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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Aww...sch a cute update..! Luvd it..i wish dis turns out 2 be the actual reason behind asad's rude behaviour against zoya in the serial 2...
Plz continue asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very different. This is actually fun reading this Os rather than watching this current track.
Lovely update :)
Continue very pretty soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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feeling better after reading this
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Fab update.
Something refreshing after all the tanveer crap we have to put up with.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you all so much for your lovely comments, it really made my day. Iam updating the next part and for those who want me to sent them pm then please do post it along with your comments so that i know so to sent it too.

Part 3:

Next Morning

zoya was feeling so much lighter today and felt like dancing but because of billo rani, she had to fake as if she is really sad. puting a fake sadness on her face, she headed for breakfast.

zoya: good morning phuphi

dilshad: good morning beta, breakfast ready hai, tum betho main serve karti ho.

zoya: its ok phupi, main khud hi serve kar logi.

dilshad: are you sure beta, main kar deti ho na.

zoya: main ne kaha na phupi, main karlo gi.

dilshad: ok beta

zoya: wese phupi, najma kaha hai, dikhaiye nai de rahi?

dilshad: woh uska aj paper hai na to woh jaldhi hi chali gai.

zoya: oh ok.

zoya wanted to asked about asad's whereabout but could not aske as par there plan.

Zoya(thinking in her head): yeh jahapana kaha rehe gai aj, usually to sab se pehele a kar bet jate hai par aj itni der kyu laga rahai hai?

just the asad came along with the so called tanveer(billo).

asad: tanveer betho na, kuch logi tum?

tanveer(billo): nai asad, mera dil nai kar raha.

asad: kuch to kaha lo, tumne kal raat se kuch nai kahya hai.

tanveer(billo): sach main asad, bikul bhi dil nahi kar raha hai( she gave a sad look toward zoya)

asad knew what she was trying to do, she wanted asad to blame zoya for her condition and wanted him to blast at her and so he did.

asad: dekha miss. farooqi, apki waja se tanu ki kya halat ho gai hai!

zoya: lekin main ne kya kiya hai mr. khan?

asad: ab itni bhi masoom mat baniye, kal raat ap ne jo kiya woh sahi nahi tha.

dilshad: asad please, bhol jao is bat ko.

zoya: rehene de phupi, ap kyu inhe samjha rahi hai, jab ye kuch samajna hi nai chahate.(tears in her eyes)

saying this zoya ran towards her room with tears in her eyes, she did not stop even when dilshad tried to stop her. Asad felt so helpless as he could not see tears in zoya's eyes, they always affected him but he did not have any other choice but to blast at her.

tanveer(billo): ap ko aisa nai karna chahiye that asad, bechari ko kitna bura lag raha hoge.

dilshad: rehene do tanveer, koi faida nahi hai, tum apna breakfast karo.

saying this dilshad took her purse and headed toward the door when asad called her.

asad: ammi, ap kahi ja rahi hai?

dilshad: han, kuch zaroori kaam hai.

asad: lekin apne abhi breakfast bhi nai kiya, breakfast ke baad chali gaiye ga.

dilshad: mujhe bhook nahi hai!

saying this dilshad left the house leaving asad alone with tanveer(billo).

tanveer(billo): jammy, ap to breakfast karle.

asad: nai, mujhe bhok(hunger) nahi hai.

tanveer(billo): lekin jammy...

asad went towards his room without letting tanveer(billo) finish her sentence.

tanveer(billo):(all smiling) age age dekho kya hota hai zoya, mujse takrane ka anjam to tumhe bhugadna hi pare ga. she finished her breakfast and went straight to her room.

Zoya's room:

zoya: Allah miya what's wrong with me, main jantih o ke mr. khan ne mujhe intentionally nai danta lekin bhir bhi kyu mujhe itna bura lag raha hai?

asad: iam sorry zoya.

zoya turned around to see asad standing behind her holding a plate full of food.

zoya: ap yaha kya kar rahe hai mr. khan?

asad: woh main..main woh ap ke liye breakfast laya tha, ap ne kuch khaya nahi na is liye.

zoya: that is so sweet of you mr. khan.

asad handed over the plate to zoya who immediately started to eat.

zoya: wese mr. khan ek bat pocho?

asad: agar mana karo ga to nahi poche gi kiya.

zoya: ye joke tha? agar tha bhi to it was not funny.

asad: ap chup chap breakfast kare.

zoya: wese mr. khan, ap i kaha se. main ne to door lock kiya tha.

asad: woh main...woh window se aya tha.

zoya: what! ap ur window se?(shocked)

asad: so what?

zoya: nai kuch nai.

zoya: wese mr. khan, apne bhi kuch nahi khaya na?

asad: apko kese pata?

zoya: apke face se, saf saf likha hai main mujhe bhok lagi hai. hahahahaha

asad: its not funny!

zoya: i know, i know, ye lije, main ne to kha liya hai, ab ur nahi khaya ja raha hai, ap kha lije.

asad: iam fine.

just then zoya grabed asad's hand and started to feed him, at first he did not open his mouth but then gave in as zoya was not going to give up(mitwaa moment). at the end all the food was finally finished but both asad and zoya did not notice that, they kept looking into each other's eyes. just then a knock on the door made then come back into their senses.

dilshad: zoya, dekho main kya lai ho, darwaza kholo beta.

zoya: oh no mr. khan, ab ham kya kare ge?(worried)

asad: don' worry, ap ja kar darawa(door) open lariye.

zoya: are you sure mr. khan?

asad: han.

as zoya went to open the door, asad left the room from the same window, zoya took a sign of relief.

zoya: gi phupi, kuch kam tha apko?

dilshad: tum bahar aow, dekho main tumhare liye kya lai ho?

zoya: ok phupi.

as zoya and dilshad walked over to the dinning table, tanveer(billo) also came from her room. surprise yelled dilshad cheerly, zoya was shocked and worried as to what she saw in front of her.

dilshad: mujhe malom hai ke tumhe pizza bohat pasand hai, isliye main tumhare liye lene gai thi.

zoya: lekin phupi main...woh

dilshad:main janti ho ke tum bohat upset ho lekin please tum asad ka gusa apne kahne par mat utaro.

just then asad also came out of his room and tanveer(billo) took advantage of the situation.

tanveer(billo): dekkhiye na khanla, jammy ne bhi subha se kuch nai khaya hai, din bar office main kese kam ho pai ga. please jammy ap bhi kuch kha liye, i hope zoya does not mind sharing her pizza with you.

asad(worried as he was already full): no its ok, main office main kuch kha luga.

tanveer(billo): nai, hum jante hai ap kuch nahi kai ge,( saying this she grabed asad's hand)

tanveer(billo) forcefully made asad site on the chair and handed him a plate with a slice of pizza.

Both asad and zoya looked at each othe and then the plate in which their was a slice of pizza. They both were so helpless yet had to eat while making faces which only both of them could understand








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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hehe...dis was funny...i cud imagine their expressions while eating pizza...luvd it..tysm 4 the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey ur os is really beautiful. i'v been readiing it from the start but kya hai na i use mobile net so cant post replies from dere n so m posting one here now. thanx for the pm n do include me in the future ones too.
i love dis Asad, atleast he understands Zoya n lets her know too. warna the real Asad is to getting on my nerves. u'v written the AsYa moments so nicely. i hope dey come moe close due to dis billo. i liked Asad's care for Zoya, dat he took food wid him n dat too from a Window! Gosh. he's changing man.
cont soon.
love,
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
nice update...thanks for d pm
poor asya😳... nd zoya poor girl she couldnt enjoy her fav pizza😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jab AsYa ki team ho, toh hit hogi hi na👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Good update! Can imagine their expressions when they have to eat pizza after a full meal😆😆😆😆

Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
read both the parts now and its really amazing!

good to know that asad knows tanveer's real identity!

update soon!

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