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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

WoooW wooow Wooow!!!!


This is a Thrilling episode! Wooohh Wooh wooh! Lag raha tha ki i was watching QH! ooowowowwowoow!!!!!!!!

Continueee! noo latteey!

aw thank you thank you! 😃 Im glad you enjoyed it! and im writing the next part soon! It wont be late this time! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkks

its awesumm👏👏

Thank you sooo much 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohmygoddd. Why am I just reading this now? ;( you're awesome! Continue soon. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manpreet23

Ohmygoddd. Why am I just reading this now? ;( you're awesome! Continue soon. :)

haha why thank you 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was just freaking PERFECT I want this to happen

U wrote adorably...mean I cud imagine each and every point of ur story...I is such a heart felt thingy...

Thanx for pm...today I got a time and went through the inbox...I have serious REQUEST to u...pls pm me even if I don't comment...bcoz I have boards of 11th and can't cmnt...so if u pm I can check it later...plzzz...thats a sincere request
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suchishah

That was just freaking PERFECT I want this to happen

U wrote adorably...mean I cud imagine each and every point of ur story...I is such a heart felt thingy...

Thanx for pm...today I got a time and went through the inbox...I have serious REQUEST to u...pls pm me even if I don't comment...bcoz I have boards of 11th and can't cmnt...so if u pm I can check it later...plzzz...thats a sincere request

Thank you soo much!!! 😃
And don't worry about it! I'll pm you for sure! 😊 its the least i can do
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow that was mindblowing! Please update soon and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well this part is really short but hope you like it
I am sooo glad everyone liked that last part! All the comments make me soo happy!! Also wanna thank the silent readers too! 😃

PART 6:

Asad held her tight making her feel safe inside. They let go and looked at each other.

They both loved each other a lot, but had never showed it. Today they could love in each other's eyes.

Razia was in shock to see Zoya remember everything. The child who 'ruined' her life, it standing right in front of her. She turned to Tanveer, still in shock.

Razia: HOW IS SHE STILL OKAY? I THOUGHT YOU HIT HER!

Tanveer: I did! The brat just is stronger that we thought.

Zoya: excuse me Tanveer, but I may be strong, but my love is stronger than anything. No one can separate us, not even you and your dark secrets. (Zoya pointed to Razia.)

Asad: And tanveer, what did you say? You want to marry me? *Asad laughs* How can you marry a happily wedded man?

He held Zoya's hand. This brought a smile on Zoya's face

Tanveer: WHAT! You can't lie Asad. Just to save yourself, Pathetic

Zoya: He's not lying Tanveer.

Tanveer was in pure shock.

Zoya: What's wrong Tannu? Feeling Jealous? Did you really think you can rip us apart so easily?

Tanveer was more angry than ever.

Razia began to laugh out loud in the most scariest way possible.

Razia: What do you guys think, you are really smart? Ha! You still don't even know half of things of done, and half the things I can do.

Zoya turned and looked at Asad in fear. He held her had tighter to assure her that he is with her.

Razia: You may have ruined my life ZOYA (she said her name in the darkest way possible) But that doesn't mean karma didn't and won't hit you back. Your father is MY HUSBAND.

Those words stabbed her through her heart.

Razia: And because of you, I've been living in hell. If you were never born, I would have never killed YOUR MOTHER.

Zoya was now shattered. Her tears were flowing while Razia laughed.

Razia: Now, tell Asad miya to give me the phone, and I won't hurt any of you. Just give me the phone.

Zoya pulled herself together.

Zoya: I told you before. I am not weak, nor will I turn weak. And who are you to hurt me or my loved ones. You're just a selfish lady that NO ONE likes.

******back at Asads house******

DING DONG

Najma went to go open the door. It was her father, Rashid Ahmed Khan.

She moved aside so he could come inside. Dilshad came downstairs to see who came.

Dilshad: Aap? Is everything ok?

Rashid: Yes. I actually heard that Zoya is unwell so I came to visit her.

Dilshad: Oh, ok well I'll walk you to her room.

He nodded and she lead the way. Dilshad opened the door and turned on the light.
They were both shocked! She was nowhere in sight!

Najma, Dilshad and Rashid all looked all over the house but she was nowhere to be found.

Najma called Asad's cell, but he didn't pick up the phone.

Rashid: I think I know where she is.

Both Najma and Dilshad turned to Rashid.

Rashid: At the Gudiya Factory.

They all knew that if she went there, something must be wrong. They all ran outside to Rashids car and went off to the Gudiya factory.

Precap: Rashid hold the gun up to Razia.


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