My1st|AsyaOS! LetsRun|Plz Read|Part2 on Pg4 - Page 2

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Nice.. 👏 Please continue 😊
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Awww...cute OS...totally loved it dear..😃 Plz pm me when u update..😳

p.s-ur signature cracked me up!!🤣
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Continue plz.. Its really nice
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Loved dis...plz cont dis one
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Wow...dis seems 2 be a diff concept n quite interestin 2...do continue asap...tysm 4 the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG

Love did song and loved all sad dailoges lol I am so eager to hear those words from his mouth man plzzzx con soon and plzzxxx do send me a pm plzzz
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Originally posted by: jazmeen

OMG

Love did song and loved all sad dailoges lol I am so eager to hear those words from his mouth man plzzzx con soon and plzzxxx do send me a pm plzzz


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So THANK YOU guys 4 ewr awsome response. M going to update it. Hope u lyk it 2 lyk previous one
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love the poetry you used. Nice.
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Chapter - 2

"WHY SHE CALLED ME AT THIS LATE?
IS EVERYTHING OK?
IS SHE OK?"
He cnt stop the rolling thoughts whick mk him more worried by tym. At last to get rid 4m those unusual thoughts he take a long breathe,
"YA ALLAHA, YEH DUA QUBOOL HO, MERI ZOYA THIK HO."
Its quite deserted. He parked his car at road side nd mk his way to central park.
No sign of a single human deir. Jst sounds of barking dogs nd cracking owls.
Letters of a board on a large steal gate, seams screaming CENTRAL PARK.
A bulb over dat z almost dead.
He slowly steped inside. Its dark may be all bulbs r dead.
He z looking around 4 Zoya. Bt seams no1 z deir. He get a bit scared.
Impetentily he screamed
"ZOYA!! ZO... ZOYA!"
No answer, No sound except flowing wind nd falling leafs. No One.
He get horrified. Sweats rolling down 4m his head, his heart runs.
He try to convince himself by telling,
"NOTHING CAN HAPPEN TO HER
SHE IS ALRIGHT. MUST BE OUT SIDE OR STUCK IN TRAFFIC. SHE IS OK. I HAVE TO CHECK OUT SIDE. MUST BE SHE IS WAITING FOR ME."
He began to run bt on way his eyes falls on a figure sitting under a tree in dark nd he stop.
He slowly steped towards dat figure.
Hey its a girl. Its Zoya!!
"ZOYA! HEY ZOE. WHERE ARE U BABY? U KNOW HOW MUCH I GOT SCARED. U ALSO DID'NT ANSWER MY CALLS. ANYWAYS LET DIS GO. TELL ME WHY DID U CALL ME AT THIS LATE?
ZOE...
ZOYA! U R CRYING!? WHAT HAPPEND WHY R U CRYING
CM'ON U CAN TELL ME"
He lift her face by holding her chin nd make her to look at him.
YA ALLAHA Her eyes r terrible red and swallen. She z crying 4m a quite long time.
He cant bear a single tear in her eyes. How can he?
These are the most beautiful eyes he ever seen. He wana to lost in them.
These pair of eyes mk him fall 4 her. These pair of eyes mk him realise, he z in madly love wid her.
How can he allow a single drop of tear to harm it by making it red and swallen! How can?
"ZO...ZOYA! TELL ME YR, M DYING. KYUN MERE SABAR KA IMTIHAN LE RAHI HO TUM. ZOYA!!
She didnt answer him bt slowly raise her hand in front of him.
He get a bit surprised. There z nothng wid out a single ring on her ring finger.
WAIT, A RING! Its a new1 and beautiful too. Its a beautiful dimond placed on a platinum base.
"KYA YEH RING TUMHARI ANSOON KI WAJAH HAI?"
She slowly look into his eyes. So innocent lyk a child hv. She cnt even think up to hurt him bt she hv 2. She wipe her tears nd tightend her jaw
"YEH MERI SAGAI KI ANGOTHI HAI. M ENGAGED ASAD!"
Silence, a terrible pin drop silence. He cnt belive his ears. World z stop 4 him everythng z calm and quite. Tears r streaming across his chicks.
Something z break in his inside.
Suddenly he laugh like a mad man. Zoya z super shocked.
"U R JOKING NA. I MUST SAY DIS Z WROST JOKE I EVER HEARD EVEN DAN U'R BAKWAS SHAYARIS."
He stop laughing nd went near her. Took her hand nd plant a soft kiss on it.
"SAY U R JOKING. SAY NA..."
"NO, M NT. ITS TRUTH ASAD. M NT JOKING. MERI SAGAI AYAAN KE SAATH HO CHUKI HAI AUR DO DIN KE BAAD NIKAH HAI. YEH ANGOOTHI USI KI NISHANI HAI..."
She z engaged! She was nt mine. She is nt mine. She will never be mine.
"AAARRRGGG"
He cant bear, Zoya will go away 4m him 4ever, to some1 else, to some1 else's arms.
No dis cnt be possible. He didnt let it to be possible.
He catch her hand in a gaze & trying pull out the ring 4m her finger
Zoya z dumbstrock at his action. She didnt imagine dat Asad love him so madly dat he cnt tollrate a single ring even.
The most succesful industrialist of Bhopal Mr. ASAD AHEMAD KHAN a arrogant cold blooded stone hearted person, her JAHANPANA SIX PACK who z famous 4 his rude behaviour; down infront of her on his knees, trying to remove a ring 4m her hand which z the o9ly symbol of her engagement!
What can be more wrost dan it will happen in her lyf?
Nothng. She cnt help bt cry impatiently.
Finaly he pull out dat ring and through it on ground, jumping over it again and again to break into piceas.
"AAARRRGGG
SHE IS MINE. WOH SIRF MERI HAI. MAIN HAR WOH WAJA KO KHATAM KARDUNGA JO USE MUJHSE DUR LE JAYEGI. KOI NAHI AASAKTA HAMARE BICH. KOI V NAHI"
"AYAAN V NAHI??"
He froze in his place.
"KYA??"
"AYAAN V NAHI" she answerd.
He z dumbstruck. Ek tarf woh jisne ek murde main jaan dali zindegi di, aur ek tarf woh jisne zindegi jina sikhaya. Ek tarf saans aur dusri taraf saans lene ki wajah...
He decided. He wipe of his tears tightend his jaw nd step 2wards her.
Zoya cn feel a strong hand around her waist whch pull her towards him. The nxt action of his z enough to gv her a another shock. He slowly down his head & brush his lips on her soft lip. Which soon turns into a passinate kiss 4 a long time.
After a while he apart 4m her, stroke her hairs behind her ear nd whisper bt loud
"AYAAN V NAHI!!"
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Phew, i did it. It take a long hour. Sorry 4 grammer mistakes. I update in a vry 1st motion and m ready 4 ewr shoes 😊

Love
~Soumya

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Posted by: sweetnandu

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Any good asya stories to read

Can anyone recommend any good asya stories to read pls.

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