AsYa SS Part 3 : Qubool Hai ?

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Nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Awesome update :-) loved the proposal

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

Me fine now :D Well..almost :P 🤣
Chalta hai, will cope up 😉 Vaise bhi, ek experience to hona chahiye ;)

hahaha..I will be 'barely' active..barely = only 2/3 hours a day🤣🤣🤣

You liked it ?😃😃 I'm so HAPPY !! :D

No probs dear, inne sweet aur amazing comments pe 100 PMs kurbaan !! 😉 🤗

Hey
Should I call u monu ?
Seriously I loved the poetry
Ru Punjabi i guessed from the word inne lmao so Ru

And plz plz do write more

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@AdorableTrouble

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Hey
Should I call u monu ?
Seriously I loved the poetry
Ru Punjabi i guessed from the word inne lmao so Ru

And plz plz do write more

Me Shaili :D
Arre na re ! Me Gujju !
But I do speak a lot of Punjabi 😆
I love Punjabi and Urdu :D wanna learn both
Thank God you like it ! :D
On these two, I can't help but write ! ;)

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noor

@noor j

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

teh simplicity is amazing in the story without making it get too complicated the expressions are very clear and honest

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

Me Shaili :D

Arre na re ! Me Gujju !
But I do speak a lot of Punjabi 😆
I love Punjabi and Urdu :D wanna learn both
Thank God you like it ! :D
On these two, I can't help but write ! ;)[/QUOTE

Shaili eh nice name
lol i reallly thought u r Punjabi
m Punjabi buh i understand Gujrati fully man if u talk bout me in gujju on my face i will understand it fullly

peple thought m gonna marry a gujju guy lmao and i was even proposed by a gujju guy buh man marrrige is not in my dictionary

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

Fujji ! My jaan-e-mann !! 🤗
Me fine..sorta 🤣 Yeah, gayab gayab khel ri thi 😆
Asad-Zoya ko dekh ke over-enthu hoke dance kar ri thi...and *whoosh* 🤣

Oyyee !! Already tooti hui hoon, aur kinna todegi ? Koi nai, tere liye kuch bhi - aaja 🤗
Kaheka spare ? I SO didn't want to ! Par mera ye kambakht DIL ❤️...that spared you ! 😉😆

Hahahahaha ! You think I'll let ANYONE else hug Asad ?*
*Unless and until that 'anyone's me..🤣🤣
I love Asad-Nikhat too 😳 ❤️ Yes, even on the show :D

Oye ! Bottle scene ? On the show ? Konsa ? Why dun I remember ? :O

Yaa, mujhe bhi proof-reading ke time pe wahi yaad aaya !! 🤣
OMG, I remember, vo precap dekhke I was ☺️☺️☺️ Aur jab scene dikhaya, I was SO embarrassed ke I FFed it..then rewinded it and FFed it again, slowly that time !! 🤣🤣

I did..I dunno if it sounds right though..was hoping its good enough..

Pagal !! Me too a teen btw ! 😉😆 HI5 !! \m/

Thaaankk youuu !! 🤗

I am..I can't help but write on these two..even if I know I shouldn't 😆

BUAHAH! 🤣 khel liya ab gayab gayab? Hogaya shauk poora? Ab chup chhaap yahan tikki reh! 🤣

Hahahahaha hayyeee AsYa ke pyaar mei, taang hi kurbaan kardi? 🤣

Like zoya wouldve said, 'ALLAH MIYAAN, WHATS WRONG WITH YOU, SHAILI?!" 😆

iss kambakht dil ko bolo me LAOOOS it! ❤️

Hahahahaha acha chalo no more todna todana! 🤣 🤣

Kisi ko bhi nahi karnay dogi?! :O meko bhi nahi?! :O DIKHAAADIII DOSTIII TUNAY SHAILI, DIKHAAADI!! </3 SHARING IS CARING, BACHAAYYY! 🤣 🤣

aray the one wheree Zoya leaves the house and goes to a railway station and some drunken men try to molest her bu Asad comes and the fight that followed? Usmei this stupid banda was gonna break a bottle on Zoe's head but our SEXY Mr.Khan took it so his Zoe darling doesnt get hurt!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 i literally raped my replay button when i saw the precap!! And the actual scene tooo! Sooo hottt!!!

hope KSG and SJ have a scene like thaf!!!!! but teray OS ne dil ko dilasa dediya! 🤣

hahahaha yeh baatt!! Keep writing hun! 🤗 🤗

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

edited my comment on page 6 :)

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

OMG! This has to be the Awesome-est OS I have ever, ever read.

It was simply, simply amazing and worth reading, if I may say! You are a wonderful writer, and dude, am a fan of yours.

Where the hell do you get such freaking awesome ideas from? I am nowhere here. But then, it was outstanding.

I love the way you are transpiring the story, in 3 OS, and more, right? It's wonderful, and you are doing a fanta-bulous job. Hat's off to you dude. 😎

I loved, every nook and every single word of it, and am not kiddin'. It's so amazing. I am short of words, and yea, too lazy to open the thesaurus, so you need'a take in the repeated words.

Please, continue soon, and yea, do PM me. 😳

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

I wrote it 😳
ishq waqt zaaya karne ka tareeqa hai
Khushnaseeb hai hum, jo iskq se haseen humaari duniya hai
These were the lines in Asad's introductory promo 😉 ❤️
Used them..baaqi ka khud se likha..hope you liked it !!
And GLAD you liked the story !! :D

liked it??

i loved it! ❤️

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supriya.ipkknd

@supriya.ipkknd

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

Intezaar mein aapke lage har lamha jaise arsa
Aapke vichaar aur comments ke liye ye dil tarsa !!

Suppi !! UNRES !!

🤣

Aaj shaam ko padhungi mai! pakka! yaad dila dio! Abhi neend aari hai! exam deke aai hoon 😆