AsYa SS Part 3 : Qubool Hai ?

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

<sigh> Romance at it best. U write soo awsum yaar! I lubbed it! Zoya in silence? Guess Najma relli was too tensed to not notice. Lol. Asad was right tho.. Zoya will catch up wid his shayiris one day. XD

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

res.

OMG I haven't read d 1st n 2nd part even 😲

gotta catch up first!

will unres as soon as I will finish reading them and this ! 😳

== Unres==

Okay, finally I have read the whole 3 parts !

Babes I must say you are an awesome writer! I loved the first part which was just supposed to be an OS I guess.

I had read that before! 😆

And then the teasing... asad teasing his miss new york hoity toity!

Lolz... I Loved it!

Uff bechaari zoya, phir se musibat mein pad gayi.

But apna Akdu Ahmed Khan aa gaya bachaane ☺️

This was too good.

Aww he took the attack on himself to save her. Bahut lagi hogi

And then the CONFESSION!!!!!

It was the best since the starting!

the shaayeri was too good!

update soon now else Im gonna haunt you for update! 😈

Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

beautifully written...loved it..😊

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 30

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Awesum..
Loved dat shyari...
Thanx fr d pm

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FhatTheWuck.

@FhatTheWuck.

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Amazing! Especially

This ""Lagta tha ye hume ke ishq waqt zaaya karne ka tareeqa hai
Khushnaseeb hai hum, jo iskq se haseen humaari duniya hai

Aaj hai ye mehroom hua, ki naazuk ye dor nahi
Aaj hai ye maloom hua, mitwa, ishq pe zor nahi

Aapko chahne ki dil kar baitha hai gustakhi
Beinteha mohabbat karta hai, kuch nahi ab baaqi
Bina kiye intezaar, kar diya hai humne izhaar
Ab aap bataiye, kya aapko Qubool Hai humse aitbaar!"

Superb!

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princess_T

@princess_T

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Its was so bloody superb... I want you to continue as soon as you can... Awww..:) You sent me to a dreamland... Please continue sooonnn... And plase PM me,..Tanvi<3

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misha93

@misha93

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Thank you so much for the pm! &&&&& I absolutely loved this! Awww I locved the shaayri confession. You write well :) please continue to write more 👍🏼

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd
res

Intezaar mein aapke lage har lamha jaise arsa

Aapke vichaar aur comments ke liye ye dil tarsa !!

Suppi !! UNRES !!

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-
Shaillliii!!! My babbyyy!! 🤗

you alright now hun?! I kept wondering where you had dissapeared off too! :O And wesay bhi, how did you manage to break your leg?! :O karti kya ho behen? :O

*notices her name in the dedication list*!
OMIGOSH.OMIGOSH.OMIGOSH. I loovveee youuu! A bone-crushing hug for you! ❤️
Thankyou for such a warm wala welcome! 😃 znd thankyou for sparing ,y lifeee ! *Phew*! :P

Coming to the OS,

WONDERFUL!! ❤️ This was amazing!!! At Najma's college when some girl was hugged by Asad, i was like WHAAATTT?!! NO WAY WOMAN, TAKE THAT BACK!
But when i realised it was Nikkhat, AAAWWWEEE! ❤️ that was so lovely! Even on the show i love Nikhhat-Asad's brother-sister bond ! ❤️

the whole Asad-fighting-for-his-Miss-Hoity-Toity fiasco was amazing! The bottle thing, lovely! One of my fav scenes on the show too! 😃
AND OH OH OH OH! When Zoya was treating Asad, and he lay on his front and then quickly tossed Zoya under him scene, that was ArHi wala na? *blushes*! AAAHHH IMAGINING THE SUPER SEXY KSG AND SURBHI DO IT MADE ME SCREAM ON THE INSIDE! ❤️

Okay Shaili, woman did you write that shair on your own?! The whole verse actually?! :O ITS BEAUTIFUL!!!!! :O

What a beautiful proposal! Im gigling like a silly teenager! ❤️ --- oh wait i am a teenager :|

I LOVEEDDD IT SHAILI! IT WASSS AMAZING!!!!!! ❤️

And a big hug again for the dedicationn !!!

I WANNA SEE YOU WRITE MORE. BAS.

nad, best of luck for your exams! ❤️

Fujji ! My jaan-e-mann !! 🤗

Me fine..sorta 🤣 Yeah, gayab gayab khel ri thi 😆

Asad-Zoya ko dekh ke over-enthu hoke dance kar ri thi...and *whoosh* 🤣

Oyyee !! Already tooti hui hoon, aur kinna todegi ? Koi nai, tere liye kuch bhi - aaja 🤗

Kaheka spare ? I SO didn't want to ! Par mera ye kambakht DIL ❤️...that spared you ! 😉😆

Hahahahaha ! You think I'll let ANYONE else hug Asad ?*

*Unless and until that 'anyone's me..🤣🤣

I love Asad-Nikhat too 😳 ❤️ Yes, even on the show :D

Oye ! Bottle scene ? On the show ? Konsa ? Why dun I remember ? :O

Yaa, mujhe bhi proof-reading ke time pe wahi yaad aaya !! 🤣

OMG, I remember, vo precap dekhke I was ☺️☺️☺️ Aur jab scene dikhaya, I was SO embarrassed ke I FFed it..then rewinded it and FFed it again, slowly that time !! 🤣🤣

I did..I dunno if it sounds right though..was hoping its good enough..

Pagal !! Me too a teen btw ! 😉😆 HI5 !! \m/

Thaaankk youuu !! 🤗

I am..I can't help but write on these two..even if I know I shouldn't 😆

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: startruck
"Lagta tha ye hume ke ishq waqt zaaya karne ka tareeqa hai
Khushnaseeb hai hum, jo iskq se haseen humaari duniya hai

Aaj hai ye mehroom hua, ki naazuk ye dor nahi
Aaj hai ye maloom hua, mitwa, ishq pe zor nahi

Aapko chahne ki dil kar baitha hai gustakhi
Beinteha mohabbat karta hai, kuch nahi ab baaqi
Bina kiye intezaar, kar diya hai humne izhaar
Ab aap bataiye, kya aapko Qubool Hai humse aitbaar ?"

have you written it or was it used in the show? is it a song or something?

can you please tell me???

if its a song then can u gimme the name of it??

btw, this story was really really really amazing!

loved it to the core!

brilliant! 👍🏼