AsYa SS Part 3 : Qubool Hai ? - Page 3

Originally posted by: Rushitaa

took you long enough to update!😆
I was waiting for this! 😛 brb
this is just absolute brilliance, the way you wrote both their emotions, I could feel for them! 👍🏼
lol love the way you wrote the goon scene. 😆 typical bolly/tellywood </font>

"Mr. Khan, main aapko already bohot baar bina kameez ke dekh chuki hoon !"

"Par lagta hai abhi bhi man nahi bhara aapka!"
🤣

Thanks for the smile! You write so beautifully! 😊

Sorry yaar, I seriously had it ready aince last Saturday ! Par life beech mein aa gayi mere aur IF ke.. 💔 🤣

Vaise took you long to unres too 🤣 KIDDING. Varna tu kahegi ulta chor kotwal ko daante 😆

It feela so good when someone says they like it ! 🤪
Haha, yeah, a bit filmy 😆 Thoda to banta hai boss ;)

The ONLY reason I NEVER make my posts members only is so that more people can read it and *hopefully* smile. It is the reason I write. The feeling that you get when you come to know that someone smiled because of you - indescribable and amazing. One of the best, I must say. Thanks for saying that, you made my day :D

Missed your posts so much!
amazing os!!! sooo romantic ❤️

HOLY CRAP.

Nakkamiii!!!

Originally posted by: purplepixie

Nakkamiii!!!

useless...u still havent commented!! n then u dnt pm me yoourself!?????

matlab ki bas haad hi ho gayi!!!!!!

par main tujhpe gussa hoon,,,,Asad ya Zoya pe nahi...Mashallah...kya shayari thi...khud likhi na???

i love it i love it i love it!!

agar next time pm nai kiya na,warnaaa...(kiska dialog hai, guess karo???

Originally posted by: e_enigma

HOLY CRAP.

DUDE!

Imagine a girl that's giddy with happiness after reading this.

Yup. That's me.

Jumping around going crazy. Because you, your writing and your awesomeness made me hyper.

Breathe. Breathe. Okay.

Whew.

Great post.

Great shayari.

I love the confession.

I love that cheeky Asad.

:)

OMG

You were sick (
Hope ur feeling better. Take rest man and sorry to hear u failed the test
Done worry u will rock it next test

U gave me heart attact when u said u wont b active til June
But thank GOD u changed ur mind eh

Now I his loved the update
It was amazingly written loved the poetry man. Did u actually write that mind blowing man superb
I had difficulty reading it lol huh u actually write that good hatts off to you love

U know I thought asad will make her jealous but loved it how u changed that into so sweet.

Thank u for the pm

Sorry m typing from phone so auto correct shit and all

Omg..! Dis was jst wow..!!! I luvd it...especialy the way he confessed his feelings...luv u asya..!
U write fab...tysm 4 the pm..! ;D

It could not have a better ending.Asad's shayari killed me!!!!! Gosh...beautiful!!!!❤️