My1st|AsyaOS! LetsRun|Plz Read|Part2 on Pg4

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SIDDIQUE MENSION
A loud sound of phone ring heared nd a beautiful fair hand pick de cell up.
Deir was a unknown number flashing on screan. She wonders who might be dis. Aftr a moment she decides 2 pick it nd she do.
"HELLO"
No answer 4m other side. She again check the nu nd try to remind if dis z familiar. Bt No, she cnt remind anythng.
"HELLO"
"Tumsa koyi dusra zamin par
ho to rab se shikayat hogi,
Tumhaari taraf rukh kisi gair
ka hua to qayamat se pehle
qayamat hogi."

"ASAD!!"
Her eyes widened wid shock of a familier tempting voice cming 4m cell. Her big beautiful black berry eyes filled wid tears nd it starting roll down over her white chicks.
From other side of phone the tunning of Guitar z hearing.
"Tune zindagi mein aake zindagi... zindagi badal di
Tune pyaar yun nibhaake
zindagi... zindagi badal di"

She sat down on the couch nd held it tightly near her ear.
"Ab gawara nahin koyi aur bhi
ho jo meri tarah yun tum par
mare
Chuna to door hai ab na
manzoor hai koyi meri tarah
tera zikar bhi kare
Tune faasle mita ke ...
zindagi... zindagi badal di"

The chick slowly got up 4m couch nd step towards window.
"Teri tarif agar aaina bhi kare
tod doon main use dil mera
kahe,
Tu hai mera junoon mere dil
ka sukoon
Main DEEWANA hoon tera koyi
kuch bhi kahe
Yeh deewangi bada ke
zindagi... zindagi badal di"

She cuts de line all of sudden nd broke into the dead cry.
She cant even imagine her life without him. But Now she have to spend her life without him with a unknown man whom she hardly know.
She feels like sm one cut her heart with a knief into pieces. She wants to scream she wants to cry loud she wants to run to de grip of his arms and hide her face in his chest which z heaven for her.
But she knows SHE CANT. She cnt scream she cnt run away she cnt cry.
Some one scream 4m her inside
"ZOYA FAROOKI U ARE THE MOST HELPLESS LOVE LESS GIRL OF DE WHOLE WORLD."
A sound of Vibration broke her off 4m her thoughts.
It z a text 4m the same number.
"HEY, BABY I M SORRY TO BOTHER EW BY MY CRACKING VOICES AT THE MID OF NIGHT. BUT SERIOUSLY ZOYA I M NEARLY DEAD WITHOUT YOU. EVEN I M STARTING TO SEE YOU IN EVERYTHNG EVERYWHERE. M GONNA CRAZY. ISN'T IT?"
She held it 4 a moment nd scroll it up down up down again and again. Then she type a text,
"ASAD, CAN WE MEET NOW?"
Send it on previous number.
Withen less dan a moment a text appears on screan.
"NOW! AT DIS TIME! ARE YOU OKEY SWEETHEART?"
She again types
"HARDLY. CAN WE? I'LL WAIT 4 EW AT CENTRAL PARK."
She texted him nd wait 4 rply.
"OKEY JAAN I'LL BE DEIR IN A MINIUTE. BYE. LOVE YOU."
The last sentence of text, LOVE YOU bring her tears back. Her fingers are eager to type something but instead of it she bring dm to her check nd wipe falling tears.
"YOU HAVE TO STRONG ZOYA. YOU HAVE TO"
_-_-_
So guys dis z my 1s OS on dis forum. I know dis z lame but i cant stop my self 4m writting it.
Tell me if i'll continue it or not. Keep u'r shoes back 4 next one Plz.

With Love
~Soumya<3
Edited by Soumya02 - 12 years ago

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Aishah8 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow for a first timer pretty good
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishah8

Wow for a first timer pretty good


10x yr. Bt i think my effort gone in wrost. Here z hardly a response i got.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was interesting...
please continue soon...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow..p;reety gud but ur signature is freaking awsum
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Posted: 12 years ago
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10q u so much 4 ewr appriciation
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Originally posted by: soumyasingh

that was interesting...

please continue soon...:)


OH welcome 2 my thread. I m vry happy 2 see u here. U r one of my fav writters. 10x 4 reading dis crap. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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niceee part... write more! would love 2 read wat happens next!
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Continue soon..PM me once you do😊
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It was very beautiful. Please continue soon.

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