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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good one 👏👏👏👏👏👏 Waiting for the next part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue I hope something like this happens. Who could be better to bash Tanveer than Asad.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...its interesting. Cliffhanger par chod di Hume!!!! Please continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os👏
plz continue soon...
nd do pm me for updates😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Whoa... now datz a HUGE cliffhanger. Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
That was brilliant !!!

Whoa !! Asad already knows that Tanveer is Billo Rani ?!
I'm so looking forward to read this :-)

Plz update soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you all so much for your lovely comments, i really appreciate it. Here is the next part you all have been waiting for.

Part 2

Asad's Room:

zoya: mr. khan ap jante nai hai, woh tanveer, woh tanveer nahi hai, woh billo rani hai, kisi ne use yaha woh guriya dhune ke liye yaha bheja hai.

asad: janta ho.

zoya: nahi mr. khan ap nai jante main sach ke raho ho woh...ap jante hai?

asad: han main janta ho.

zoya: lekin mr. khan agar ap jante hai to phir apne use is ghar main kyu rakha hua hai, ap use nikal kyu nai dete?

asad: nahi nikal sakta.

zoya: lekin kyu?

asad: kyu ke agar main ne use ghar se nikal diya to main pata kese lago ga k uska is ghar main ane ka kya maksad hai ur use yaha kis ne bheja hai?

zoya: lekin mr. khan agar woh ap ki bachpan ki doct hai to ap ke saath aisa kyu kar rahi hai, aisi kon si bajbori rahi hogi jis ne use billo rani bane pe majbor kar diya.

asad: woh tanveer nahi nai.

zoya: what!

asad: han, woh asli tanveer nahi hai, tanvver to infact bhopal main hi mojod nahi hai, woh apne shohor(husband) ke saath london main hai.

zoya: lekin ap ko kese pat, i mean are you sure mr. khan?

asad: yes, in fact last month hi meri tanveer ur uske husband se mulakat hui thi kisi business deal ki waja se, tab hi hamari 20 saal k baad peheli mulakat thi.

zoya: to is ka matlab hai k apne asli tanveer ko dekha hua hai?

asad: yes miss. farooqi, main ne shayad ap ko abhi yahi bataya hai.

zoya: i know mr. khan lekin agar ap sach jante the to ap us billo ko bus accident k baad ghar kyu liye? ap ko kese pata chala k wph ushi bas main thi?

asad: woh jab main waha se bhopal ki taraf nikla to mujhe ek unknown number se call i, jab main ne phone uthaya to kisi ne mujhe jammy bulaya, mujhe laga k tanveer hai lekin bhir bhi kuch ajib sa lag raha tha, main use pochne hi wala tha k woh london se kab wapis i lekin use hi pehele usne mujhe bola k woh bhopal a rahi hai kisi client se milne apne designs deikhane ur contract sign karne, tab mujhe yakein ho gaya ke ye jo koi bhi hai tanveer nai hai kyu k tanveer designer nahi hai balke woh to ek software engineer hai. ur tab hi main ne uske chkne(scream) ki awaz unai di ur main usi raaste se gizar raha tha jaha woh accident hua to main waha gharti se nikla us ka pata lagane.

zoya: lekin ap ko kese pata ke billo hi tanveer bane ka natatak kar rahi hai?

asad: woh jab main age bar raha tha to main ne use meri taraf barte hue dekha ur usi waqt samaj gaya k ye wahi hai.

zoya: lekin mr. khan ap uske saath itna time kyu spend kar rahe hai ur uska itna khayal rak rahe hai, ap ko pata hai mujhe kitna...

asad: gi?

zoya: ah woh nai bas asai.

asad: well, in that case main ap ko bata do k us ko aisa nahi lagna chahiye k mujse uske bare main pata hai ur uske saath main gitna time spend karo ga hamare liye utna hi acha hoga.

zoya: your right mr khan, lekin apne mujhe is bare main kyu nahi bataya?

asad: kyu k main nahi chachata tha k ap ko kuch ho jai(mitwaa scene)

asad: i know miss. farooqi ke kuch dino se main ne apse bohat rudly behave kiya and iam really very sorry.

zoya: its ok mr. khan, i understand.

zoya was about to leave when asad stoped her by holding her hand.

zoya: gi?

asad: woh, ap apna khayal rakiye ga, woh billo kuch bhi kar sakti hai. ab jab use pata lag chuka hai ke ap uske bare main sab janti hai to apko nuksan pochane ki kosish zaroor kare gi.

zoya: i will mr. khan

and saying this zoya went into her room leaving asad alone

asad: main bhi rakho ga zoya.

TO BE CONTINUED




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asad knew everything from the start and then too kept quiet
Real Tanveer is a software engineer😲
Bilo Rani you will pay for this bcoz now AsYa have teamed up😃
Great update dear. Loved it. Wonder if something like this happens in the show too🤔
Thanks for the Pm and sorry for unreserving so late

Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Something nice and refreshing to read after this Tanveer drama,. !
Loved it so far p.. :) cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing...something different and refreshing from all sorts of craps in serial

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