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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz continue soon ...

another awesome update

and do send me a pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Am Lovin' it! :) Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing...want such to happen in show too...


Well thanx for pm

Pls pm me next time too if possible

I could not press like button coz it states that error posting ur request...argh I hate it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pls continue dear its awsm
Edited by HoneySweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Very Interesting!!..
Will Zoya catch Tanvi out??...
Please pm me...Thanks!!..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
PART 5

Asad later came back and he found everyone sitting in the hall...all were sad and so asad continued

ASAD:ammi app ready hai chaliye hum log chalte hai..miss farooqui app bhi tayaar hai na aur apko pata hoga ki apko kya kehena hai!

DILSHAD:Chalo asad zoya! najma tanvi tum dono yaha ghar pe hi rukhiyega!

NAJMA:Nahi ammi please hum dono aayenge!

DILSHAD:theek hai cholo!

All reached the court there they saw Rashid comming...Dilshad saw rashid and started crying.

ASAD:andar chaliye ammi..come miss farooqui!

Then the judge entered and the hearing started

Both the lawyers explained there views and later called the eyewitnesses

ASAD:Uss din mei aur miss zoya farroqui vo gudiya factory gaye the waha humne Mr rashid ahemad khan ko uss lash ke sath dekha..humare aate hi vo bohot dar gaye!isse mujhe yeh lagta hai ki unhone hi yeh khoon kiya hai 17 saal pehele!

Miss zoya farroqui abb witness box mei aajaye!

Zoya was really scared asad was coming down the witness box and zoya was climbing it.Asad saw that zoya was scared so he held her hand and said "kuch nahi hoga miss farooqui"

ZOYA:Jii jaisa Mr asad ahemad khan ne kaha hum dono uss factory mei gaye the aur humne rashid khan ko uss lash ke "paas" dekha "sath" nahi..aur iska yeh matlab nahi hota ki unhone khoon kardiya.Mei bhi thi ussi factory mei uss lash ke paas aur Mr khan bhi the kya isska yeh matlab hai ki khoon hum dono ne kiya?

Asad was completely shocked how could zoya do that!

Later the judge said yeh koi joke nahi hai..yeh case bohot aage bad chuki hai par vo vahi ki vahi hai case ekk point bhi aage nahi bada hai!theek 3 din baat phirse hearing hoga!

Asad left the court in anger!Zoya was very sad seeing asad like that later all started to leave then zoya tanveer was not there..she saw that her phupi and najma were talking to rashid khan so she went in search of tanveer.
She found tanveer out that too with a lady and to her surprise it was the same lady in that house!

ZOYA:tanvi yeh kon hai?tumhari clined hai kya?

TANVI:haan zoya!

ZOYA:ji mei zoya.aur app?

THE LADY:RAZIA!appke milke khushi hui!JI mei chalti hun.

At house

DILSHAD:Mei jake aaram karti hun! najma tum bhi chalo mere sath! Aur zoya aaj jo tumne kiya mujhe bata dena vo kya tha!

TANVI:mei bhi jaati hun...!

tanvi went to her room and called razia

TANVI:yeh ladki humare liye theek nahi hai

RAZIA:Haan pata hai issiliye mei raghu ko bej diya vo dekhlega uske sath kya karna hai!

Zoya was in the hall thinking of Mr khan "kaha rehe gaye itni der hoga" she was hit to someone when she saw it was raghu singh.before she could do anything he kidnapped her!

Asad came home at 8 and found everyone tensed

ASAD:Ammi kya hua...zoya ne toh vohi kiya jo app chati thi toh abb?

DILSHAD:pata nahi ki zoya kaha gayab ho gayi hai asad..mujhe bohot dar lag rahi hai

that time asad got a phone call

ASAD:Hello

ZOYA:Mr khan mujhe bhachalijiye mujhe raghu singh ne kidnap kar liya hai mujhe,mujhe pata nahi hai ki mei kaha hun!

ASAD:App kaise call kar rahi hai?

ZOYA:Meri mobile phone se joraghu singh ne lena bhool gaya abb aapp kuch kijiye Mr khan!

asad though and later though of tracking zoya through gps with the help of her phone.

After he did that he was surprised that she was near by..so he tracked and reached zoya..She was in there house garder room where all gardening tools are there.

ASAD:zoya!

ZOYA:Mr khan...and she ran and hugged asad and even asad hugged her back..

ASAD:Abb app chaliye..while he was going by mistakes he made the boxes fall...and he didn't care and moved when the voice stopped them.

Humne rashid ko apne chal mei aase fasadiya hai ki vo kabhi uske bahar nahi aa payega!ussne vo katil nahi kiya hai par kaise kahega vo.khatil humne kiya aur jalane ko kaha bhi humne yeh kehekar ki vo factory waste hai!

Asad was completely shocked he took the doll..

ASAD:Ammi aur abbu sach kehe rahe the...vo issi doll ke baare mei baat kar rahe the aur meine unke baat nahi maani..ammi aur abbu ko kitna dard pohunchaya!aur appko,apne kaha bhi tha but mei Sorrry zoya i am really sorry!

ZOYA:Its ok Mr khan aap please sorry mat kaheyega!

ASAD:Mei aase kaise..i am sorry zoya and he kissed her forehead he hugged her sorry sorry

ZOYA:Mr khan pleasee NO

ASAD:Abb chaliye..

they reached the house and all started to ask zoya kaha thi tum bina bataye kyun chali gayi!

ASAD:ammi yeh leejiye.(he gave her the doll)

DILSHAD:asad meine kaha tha na vo gudiya yahi hai vo dekho asad mei jhooth nahi bol rahi thi..haina

ASAD:Haan ammi i am sorry!

TANVI:Asad tum isse sach kaise maan sakte ho kya pata yeh jhooth ho

ASAD:Tanvi please..meri ammi ne iske baare mei pehele hi bata diya tha aur zoya bhi dhund rahi thi issi!

TANVI:Kya pata asad..tumhari ammi jhooth bhi bol sakti hai na..kya pata zoya ne unko jhooth bolne ke liye kaha ho?

ZOYA DILSHAD:TANVI TUM AASE KAISE SOCH SAKTI HO?

ASAD:TANVI U HAVE CROSSED YOUR LIMITS TUM MERI AMMI AUR ZOYA KE BARE MEI AASE KAISE BOL SAKTI HO?

how was it? please do comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suchishah

Beautiful...continue soon


mujhe laga "ki yaar koi comment nahi kar raha shayad kisi ko pasand nahi aaya n all" u made me happy anyways thanks..will continue sooon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Thi is getting more and more interesting... Tanveer started showing her true colors... Continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Thanks guys..glad that u all liked it,will updated soon 😊
Edited by cyndu_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for those sweet reply means a lot to me 😊
part 6 and 7 comming sooon 😃

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