OS: We Were Not Meant To Be.. #2-Pg 10

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Andrea

@DreA

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

I'm speechless. WOW!
I dont know what else to say
I was in love with the description of the Phoenix rising.
Amazing!!! Waiting for the next part

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

A jiffy comment which surely doesnt convey my feelings but...
This was one of ur best OS on Asya yet in my opinion n itz only just the first part... Eagerly waiting for Part 2.

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Hey ...

That was fantastic !!!

You have drafted it sooo beautifully :D

Plz update it soon :)

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supriya.ipkknd

@supriya.ipkknd

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Ananya! yaar! That was so awesome. Poignant & Serene

I loved the way you described everything in detail and merged the past and present. I could actually visualise everything in front of my eyes. This is one of the writing pieces that blew me off.. and believe me not many do that 😆..

And the interesting part is that even after such a looong writing piece.. M still craving for more.. Do PM me when you continue.

P.S- Mere OS se apna 'Res' hatao re 😆

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Spellbound after reading the 1st part...❤️ It was soo beautiful..❤️

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blueflames

@blueflames

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

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Sophia

@sophie420

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Nice Beginning

Looking forward to the next part!

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Beautiful OS dear. I loved it. And I have a gut feeling, the pianist is Asad, right? Anyhow, it's perfect and flawless. The emotions were described wonderfully. Continue soon! :D

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fee-fee

@fee-fee

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Wow! This was so well written I feel like I should be in years ( I can't cry easily). Extremely well written very soulful- please continue and PM me!

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Firstly amazing...secondly ...fabulous...thirdly...speechless! <3 I loved every word in this OS !!! Absolutely freakiing amazing!!! Please continue writing ...and when you do ..PM me :))) Thank youuu

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