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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani
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And I thought I would make it to the first page -.-

Unres :P

Okay so Annie, you chhupi rustam !
Gosh, this was beautiful ! Loved it :D
You write too well, you know ? Superb
And someone's fida over Yanni ;)

Anyway, I loved it and am looking forward for the next part
Am I allowed to trouble you for an update PM ?

Aww... No worries! Be it first page or not, I love to read all your comments! :D Hehehehe... You know, it's not a competition to be the first to comment. I like to hear you views on what I've written.

Hahahahaha... main kabse chhupi rustam nikli be? Sab toh tere saamne hi hain na? 😛

Aww... Gee, thanks, Shaili! That means a lot! 😳

Hahahaha...who's fida over him re?? Who, Who? You?😲😲 I already am! XP 🤪

LOL! You are allowed to trouble me for anything. I'll PM you for the next update. But don't pester me for updates, coz I already a busy with tests this week. 🤓

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kdramafan

@kdramafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Sweetoo can i read this tomorrow? I'm off for the day now. Have my last exam tomorrow and don't want to mess with it.

*Edited*

Finally I'm done with my theory exams. *phew*

Today's paper had been great. Hope to score good marks.

Coming back to the update.

This was BRILLIANT girl.

Zoya's back to New York?! Hmm...

You described it all. All that I feel, all that I dream.

Yanni's instrumentals. I have them all on my phone. Whenever I feel low, I listen to it and forget all my worries.

I can't describe him in words. He has that effect on me. A positive effect. An inspiration. Everything.

I side-tracked😳

AsYa's past has been bitter. Or at least i feel it so. A mere accident took all of it away. And now she sees him as a pianist. Yanni's pianist.

Waiting to know more. All the best for your exams/tests sweetoo.👍🏼 I know you will rock them!

Won't pressurize to continue. I know the life of an Architect student. Surrounded by model making and plan layouts. Do it whenever you wish to but don't forget to PM me. can't afford to miss your work.

Yours,

sweetum sweetu😳

Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: asyaforlife
Sweetoo can i read this tomorrow? I'm off for the day now. Have my last exam tomorrow and don't want to mess with it.

Oh my! Last exam?? All the Best, my Diya sweetum!!! Rock the paper my girl! 🤗

No problemo! Why ask such a question? Studies are first priority!👍🏼

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-Shormi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

its way 2 gud 2 b true annie😆...does dat evn make sense?😕...i'll tell u its seriously heartwrenching da way u hv described zo's feelings dat means u hv gained success in writing her inner turmoil so very well...bravo girl👏...bt bt bt u need 2 cont😳...wanna read asad's reaction whn he gets face 2 face wid his lady luv😉
PS-da bkgrnd tune u hv put is simply amazing😃

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

This was really different. :)

I loved the title, firstly. :D And the narration was just perfect. :D I loved it! :)

Is there another part?

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Dae_drmer

@Dae_drmer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

oho..kool!!!!!

yuh write so weelll...lovely..keep it up

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NainaAlex

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Its beautiful...waiting to know who is Zaki

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ras224
its way 2 gud 2 b true annie😆...does dat evn make sense?😕...i'll tell u its seriously heartwrenching da way u hv described zo's feelings dat means u hv gained success in writing her inner turmoil so very well...bravo girl👏...bt bt bt u need 2 cont😳...wanna read asad's reaction whn he gets face 2 face wid his lady luv😉
PS-da bkgrnd tune u hv put is simply amazing😃

😆 Yes it does!! Hahahaha... Actually you're right! It'll never happen this way on the show, and I don't mind. As long as it belongs to my dumbo brain that comes up with such stupid ideas, am okay and delighted to write more! XP

Oh my! Thanks, pal! I tried to keep it as realistic and as psychologically true as possible. It's up to you. You can't describe anything, without experience and I am trying to look into the brains and hearts of those who have gone through this. Nope. Never come across such people but a trying to decipher it in my own way and put the pieces together.

Hahahaha... I will, ras!

That is the song Truth of Touch by Yanni.

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: havokhotline
This was really different. :)

I loved the title, firstly. :D And the narration was just perfect. :D I loved it! :)

Is there another part?

:)

Thanks, pal! :D At last got to see your comment here. Where have you been?

Hahahaha... Thanks for that!

Yup, there is.😳