by dedicating this update to me...m overwhelmed!!!!

now come back to story...
can i hate asad pleaaase!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he is gettin so mean day by day..his jealousy is not bearable...
bechari zoya ...how could he just do that...!!!!
oh man your story is awesome...
please update soon!!!!!!!


Thanks !!!! Ya ya you can hate Asad bt i hope u'll love him in the next updates!!!

Originally posted by: JulieD

Thanks for the acknowledgement☺️


Another great chapter.👏⭐️ I love how you have kept Asad and Zoya's characters on similar lines with QH. Combined with your romance writing, it is a pleasure to read.
Looking forward to the next update.


Thank you!!! 😳 I am really happy that u find it worthy of reading!!😃

Originally posted by: KulfiBai

Thanks for the PM Kaya 😊 I LOVE where this story is going - can't wait to read what happens next! Also, Sakim is such a cutie 😛

Thnx.. i love sakim as well..he is a good frnd!!1

Originally posted by: Linsie

Is getting there..and please continue..good luck dear..
Thanks for updating

Thank you!!!😃

Originally posted by: great1980

Nice attempt u r really working hard keep itup but chapter should be long next time

Thnx..will try!!
Thnx!!!😊

Originally posted by: asyarocks1999

wonderful update yaar... the way you handled asad's emotions was fab... well done and thank you for the pm... update soon plzzz👍🏼

Thnk you wl update soon!!!😃

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Wow ..nicw update..luvd it..

Thanks a lot!!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
k!!!

Originally posted by: guptaaesha

Chi chi chi...shame on you asad!
Itni jealousy ke bechari zoya ko khane bhi nai diya
Itni jealousy achi to hai bas ab uski care karna shuru kar do 😉 waise start was cute asad is protecting zoya from someone following her
Nd then jealousy
And I liked her frnd sakim too,he is a sweet guy
Nice update kaya dear 😊

Thank you soo glad u are liking it!!!😳

Originally posted by: dhakdhak22

nice dear😊


again entry⭐️

Thnxxx!!!😳
Thank u!!!😃

Originally posted by: viya.mallik4eva

Great update again. Can't wait for the next. Love this FF.

Thankyou!!!😃

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Sakim is a really good friend and I love how Asad gets irritated even with Zoya smiling cause of Sakim. Wondering what this two mysterious men are up to and hopefully whatever it is, Asad will be there to save Zoya and himself !!

yup Asad wl be her knight in an Armani suit!!!😛

Originally posted by: Mehvish_fatima

Awww nc update..nd al d bst 4 ua entrace

Thank you!!!😳

Originally posted by: lovemltak13

This is awesum.. Cant wait hope it is longer nxt tym.pls pm

Thankyou!!!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Azriya

Interesting story so far, can't wait to see what happens next. Reading your jealous Asad makes me wish to see a jealous Asad on the show. We've seen a jelouse Zoya, but a jealous Asad would be an intersting reaction to watch. Can't wait for the next part.

I wanted to see a jealous asad so I wrote this!!!

Originally posted by: Enchantress

Loved it... Who are the one's after zoya. I hope she will be fine... Poor soul she is starving..

😆

Do continue soon whenever you have the time and space..

Best of luck for the entrance,...
thank you dear!!!
Dee


Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

love it but asad's kinda irritating u can't keep someone confined all day just cuz tht's person has a frnd of d opposite gender nd he isn't even sure if he likes her huh smh but it was good lord i hpe those ppl don't do anything bad or asad kicks their butt


he wl!!!

Originally posted by: sowmy18

awesome update!im starting to like jerk mode asad actually!update quickly and dont forget to pm me!im curious abt whats happning to zoya!i hope this brings asyA much closer.then we can see good side of asad!excited!

Thanks..glad that u like this asad

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

who were those guys watching asya? mystery...


and ur update was fav...asad realise that u hv fallen in love...its normal.

he wl realize..bt dheere dheere!!

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey ...

That was amazing ... As usual ;)

I love the jealous Asad but not the mean Asad ... :(
C'mon he shouldn't have pushed the food >_<

But that's ok ... ( Lol !! I'm sorry for my split personality ... ) it's just that I can't hate Asad for whatever reason ... :$

Thanks for the pm :)

Thanks!!!😆 I can't hate asad as well!!!

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey Kaya

nice update but hope it to be longer...
as always it was awesome...
but pity zoya she havent ate anything yet n on top of all so much of work load...
but its aways nice to see a very jeolous asad...
thx for the pm...waiting fr the next update...
hope the next chapter will be longer...
please continue soon...

Thnx..yes the nxt chapter is very long!!!

Originally posted by: blazingstar

wow wow wow. Just loved it like anything. Great update

thanks fr pm kaya

Thank you!!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hummi16

Wow xx amazing update xxx plzzz mke longer xxx cnt w8 4 her 2 run away xxx god knws hw asad will react xx



Originally posted by: Reyansh23

wonderfulupdatedear!!!!
continueverysoon...


Originally posted by: didlr

loved it to infinity

thanks fr pm



Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-

very awesome... pm me next time


Originally posted by: Ms.Fix-it-all

awsum updte...luved it...continue soon


Originally posted by: NVBGKY

Great chapter as always, love your writing style very much.

Jealous guys are always so interesting, just as this Asad is...what are they really feeling, why can't they express their true feelings...so much to explore.
Looks like an interesting twist coming up, who are these other people following Zoya...will Asad be her savior?
Looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for the PM


THank you sooo much!!! i am really glad you ppl like my stories!!!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Illo

Great update as always 😃 😃 can't wait for Asads reaction to not finding Zoya there 😆 😆 and if somebody else as much as touches her.. Loved that there's other people tailing Zoya as well..😆 She really is a trouble magnet 😛 😛 😛

Plz update soon and give a long update 😳 😳 😳
and thanks for the PM 😃 😃 😃


Originally posted by: ButterflyKisses

Hey! I am sososososososo sorry! 😔 I haven't been on IF for a while! But, I'm back, and I read the 3 chapters u posted while I was gone. I can honestly say, this story just keeps better and better! 👍🏼 And I luv how u update so quickly. 👏 I really like this new entry, Sakim. 👍🏼 Plz continue soon! 😊


Originally posted by: Nandiniraizaada

OMG I am loving this 👏


Gosh your writing style!!!!!!!


its as if am seeing Asad's rage if someone touches Zoya

Awesome

Like I said Carole Mortimer👏


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

damn i missed this update! i had my excuse i was travelling


anyhoo! Do i need to say how much i LOVE jelly Asad and how much I Love sakim cuz he is bringing out the jelly in him mwahahaha!

and shit what do i see *rubs eyes*
my name in the dedication list?? o.O
wow my stalkery has never been acknowledged before! *takes you in for a sadie special bear hug* 🤗

Love,
Sadie!


Originally posted by: varshificat

i still am looovin it!!

varsha


Originally posted by: Rarepearl

oh this is getting more interesting as da story's going ahead. love dis Asad, who's jealous but isn't accepting, as usual. he gets her busy da whole day n now wonders y she needs food from someone else, please thori feelings use kijye na Mr. Khan. loved the updates. do cont soon n a big big one. is Asad cuming to Zoe's rescue in the upcoming parts?



Originally posted by: Nandiniraizaada

When are you writing again?


Originally posted by: ChamakChallo91

Great work!!!


Loved asad wandering mind when he looks at Zoya 😆

Sakim is really lovely! It was so sweet of him to bring food for zoya. Him and Zoya are becoming really good friends.

Asad's jealousy is out of control 😆

Update soon and thanks for the pm :)


Originally posted by: ChamakChallo91

Loved asad's wandering mind when he looks at zoya 😆


Sakim and zoya's friendship is developing really nicely! It was lovely that sakim brought food for her.

Asad's jealousy is out of control 😆

Continue soon and Thanks for the pm :)


Thank you sooo much guys for ur lovely lovely cmmnts ..I'm sry i'm nt able to rply indivisually..bt my back is really hurting now!!!..I hope the long updt makes up for it!!! Love u ppl!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
that was reallly great
thanks fr pm:)

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