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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Ohh Asad has to shout at Zoya for no reason. BILLO!! How I wish I could kill you?? Ugh!
The AsYa moment in Zoya's room was so sweet.
They have to over-eat. Oh poor souls.
Again a wonderful update.
Unresed my comment on page 4
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Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hahahhahahahah! Dis was so cute!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was an nice update

plz contiue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣nice i wish i could c their faces.
Nice update
Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Hey lphi just rwad all the 3 patts and trust me its

Cute in some patts and sad in some

All and all I loved the way u bought billos truth

Plz pm me wen u updat e dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you once again for your lovely comments, i know you guys are waiting for the next update so here it it.

Part 4

dilshad and tanveer left the dinning table as dilshad had to call those people who took away the doll with them while tanveer left as she had to plan her next step. Both asad and zoya had finally finish pizza and zoya was about to leave when asad caught her hand.

asad: miss. farooqi?

zoya: gi mr. khan?

asad: main janta ho ke ap bohat strong hai ur apna khayal khud rakh sakti hai lekin bhir bhi ap please kuch aisa mat kariye ga jis ki waja se ap kisi bhi tarha ki musibat main pare. woh billo kuch bhi kar sakti hai, ap use dur rehene ki kosish kariye ga ur agar kuch bhi ho to please mujhe immediately phone kiye ga. ok?

zoya: i will mr. khan, don't worry about me.

asad: i hope so(to himself).

zoya: kuch kaha ap ne?

asad: nahi kuch nahi. main office ja rahi ho.

zoya: mr. khan?

asad: gi?

zoya: mera haath(hand)

asad: what?

zoya: apne abhi bhi mera haath paka howa hai.

asad: oh, iam sorry, mujhe pata nahi chala.

zoya: its ok.

after this, asad left for his office while zoya was heading for her room when she spotted tanveer(billo) coming down the stairs in a hurry.

zoya(to her self): ye itni jaldi main kaha ja rahi hai? pata laga pare ga. lekin mr. khan ne mana kiya hai, ab main kya karo? no, main aisi nahi beth sakti, main isko follow karti ho or rasste main mr. khan ko phone karke bata do gi.

saying this, zoya started to follow tanveer(billi) and also tried to call asad but his mobile was unreachable, then she called his office and was informed that he had not yet reach so she left an argent message for him with his manager.

Asad's Cabin

manager: good morning sir.

asad: good morning.

manager: sir ap ke liye koi argent message hai.

asad: kis ka hai prasad? kisi client ka hi hoga iam sure.

manager: woh to nahi malom sir par ha koi larki thi ur bohat ghabari hui bhi thi.

asad: kon si larki?

manager: koi zoya thi, ke rahi thi ke bohat zarori kaam hai, jese hi ap i unhe immediately phone kare.

asad(thinking to himself): why am i not surprise, zarur apne liye koi na koi musibat khari hi hogi.

manager: gi?

asad: nahi kuch nai, tum ja kar apna kam karo.

manager: ok sir.

saying this, manager left the cabin, leaving a confused and worried asad behind.

asad(to himself):lekin zoya ne office main kyu phone kiya, mere mobile pe kyu nai? anyway main phone kale leta ho.

phone ringing.

zoya: hello mr. khan.

asad: yes miss farooqi, ap ne mujhe phone kiya tha?

zoya: han, mr. khan woh billo ke bare main kuch bata na tha. main abhi usko hi follow kar rahi ho.

asad: miss. farooqi, main ne apko mana kiya tha na ke ap us billo se dor rahe gi!( yelling at the top of his lungs)

zoya: i know mr.khan, lekin main kya karti, hame pata to lagana hi hoga na.

asad: lekin akele nahi, ap mujhe bhi inform kar sakti thi, hum done ek saath bhi to ja sakte the na!

zoya: oh really mr. khan? ap ko kya lagta hai. main ne ap ko phone nahi kiya hoga?. main ne ap ke mobile pe bohat try kiya lekin oh unreachable a raha tha, ab is main bhi meri galti hai? ur wese bhi, main ne atleast ap ke office main phone kare ap ke liye message chor diya tha, how smart of me.

asad: ya right.

zoya: mr. khan ap hamesha mujpe hi kyu gusa karte hai

asad: ap aisa kam hi kyu arti hai, anyway, kaha hai ap, main abhi waha par a raha ho.

zoya: main woh lal musjid wali building ke peche ho, billo ushi buliding ke under(inside) gai hai, shayad kisi se milne i hai.

asad: main a raha ho, ap please us building ke under akele mat jaiye ga, is that clear!

zoya: ok mr. khan.

saying this zoya cut the call whereas asad left for the building were zoya is.

After 30 minutes

zoya: ye mr. khan kaha rahe gai? itni dar kyu lag rahi hai inhe? kahi inke dar se ane ki waja se hamare haath se koi bara sabot(evidence) na nikal gai. Allah miya, what's wrong with mr. khan? unhe lagta hai ke main koi choti bachi ho, khud akle nai ja sakti kya main? samjte kya hai apne ap ko, jahapana six pack.

asad: kuch kaha apne?

zoya: ap!, i mean ap kab i?

asad: jab ap mujhe kose(saying stuff) rahi thi.

zoya(with worried expressions): gi?

asad: gi, ab chale?

zoya: ofcourse, main ne kab mana kiya hai.

asad: after you.

both asad and zoya made their way towards the building, it was an old building and from its condition it looked like as if no one had visited this place in years.

Inside the building

asad: lagta hai koi yaha saalo se nahi aya hai.

zoya: ur right, lekin billo yaha kya karne i hogi?

asad: thats what we are here to find out.

zoya: i know, ok.

asad: oh iam sorry, i did not know that.

zoya: mr. khan, ap hamesha mujhe ek choti bachi ki tarcha kyu treat karte hai! hamesha mujhe choti bachi ki tarha dante hai, gussa dikha te hai ur yahi nai, meri care bhi bacho ki tarha hi karte hai. main koi choti bachi thori ho.

asad: really? mujhse to laga k ab abhi bhi 10 saal ki bachi hi hai.

zoya: well, in that case...(as zoya was about to continue, asad covered her mouth and pulled her inside a room and closed the door that accidentally got locked a well)

Inside the room

zoya: uuummm

asad took his hand of her mouth

zoya: what are you doing mr. khan!

asad: ssshhh, bar dekiye.

both asad and zoya looked outside the room thought a window half open and saw billo talking to someone, the other person's back was what they could only see. it was a lady of out a middle age is what they could only figure out.

Outside the room

tanveer(billo): main ne ap se kaha hai, woh guriya mujh abhi tak nahi mili hai, phir bhi apne mujhe yaha milne bulaliya, ap ko pata hai na ke u ghar main jo meheman hai unhe mujpe shak hai, phir bhi?

lady: main bolu gi to bolo gi le bolti hai, lekin mujhe bhi ko shook nahi hai tumse milne ka, majburi hai isliye tumhare itne nakre sehen kar rahi ho, woh guriya mujhe kisi bhi halat main chahiye, samjhi tum!

tanveer(billo): mujhe pata hai, lekin main kosish kar rahi ho, jald se jald apko woh guriya mil jai gi.

lady: us meheman ka kya howa? koi ur musibat to nahi khari kar di usne?

tanveer(billo): ap uski fikar mat kare, use to main samhal lugi, bas ap apne ghar jaiye ur mere pesse(money) tayar rakiye.

lady: tumhe tumhare pesse mil gai ge, tum bas apne kam par dihan do.

saying this the lady left the place, leaving billo alone, asad and zoya tried very hard to figure about who that lady was but they were not successfull. at some point asad thought that he had heard that similar voice somewhere but just could not remember.

tanveer(billo): ab mujhe bhi chalna chahiye warna woh zoya mera pecha karte karte yaha tak bhi pohoch gai gi. ur wese bhi lagta hai ke bohat teez barish hone wali hai.

she also left the place

Inside the room

zoya: mr.khan, us guriya main zaroor kuch aisa hai jo hum nahi jante

asad: han, lekin in logo ko us guriya ke bare main pata kese chala, woh guriya to saalo se ammi ne samhal kar apne pas rakhi hai, ur us recording ke bare main ammi ne hi bataya tha, woh bhi hum ghar walo ko ur janab rashid ahmed khan ko.

zoya: ho sakta hai ke koi aisa shaks ho jo hamare hi bech main ho ur ham hi use dekh nahi pa rahe ho.

asad: ho sakta hai, acha ab hame chalna chahiye, lagta hai bohat teez barish hone wali hai.

zoya: ya, lets go.

both of them headed toward the door and when asad tried to open the door, did it not open.

zoya: kya howa mr. khan, ap darwaza(door) kyu nahi khol rahe?

asad: lagta hai ke darwaza lock ho gaya hai.

zoya: what!

TO BE CONTINUED


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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum...i luv it...do cont...n pm me if u can😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I can't wait for the next part.
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nice update...thanks for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I know iam updating really quick, put i can't help but write, i love asya so much that i want to put my thoughts of them together, even if its not true, atleast we can all enjoy after all the episodes aired this week. All those who have commented, thank you so much, it really means alot to me and don't forget to comment after this part, i hope you all love it.😊

Part 5

Inside the room

zoya(worried): ap hum kya kare gai mr. khan?

asad: don't worry, iam sure there must be another way out.

zoya: idea!

asad: no,no, no miss. farooqi, ap apna idea, apne hi pas rakhiye.

zoya: lekin mr. khan, ap suniye to sahi.

asad: boliye!

zoya: ap darwaza dor dai.

asad: what!

zoya: ya, i mean apke in six pack kuch to faida ho(giggling)

asad: of course(irritatedly)

asad broke the door open and both asad and zoya came outside of the old building.

Outside the building

asad: lagta hai ke barish ka tofan ane wala hai.

zoya: ap ko abhi bhi lagta hai mr. khan?

asad: apka kehena kya matlab kya hai miss. farooqui?

zoya: i mean ke saf saf dikh raha hai ke tofan ane wala hai.

asad: you know miss. farooqui...(zoya cutting him off)

zoya: mr. khan please, ab ap phirse mat shuru ho jai.

asad: what do you mean ke main phir se mat shuru ho, larai ap ne shuru ki hai.

zoya: main ne! apne shuru ki hai.

asad:enough!

saying this, asad sat in his car and drove off.

zoya: how mean of you mr. khan! ap mujhe akele kese chor kar ja sakte hai, woh bhi is kharab mosam main. Well, why do i even care, ap to hamesha hi aisa karte hai.

saying this, zoya also left the place as it had already started raining.

1 hour had passed, asad was driving his car with great difficulty as the streets of bhopal were already flooded while the rain had just started and it was forecast to last for 24 hous or even more. Asad opened the radio to listen to the latest news of the happenings around bhopal because of the rain and for future updates. Just then his phone rang.

ring,ring,ring

asad: hello

dilshad: asad kaha ho tum? bahar kitni tabahi(disaster) ho rahi hai ur tumhara kuch ata pata hi nai hai, main ne office main bhi phone kiya tha to manager ne bataya ke tum bina kuch kahe waha se nikal gai.

asad: gi ammi woh kuch zarori kam a gaya tha.

dilshad: aisa bhi kya zaroori kam tha tumhe!

asad: ap meri fiqar mat kare ammi, main bilkul thik ho, wese mujhe ye batai ke najma thik se ghar agai kya?

dilshad: najma ur tanveer dono hi ghar par sahi salamat hai, bas zoya hi nahi i ab tak, mujhe tum dono ki bohat fiqar ho rahi hai.

asad: kya! miss. farooqi abhi tak ghar nahi pochi?

dilshad(worried): nahi asad, pata nai kaha hai, ye larki mujhe bata kar bhi to nahi gai

asad: ammi ap fhikar mat kare, main ho na, main unhe done ki kosish karta ho ur apne saath hi wapis lao ga.

dilshad cut the call, she felt satisfied as asad always keep his word, she was 100% sure that asad will bring zoya back with him safe and sound no matter what but still she was worried for both of them.

dilshad(praying): ya Allah,asad ur zoya ko sahi salamat ghar pohocha dena.

tanveer(billo):Ameen

dilshad: are, tum kab i, mujhe to pata hi nai chala.

tanveer(billo): bas abhi abhi i khala, jab ap jammy se bat kar rahi thi. sab thik to hai na?

dilshad: kaha thik hai tanveer, tum ur najma Allah ke fazal se sai waqt par ghar poch gai, lekin asad ur zoya abhi bhi bar hai, bas unhi ki fiqar ho rahi hai.

tanveer(billo): ap fiqar na kare khala, woh dono sai salamat ghar a jai ge.

dilshad: i hope so.

saying this dilshad left leaving tanveer alone.

tanveer(billo)(to herself): shukar hai Allah ka ke ye zoya ghar se bahar hai, kuch to aram mila mujhe ur raha sawal asad ka to koi bat nai, wese bhi woh yaha nai hoga to main asani se apna kam kar sakti ho.(smiling to herself).

she left to go to her room as she was so tired after all the running.

Asad's car

Meanwhile, asad was worried for zoya, it had been 1 hour since they left that place but zoya was still not at home. he did not know what to do.

asad: mujhe zoya ko akele chorna hi nahi chahiye tha ur woh bhi is mosam main, sab meri jalti hai.(banged his hand on the staring wheel)

just then there was an announcement on the radio.

announcer: abhi abhi malom howa hai ke aina(next) 24 ganto(hours) main ye barish ka silsila chalta rahe ga, mumbai,delhi,bhopal ur kafi safi ur jaga par red warning bhi jari kar di hai, sab hi logo se darkhuast(request) hai woh apne gharo se bahar na nikle ur jo log apne gharo se bahar se woh jald se jald apne apno ke pas apne ghar poach gai, sari sarke(road) doob chuki hai ur gariya(cars) to jasise teher rahi hai, kuch ilako(places) main to light bhi jana shuru ho chuki hai, aina 24 hours hum sab ke liye bohat hi khatarnak hai, uppar wale se dua kare k hum sab ko sahi salamat rakhe.

asad(worried): kaha ho tum zoya? ek to ye gari bhi nahi chal rahi hai, lagta hai ise yahi chor kar jana hoga.

asad left his car in the middle of the road which was already half flooded. many other people also did the same as it was no use of just sitting there, they all wanted to go home.

asad: ya Allah, please zoya ko sahi salamat rakiye ga jab tak main usko nahi dhund leta please use kuch mat hone diye ga.

asad decided to go back into the same direction from which he was coming from, that where he left her and she must not have gone before him as he left immediately, he was so sure he would find her.

TO BE CONTINUED



Edited by arnavkhushi-12 - 12 years ago

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